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False Mirror - Part 3- The Final Part Pg 8 (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 January 2010 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
hi dear
this was a really beautiful piece of work
tracing patterns in the marble....a forever without his embrace... everything is amazingly alive when u read it
plz add me 2 ur pm list, wenevr u update this section or write something new
Sur

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Hey, I'd like to get in, in the PM list of this one too... I'm just scrolling through your "My posts" in order to get more of your works! :)

Add me too <3
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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Have you forgotten about this thread? Still...Inferno first, everything else can wait :-)

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Posted: 07 March 2010 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
LOL! I don't even remember this.
Aria, do you?!

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 6:21pm | IP Logged

umm

seriously guys I went into temporary amnesia with this thread. Prasanthi thank you for bringing this up on the first page. To all the pending replies, I will get to each of them. Thank you for responding.
 
Hopefully I will update soon.
 
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by missypatel


wonder what i have to say here. you did remind me what it was going to be and yet i didn't expect anything and even now after reading i can't feel it. comments above say something about "not being happy n scared" and if it is what either worded in their own way...then surely i am dumb and lost...:)

i liked...watever it is again i should have comprehended from this ...! i could frame an image...with bits blurring every few seconds...and i think its cuz am thinking of HIM too much that i did see him here...:) and i could almost see my hand reach out to him..only to be touched by an invisible body..! oooh..i think i really liked!

~nij
 
Omg!ROFL to your "wonder what i have to say here"  you don't hv to take it literally you know, what we talked abt that day - saying nice things on my threadsLOL I love to read your critical comments...don't wonder just say what you feel like it when/if you do. I know thats not what you were trying to say, I got that...,...just couldn't stop myself from replying this way....I like how you've desribed it- your hand reaching out to him....but just the fact that you saw that image!! makes me grin....
 
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by spln

i thought as much aria, about it being a one shot... but then people were asking you to continue and all, and the heading... false mirror 'series' ... i wondered if that meant you would continue in abstracts, as you do with thet FF thread? 2-3 chapters? ...

anyways, yes, i have... tracing patterns that is... exactly why i thought it was a wonder, as in a wonderful piece!

about the rest.. its like, lets say, i can foresee or imagine or just sort of fantasize surreal happiness/the impossible to be 'high conditions'...

tragedy in a 4th dimension of sort is ... erm, not my obvious understanding... i need to be able to relate to it... and i c ould see the scenario, i wasn't certain i could connect with their heads... specially the concurrence of their conclusions... which was exactly what sookie on the other hand found very cool !! we're not giving u an easy time as readers then! ...

still... maybe you should continue... not to elaborate, only to further exploring this build up... of course, the writer is in u... and ur the boss!
 
LOL i'm still thinking abt our last chat,...sorry let me get back here. no this one will not be like AR experiments - it will be one shots, so this was it for the first one.  yea, you guys are certainly not giving me an easy time with all these feedbacks...you will see at the end if i ever get there on this series..what it all means. thats all i will say for now.
 
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sri_4

hey aria
thanks for PM
ask sookie..she knows ...i am very bad at understanding OS especially like this n i need lot of time to get this stuff into my head... blame my mind for that  LOL LOL yes still i am trying..Big smile
but i still loved reading it ....do send me to PM ,till then i will try to get that in my head,,LOL
good wishes..
keep smiling :)
sri:-)
 
Thank you for commenting Sri, hope the next parts will not leave you so confused.
Hope to see you around here.
 
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