Wish Upon a Star (SaJan) - Ch 18 Pg 137 - Page 119

hey diyaa..............just read d character sketch....n d frst 2 chapz..n am alraedy crazyyyy..
wil read more fr sure......
devyani..
btw plz add me in ur PM list...

YAYYYYYYYYYYy!!!!!! I FINALLY FINALLY read the first chapter!!! I know I know one chapter is less..but IM HAPPY!! OMG!! Im loving it !!! very beautiful beginning, lovedddddd it !! and soo glad to see Dia and Benjy here too!!! And Dia pregnant, awwwww!! this is really cuute!!! Awesome writer you are Didi !!!! Woww!!! the way you express is beauuuuutiful !! Sorry Didi, cant make my comments that long cause I wanna raed as much as possible!! love youuu and keep rocking your FF!!! *runs to chapter 2*

aawwww so good ffs...never read ffs before 1st time reading it and m starting to like it....

Hii Diya!

I know you have finished this Thread but still commenting on this one!

I just read till chapter 6 and im already in  LOVE with this FF!

thanks a ton for telling me abt it!

Love it! Your a fab writer and you explain it really well..

Im excited abt the other parts and im sure will catch up sooooon!

Thanks!

Love youu!

manjari

Hi Diya!!🤗

I am SOO thankful to you for giving me the link to your FF!

What should I say Im spell bound.. you sent me into SaJan Dreamland..

I have NEVER loved an FF this much in my LIFE! =)

The way you have expressed each and everything in this FF is really remarkable..!

You have a way with words and you can actually get someone lost into a simple yet beautiful story!

Its not the plot that attracted me.. but the way you presented the plot and the story!

Trust me.. I am IN LOVE with this FF

I love samrat's character here... the way you potrayed his bitterness... and his childishness..!

I Finally finished this thread! 18 chapters!

Im just ADDICTED TO THIS FF!!

Hats Off 👏👏

How much ever I say will be less...

Even Gunjan's character is awesome.. love the way you showed her shyness and nervousness initially!! and then how she became comfortable with samrat!

and samrat cares for gunjan so much!

it was as if they were juxtaposed! They are the exact opposite of each other!

Its like they were meant to meet and then be together!

I think this was better than mjht ! I could imagine each and every scene in this and the way you bring out the humour in the story is marvellous!

I loved the convo you showed in gunjans house.. the way samrat reacted on thinking abt Gunjan and Mayank together.. and he thought mayank was bad.. and the moment he comes to know that mayank and nupur are dating he tells gunjan he is intelligent and awesome! It just shows that samrat was actually jealous of mayank thats why he said he wasnt good..!

The way you showed MaYur's relationship in gunjans life and their love!

Samrat feels that he is needed when gunjan is around.. He LOVES her already!

and so does she.. the way she was lost in his thoughts just proves the fact!

This ff is the BEST I have Read SO FAR!  After reading yours I just feel like readin the whole day! Dont feel like writing now!

My Comment is actually becoming quite long but I am not done yet!

(trust me I have never ever written such a huge comment of anyone)

LOL! I dont know.. I can just go on and on talking about this FF!

The way you have written it down.. your efforts of writing it in hindi and english dialoues.. (sorry didnt read teh hindi ones! more comfortable with english dialogues)

But reallyy!! I just LOVED all the 18 updates and I cant wait to read the next thread! and im sure Ill catch up sooon!

plz make sure you update a little slow until I catch up!

Im just loving it!

 

LOVE YOU!

and once again THANK YOU SOOO MUCH

for giving me the links!

 

Yours,

Manjari

hey m loving this dia 😳but its too late to reach the whole story