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this part was really fantastic.........loved it.....do continue soon and please add me in your pm list as i don't want to miss any of the updates.

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lovely update..eagerly waiting for the next one..

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hey sia_lovely loved it soo much plz update soon 
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||~~ Feelings' strange, yet beautiful~~||


Next day in Purohit House

Dev came down for breakfast.......wearing Blue faded jeans and black shirt....a charming smile flashing across his face. Everyone else was already seated for the breakfast.

Mrinalini glanced up and smiled "Hmm looking very handsome today........kya baat hai...huh?".....

Dev shifted his gaze to her and smiled......and seats himself.

Mrinalini's gaze shifts to Dadima "Dadima.... ma ka phone aaya tha?"

"nahi Mrinalini......" dadima answered a bit disappointed.

"Lekin who kab tak yahan aayengi?" Arjun asked....... he wanted vaishali to be here for his wedding

"beta.... mujhe pata nahi" Dadima said sighing "main use phone kar ke dekthi hoo......"

The house helps start serving the food.....

The house help comes to serve him the juice and He glances briefly at the househelp.... and then shifts his gaze back to his plate.....

But in the next second....He was stunned.....

What did he see just now?......He knitted his eyebrows confused.

He swiftly looks up again....he was stunned to see Radhika there......serving him the juice.....

She stood there wearing a yellow salwar kameez.......pouring the juice into his glass...looking fresh and beautiful.

Her gaze lifts up to him and she smiled......He looked on....astound.

He couldn't believe that it was her standing there...... and said aloud "Tum"......

The other family members turn their head around startled......and they see a stunned Dev looking very oddly at the house help.....

Dadima calls out "dev"......

Dev turns his head to look at her......his face had a mix of emotions....he was confused, stunned, happy all in same time......

Dadima asked "tujhe kya huwa?"......

His eyebrows knitted in confusion, he uttered....

"Dadima yeh.....ra....." He turned his head to Radhika..... but instead saw the house help standing there.....and he stopped himself.

He was stunned......

Mrinalini asked confusedly "Ra......what ra?......."

Dev looked down confused...... "er....nothing"

"Dev are you sure.....your fine"......she asked him concernedly.

"Haan bhabhi....I am fine" he said a bit confused.


He wondered to himself "How could this be possible....I saw her here....just near me.....but no one else did, and she disappeared in a fraction of seconds.....hows all this possible" Paused.

"Or is it my imagination......! Damn.....Good God Now I have even started imagining her....."


He ate the breakfast quietly not making any heads turn around to him....And he didn't dare to look up at any of the house helps scared that he may see radhika in any one of them and his family members would be convinced that something was wrong with him.

He was saved of any further embarrassments.

After a few hours, the door bell rang....

Dev kept the business magazine, he was reading for the last few minutes to divert his attention from Radhika, down and went up to open the door.

He opened the door and he saw Radhika standing there......

Radhika glanced up

Seeing her, a smile filled his face........

But the next moment he wondered "kahin yeh phirse sirf......." shook his head and smiled again thinking he was imagining.

He sighed and was about to close the door......

Radhika saw this..... She quickly came one step up and her hand caught his hand unknowingly, held on to the door, to stop him from closing the door.

He felt something.....! When her skin touched his....she quivered....

He looked up and wondered whether she was actually his imagination.....

She quickly pulled her hand back to her....!

Just then Susheel who came in from the garden noticed Radhika standing on the door.....

"Are radhika" ......

Dev heard Susheel's voice and knitted his eyebrows in confusion.

If she was an imagination......Susheel chacha wouldn't be calling her

Radhika turns.....and Dev realized that she actually stood there and he didn't imagine.....

"Damn" he muttered under his breath.

"Are beta tu idhar kya kar rahi hai?" asked susheel

"Namaste chachajee,.......jee who babuji ne aapko puja ka Prasad dene ke liye kaha tha" she replied softly with a smile.

"Haan to tu idhar kya kar rahi hai....andar chal...." he said gesturing with his hands.

He saw Dev standing like a statue looking at her.....his hand held the door which was half closed......

"Dev, beta tune radhika ko andar aane ke liye na kaha".....

A startled Dev looked up "er....er.....nahi.....woh I just opened the door" He lied.

"Khair.....radhika chal andar".....

Saying he lead her inside.....Dev opened the door completely and watched as Radhika walked along with susheel in to the house.....

Dev felt like hitting himself for such a behaviour.....! He closed the door and followed them.

Dadima and Mrinalini came out.

Mrinialini came to radhika "are tum yahan?" asked her with a smile

"Haan badi bahu......shahstrijee se puja karne ko kaha tha na....... Arjun ki shaadi se pehle........ to us puja ka Prasad mangwya tha, isilye aayi hai"...

Radhika handed the Prasad to Mrinalini and glanced at susheel "Chachajee, main chalti hoon".....

Dev didn't want her to leave.....

"aise kaise.....tum abhi to aayi ho beta" Dadima said

Dev felt happy......for she would stay......he smiled.

But radhika insisted on leaving making an excuse of household chores.

Dev frowned on this. Can't she stay for sometime here?

Dadima said "Theek hai......aaj ghar ke kaam ka bahana diya hai to chod rahi hoon.... samjhi"

Radhika smiled "Jee main chalti hoo".

Dev felt bad.....his heart pinched.....!!

"Dev" dadima called him

His gaze fixed on Radhika shifts quickly to Dadima.....

"Are Dev jaa Radhika ko ghar tak chod de"...... Dadima said.

A faint smile came on to his lips....

"I Love you Dadima" he said to himself and nodded.......

But Radhika was stunned to hear this..... "Jee dadima iski kya jaroorat hai".... Radhika quickly acted.

Dev's gaze shifted towards her.......she glanced towards his questioning eyes once....but quickly shifted her gaze away......!!

Dadima smiled "Are jaroorat kaise nahi hai.....tum yahan tak aayi ho humare liye to kya hum itna bhi nahi karenge" Said dadima touching her chin.

Radhika became a bit apprehensive... "Lekin sach main dadima.....iski jaroorat nahi hai....aapko takleef lene ki jaroorat nahi hai".....

"Are takleef kaise.....Dev go get the car and drop her" she ordered Dev.

Dev nodded and looked up at Radhika......and went ahead......Radhika followed him.

He opened the door for her and she seated herself on the passenger seat.....he closed the door and walked to the other door smiling......and sat in. He turned on the ignition.

He smiled to himself as he saw her sitting along with him in the same car.....

The sun shone brightly outside......As he drove through the dusty lanes....His gaze shifted to her now and then. He noticed her beautiful wide eyes, continuously staring out of the window, her fair soft skin, her beautiful lips, her long hairs......

And he couldn't stop but admire her beauty....

But there was something wrong......the fault lay in her smile....she never smiled; at least not to him....!

But he noticed something else that disturbed him, she wasn't seated comfortably. She sat stiff; never relaxing which he found a bit odd....She sat as far as possible from him leaning her body against the door.

And she never glanced at him; her gaze remained glued to the sceneries outside the window.

It seemed as if she was forcing herself to look outside.

He frowned a bit wondering that why did she behave like this. He turned his head to look straight.

He thought "Probably...... because she belongs to a small town where girls do not mingle with guys so easily. She could be a bit uncomfortable with this fact".

He smiled at himself......keeping aside all the unnecessary thoughts.

He decided to break the ice formed between them.....he couldn't tolerate the silence growing between them with each second....

He was about to say something when he stopped short of doing so....... "lekin main usse baat kya karoon.....how should I start the conversation".....he wondered......

His thoughts paused for a moment....

"Woah! Dev now you have to think before starting a conversation with a girl....whats happeneing to you huh?" He wondered and gave out a small laugh.....

This made Radhika turn her head and look up at him......

As she did so.... he noticed this and his gaze shifted to hers...... He stopped smiling

But Radhika shifted her gaze away....with silence falling again in the car.

He turned his head to look straight......and one corner of his lips twitches to form a small smile.

Just then Radhika's voice broke the silence in the car.... "Jee yahan se uss kachi gali main lena hai". She gave him the direction to reach her house.

Her soft voice filled his ears.....It felt like music to his ears. His gaze found hers.

She glanced towards him briefly and then her gaze fell down to the steering.

He just nodded.

And took a turn taking the car in the direction she mentioned....Soon they reached her home and she asked him to stop. He turned off the engine.

"Good uska ghar aa bhi gaya and you didn't even utter a word" He cursed himself for this.

She reaches for the door to open it.....but was unsuccessful.....she tries again.

"yeh kya ho raha hai.....mujhse yeh darwaza kyun nahi khul raha"......Radhika wondered to herself.....

She didn't notice...... but she was turning the handle other side....

He sees her struggling with the handle......and leans forward

She realized this and became a bit wary. Dev was nearing to her......

Her heart skipped a beat....and she closed her eyes for a second.....The next second she turned her head as if to confront him.

She saw him leaning towards her, with his hand stretched ......he reached out for the door......

She relaxed a bit but the next moment she stiffens as his hand touched her finger....

Her fingers clenched her kurta tightly and she held her breath tightly......Dev noticed this.....but didn't say anything.

Dev opened the door for her......she quickly jumped out and started walking towards her house....He saw her opening the gate and entering in.......

Dev left wondering........ "Tum iss tarah....." his thoughts paused.

Dev wondered...... "Why was she behaving with me so oddly.....I am not some jerk......but her attitude makes me feel so"......

He paused his thoughts for a moment as he took a turn.....But he was disturbed by her attitude. The way she stiffened when his arms touched hers.....The way she tried to avoid him in his house......

"She never smiles at me, doesn't look at me, doesn't talk to me, my one touch makes her feel......" his thoughts trailed off......

"What's her problem....probably she is not a Big city girl with outgoing, extrovert nature"...... "And I am used to being with such girls"...... he said to himself repeating the same words again to convince himself.

He sighed and drove back to Purohit house.



Radhika walked towards her home......The moments she spent in the car came back to her mind......

It seemed like eternity.......She felt so uncomfortable seated next to him so close under his constant gaze.

And then how a shiver passed through her spine when his arm touched hers as he opened the door for her......

Her gaze wandered on the courtyard......But her mind never left him.

Images of their first meeting flashed through her mind......


She rushed to the mandir...... and as she held the clapper of the temple bell to ring it....another hand....a strong, rough hand held hers.......it stung her as if some electric current passed through......and she swiftly turned her head to look at him......he too turned to look at her simultaneously

His intense gaze forced her to look at him.....she didn't know what happened then but she stood looking at his eyes......as if she had no power in herself to move her body.......

It took much of her effort to shift her gaze away from him and she walked straight in to the crowd......As she came to the front near the Lord.....she felt her heart beating rapidly....she didn't know what happened....... but certainly she didn't feel comfortable

Then after the aarti when she again saw him.....he was looking at her with his same intense gaze......this time he smiled at her.....making her heart pace again.....but she somehow looked away!......

By just an exchange of some glances and uttering a few words, he had made her lungs seize.

That night she had wondered..... What was happening to her......



Radhika stood near the porch of her house......But what scared her now was not him......
But she, herself.

Why did she always react to him like this.......! Why his one touch made her shiver, why his gaze forced her to look in to his eyes, making her forget everything else.....

Why on the earth was he affecting her so much.....Even today as he leaned across, and his arm touched hers, she quivered.......!

She walked across to her room and shut the door, sinking in to the floor....

She wondered "mujhe yeh kya ho raha hai" It was a question she posed to herself.

"Unke mere paas hone se mujhe kya ho jaata hai....."


She thought again how a shiver passed through her spine when his arm touched hers as he opened the door for her......


She looked up and her gaze fell on Kanha's idol on the other side of the room.

She got up and walked across to the idol and sat in front of it.

"Mujhe kya ho raha hai kanha" She asked the same question in front of kanha again.

"unke mere paas hone se.....unke mujhe...c...chune se..... mujhe......" she paused... Then continued "kya ho jaata hai......aise to pehle kabhi bhi nahi huwa kanha" she said wondering.

Her thoughts drift back to their meeting in temple......and her gaze shifted from the idol to the wall behind.

"who mujhe iss tarah kyun dekh rahe the.....kanha...."

She looked up at kanha and continued "Aur kanha...." Paused. She couldn't find words to explain herself to kanha.

She sighed and looked away. She didn't know what happened to her.

Her gaze shifted back to kanha's idol again and found the idol standing there smiling at her.


Edited by sia_lovely - 17 December 2010 at 1:15pm

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Hey guys.....Thanks a lott..... for all the responses...... Smile Big smile.

Hope u like the updated part as well!

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