False Mirror - Part 3- The Final Part Pg 8 - Page 2

wonder what i have to say here. you did remind me what it was going to be and yet i didn't expect anything and even now after reading i can't feel it. comments above say something about "not being happy n scared" and if it is what either worded in their own way...then surely i am dumb and lost...:)

i liked...watever it is again i should have comprehended from this ...! i could frame an image...with bits blurring every few seconds...and i think its cuz am thinking of HIM too much that i did see him here...:) and i could almost see my hand reach out to him..only to be touched by an invisible body..! oooh..i think i really liked!

~nij

i thought as much aria, about it being a one shot... but then people were asking you to continue and all, and the heading... false mirror 'series' ... i wondered if that meant you would continue in abstracts, as you do with thet FF thread? 2-3 chapters? ...

anyways, yes, i have... tracing patterns that is... exactly why i thought it was a wonder, as in a wonderful piece!

about the rest.. its like, lets say, i can foresee or imagine or just sort of fantasize surreal happiness/the impossible to be 'high conditions'...

tragedy in a 4th dimension of sort is ... erm, not my obvious understanding... i need to be able to relate to it... and i c ould see the scenario, i wasn't certain i could connect with their heads... specially the concurrence of their conclusions... which was exactly what sookie on the other hand found very cool !! we're not giving u an easy time as readers then! ...

still... maybe you should continue... not to elaborate, only to further exploring this build up... of course, the writer is in u... and ur the boss!

hey aria Edited by sri_4 - 14 years ago

edited my comment on pg 1.

hey.. really exciting beginging.. waiting for more

This content was originally posted by: _.serendipity._

WOW! I have no words. This is brilliant! ⭐️ ⭐️ 

Seriously.

You write so beautifully. It reads like a poem! 👏  

And the story's very interesting!

Update soon!! 😃 😃 😃

Thank you!
😊

hi dear

Hey, I'd like to get in, in the PM list of this one too... I'm just scrolling through your "My posts" in order to get more of your works! :)

Add me too <3 😊

Have you forgotten about this thread? Still...Inferno first, everything else can wait :-)

The Super Star
Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago

LOL! I don't even remember this.

Aria, do you?!