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Posted: 20 March 2010 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM olive_green!

That was a unique representation of what could have been a rather cliche situation, I really enjoyed the attention to details that would most commonly be traded off for other obvious facts.

Is this going to be a short/long story to be continued?

(S.L.)

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Posted: 20 March 2010 at 3:34pm | IP Logged

I am not much of a poem reader...so i'll skip talking about that! The little scene you put there, i liked. When she sits there waiting for him...somewhere assuring herself that it was a promise she made to herself...to wait for him...whether he came or not...i felt she was strong there..and it rarely happens...! The line goes...i trust him/her more than myself but its a heck lot more difficult to trust yourself...yes!
And him...looking at her from far away and thinking about himself in a way men usually don't ...!

I really liked! :)

~nij

PS: did it snow at your end today? mother nature decided to shower us with some more white on the first day of spring..heh!


Edited by missypatel - 20 March 2010 at 3:37pm

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Posted: 20 March 2010 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by scarlett.lady

Thanks for the PM olive_green!

That was a unique representation of what could have been a rather cliche situation, I really enjoyed the attention to details that would most commonly be traded off for other obvious facts.

Is this going to be a short/long story to be continued?

(S.L.)



Thank you S.L. This will most likely be a short story...made up of similar parts- you can either treat them as separate or think of them as one.

Thanks again.
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@Aria : yeah, its true... when people part ways.. it becomes sort of impossible to see a future together... but loved the way u penned it there :) :) and i totally imagined the horses in a similar fashion... me standing somewhere in a valley, a setting sun and the seeing horses flying past me...!! i say it again, u are one talented writer :D :D loved reading ur reply...!

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Posted: 28 May 2010 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Heyyy Aria !! ;) :)
 
uh, why isnt there any update on this fic??? or did you forget this one existed ??? hmmm, so, can i expect an update here, sometime this month???? missing this one too !!
 
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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SunainaTM007

Heyyy Aria !! ;) :)
 
uh, why isnt there any update on this fic??? or did you forget this one existed ??? hmmm, so, can i expect an update here, sometime this month???? missing this one too !!
 
 
Sunaina, I always forget about this ff until it shows up on my topics list.LOL I was working on IOL but thrashed what I had written as I didn't like it. :(

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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by olive_green

Originally posted by SunainaTM007

Heyyy Aria !! ;) :)
 
uh, why isnt there any update on this fic??? or did you forget this one existed ??? hmmm, so, can i expect an update here, sometime this month???? missing this one too !!
 
 
Sunaina, I always forget about this ff until it shows up on my topics list.LOL I was working on IOL but thrashed what I had written as I didn't like it. :(
 
 
LOLyeah, understandable... but now that IOL's update is almost complete, can we have an update here too please??Embarrassed

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 waiting.....Day Dreaming

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