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False Mirror - Part 3- The Final Part Pg 8 (Page 2)

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Posted: 06 January 2010 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by spln

i think i'm lost about plenty, and need to wait for the next aria... however, to your credit, and mine at having comprehended, the paragraph about him following abstract patterns was a wonder!

cheers,
nj


Really?
This is supposed to be a one shot.
Haven't you ever done that? look at mosaic floors, and you'll see shapes and figures and even faces...

A



Edited by olive_green - 06 January 2010 at 10:24pm
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Posted: 06 January 2010 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
WOW! I have no words. This is brilliant! Star Star 
Seriously.
You write so beautifully. It reads like a poem! Clap  
And the story's very interesting!
Update soon!! Big smile Big smile Big smile

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 12:05am | IP Logged

wonder what i have to say here. you did remind me what it was going to be and yet i didn't expect anything and even now after reading i can't feel it. comments above say something about "not being happy n scared" and if it is what either worded in their own way...then surely i am dumb and lost...:)

i liked...watever it is again i should have comprehended from this ...! i could frame an image...with bits blurring every few seconds...and i think its cuz am thinking of HIM too much that i did see him here...:) and i could almost see my hand reach out to him..only to be touched by an invisible body..! oooh..i think i really liked!

~nij

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged
i thought as much aria, about it being a one shot... but then people were asking you to continue and all, and the heading... false mirror 'series' ... i wondered if that meant you would continue in abstracts, as you do with thet FF thread? 2-3 chapters? ...

anyways, yes, i have... tracing patterns that is... exactly why i thought it was a wonder, as in a wonderful piece!

about the rest.. its like, lets say, i can foresee or imagine or just sort of fantasize surreal happiness/the impossible to be 'high conditions'...

tragedy in a 4th dimension of sort is ... erm, not my obvious understanding... i need to be able to relate to it... and i c ould see the scenario, i wasn't certain i could connect with their heads... specially the concurrence of their conclusions... which was exactly what sookie on the other hand found very cool !! we're not giving u an easy time as readers then! ...

still... maybe you should continue... not to elaborate, only to further exploring this build up... of course, the writer is in u... and ur the boss!

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 1:25am | IP Logged
hey aria
thanks for PM
ask sookie..she knows ...i am very bad at understanding OS especially like this n i need lot of time to get this stuff into my head... blame my mind for that  LOL LOL yes still i am trying..Big smile
but i still loved reading it ....do send me to PM ,till then i will try to get that in my head,,LOL
good wishes..
keep smiling :)
sri:-)


Edited by sri_4 - 07 January 2010 at 2:24am

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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 4:44am | IP Logged

edited my comment on pg 1.

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Posted: 09 January 2010 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
hey.. really exciting beginging.. waiting for more

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Posted: 09 January 2010 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _.serendipity._

WOW! I have no words. This is brilliant! Star Star 
Seriously.
You write so beautifully. It reads like a poem! Clap  
And the story's very interesting!
Update soon!! Big smile Big smile Big smile


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