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DMG FF: Prem Ki Naiyya Prt 13 Pg 45 4/6/'11

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Hey guys...this is a new DMG fanfic that me (Rhea) and my friend Archi are starting. It is a sequel of the Abhi-Nikki fanfic: Hum Tum. You dont necessary have to read that fanfic to understand this one. However, there are a few things mentioned in that fanfic that will show up here. Smile So the link to Hum Tum is posted below, incase you want to read it. We hope you this Prem Ki Naiyya as much as or even more than you liked Hum Tum. Big smileTongue
 
 
Please do read and comment!
 
Index:
prologue: pg 1
part 1: pg. 5, 9
Part 2: pg 11
Part 3: pg 13
Part 4: pg 15
Part 5: pg 17, 20
Part 6: pg 22
Part 7: pg 25
Part 8: pg 27
Part 9: pg 31
Part 10: pg 37
Part 11: pg 38
Part 12: pg 40, 41, 44
Part 13: pg 45


Edited by Rhea256 - 04 June 2011 at 5:35pm

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Prologue

 

Rahul and Muskaan hurried through the doors of Sanjeevni as fast as they could.

 

"Abhi!" Muskaan exclaimed. "How is '"

 

"Muskaan!" Abhi interrupted. "Tumhe aisi halat mein yahan nahin aana chahiye tha."

 

"Oh don't be stupid, Abhi!" Muskaan retorted back. "I'm completely fine. Aur waise bhi'Rahul hai na?"

 

Rahul ignored the conversation completely and asked. "Armaan aaya Abhi?"

 

"Nahin'par uska phone aaya tha 2 minute pehle," Abhi replied. "He is on his way with Karan."

 

"Thik hai'" Rahul sighed. "How is she?"

 

Abhi looked down and took deep breaths.

 

"Pata nahin'" he said slowly. "Dr. Keerti uske pas hai."

 

"Dr. Keerti raat ke do baje Sanjeevni mein?" Muskaan asked.

 

"Woh aur Dr. Shubhankar humare ghar pe the jab ye hua tha," Abhi explained.

 

As Rahul was about to go ask Abhi more questions, Armaan ran in the lounge.

 

"Baacha kahan hai?" Abhi asked worried.

 

"Woh'Papa ke ghar use chod aaya," Armaan answered looking around.

 

"Ridhima kahan hai? She left like hour ago."

 

"Woh ander hai'she's assisting Dr. Keerti."

 

Armaan and Rahul looked above the doors of the operation theatre and saw the red light turned on.

 

Armaan walked over to Abhi and put his hand on Abhi's shoulder. "Yaar don't worry. Kuch nahin hoga."

 

Abhi sat down on a chair and buried his face in his hands. "Mujhe bahut daar lag raha hai. Agar kuch ho gaya to?"

 

"Waise hua kyat ha, Abhi?" Rahul asked slowly.

 

"I don't know. Same symptoms as usual. Usse bahut bhukhar tha'aur she was sweating a lot," Abhi answered. "So I called Dr. Keerti and I told her that she should come and check. And Dr. Keetri and Dr. Shubhankar brought her to the hospital."

 

"I am so scared," Abhi repeated with tears falling from his eyes. "Mein usske bina kaise jee sakunga?"

 

Suddenly, the red light turned off and Rahul looked up. "Abhi!" he exclaimed. "The light!"

 

Abhi quickly stood up and walked towards the operation theatre doors as Dr. Keerti walked out.

 

"Kya hua, doctor?" Abhi asked impatiently. "Woh thik hai na?"



Edited by Rhea256 - 10 January 2010 at 2:13pm

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
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*EDIT*
omg....i posted this message b4 i got ur pm!!! LOL
i hope nothing happened to Kavya....or Nikki!
hang on...which one is he talking about????? Confused
update soon...waiting till then.....
im reading Hum Tum all over again....as noone's updating their ff's!!! Embarrassed
xoxoxoxoxo,
sheena Embarrassed

Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 10 January 2010 at 2:29pm

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Hey Rhea,
very well written. exactly how we planned it *evil smile*.
lol... i am so excited!!
only if i didn't have an essay to finish, i would finish writing the first part. lol
but it will be up soon.
Archi


Edited by -Archi- - 10 January 2010 at 2:48pm

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
hi!!
im glad that yu guys already started the sequel...
cant wait for the nxt update!
i hope nothin bad is gonna happen..
cont soon =)
HiNaL

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by basket_101

hi!!
im glad that yu guys already started the sequel...
cant wait for the nxt update!
i hope nothin bad is gonna happen..
cont soon =)
HiNaL
 
thanks Hinal! Archi is the 1st one updating this time. Big smile
and she will do so soon...hope you like this one as much as Hum Tum!

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
hey,
sounds interesting.do come up with the next update asp.
and pm me.
 
oochita.

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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
Interesting prologue!!!
 
Glad you are continuing this....But Nikki in the hospital again!!!! no plz!! update soon!!

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