YuNa POEMS: Updated - 25/2 pg 15 Sealed Lips - Page 12

koolaries4

@koolaries4

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
@MJ...the only reason my os turns out good are cause
sumi is awsome writer and have witty sense of humor

but you work on your own and come up with these

amazing ideas and all the emotions that you bring

out in your poems and OS are just amazing...

all we write is abt Mac in boxers being stupid, Sid being

confused, Yuvi being mean/romantic, Naina being

bossy towards Yuvi and Tammy being back with Sid

but you hun go beyond that. you bring out emotions

of pain, hurt, love, laugh, betryal etc

Lol Sneha.. but your work is more efficient because you check each others works lol.. i have to wait for a few days before rechecking my work and then post it.. it takes me aggeeeessssss.... and both of you conmbine your talens = maha talent and superb work!! 😃

Thanks alot for your kind comments ... am glad you like the poems!! 😊

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tushtih7
MJ... loved ur lines

"now its her love that i feel"

... n this is my favourite line

happy atleast i get to feel about yuvi naina luv here...

thanxxx for dat..

Thanks Yami.. am glad you liked it!! I can imagine, as i feel the same way.. its sooo annoying that there are hardly and YuNa scenes!! lol.. and you are welcome!! 😊

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

@MJ...you can send to me to check your

work, i do it for sumi all the time and if

doesnt send me then i keep bugging

her abt the mistkaes she made lol

and yes we tend to get whacko

whenever we are together which

all the time lol

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
@MJ...you can send to me to check your
work, i do it for sumi all the time and if

doesnt send me then i keep bugging

her abt the mistkaes she made lol

and yes we tend to get whacko

whenever we are together which

all the time lol

Thanks for the lovely Offer Sneha.. i will do so when i am running out of time.. lol.. first i have to write the FF! 😆

And Whacko is goood.. very goood, instead of being boring.. lol😆

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys.. find my new poem on YuNa highlighting Yuvi;s fear before he told Naina the truth.

Sealed lips..

My lips are sealed,
from the pain i feel,
my past is now here,
ready to destroy,
everything that is dear.

Yet i remain silent,
not speaking the truth,
the consquences of which,
i shall have to endure.

She knows not my identity,
for i have lied to all,
about my reality.
I was here for a reason,
and stayed for a season,
and then i planned to go away,
yet because of you,
i stayed back,
Naina, my sunshine ray.

Comments and criticisms welcome,

MJ

xxx

Edited by koolaries4 - 14 years ago

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Sofna

@Sofna

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awwwwwww MJ wer hav u bn??? Mssd u 🤗

Lovely!!!

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 years ago

wah mj nice one lady luk's like yuna r done wid ur poem's touch up!!! lubd da last 6 lines.........

god bless u n gud luck 4r xamzzz

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Supriya

@sups2222

Goldie

Posted: 14 years ago

MISSSSSEDDDDDDD u MJ pehale pehale give me BIG hug*hugs MJ n give her chocolate 😉*
Wow yuvi must have been felt the same way when he hid the truth from naina n have to face her everyday with this guilt.With his just this one action of hidding his identity from her made him moore agressive n chichua hehe........
Yuvi have suffred harder most in his life.His life is not a chocolate cake but he found his chocolateness in naina n his life become more chocolaty after naina came into his life....well naturally yuvi dunt want to loose his chococlate she is now his EVERTHING n waise bhi aajkal chocolate i mean caring, beautiful, innocent, stunning, cutehair nabd walle n chocolaty chocolate milana mushkil ho gaya hai 😉 ..LOved foll lines:

I was here for a reason,
and stayed for a season, (wow MJ this was the best 😳)
and then i planned to go away,
yet because of you,
i stayed back,
Naina, my sunshine ray.(M$E DAFFOR N CHOCOLATY BAKERY)

P.S. have eaten loads of chocolate so dunt mind my obsessive use of chocolate in comment n do pm me when u compose any YuNa poem.

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352444

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

i want more poems lol plzzzzz update will reply on each later

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