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Hey Guys...Sorry I had been out for some work and couldn't continue my fan fic for some months...and hence the topic got closed.

I am continuing my fan fic again and Hope to receive the same response from you guys.! 

The older parts are here : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1250963
 
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||~~A trip to Vrindavan~~||
 
Current Day in Mumbai...

Dev's flight lands in Mumbai and he takes a cab...

Dev's gaze was glued on to the scene outside...the streets, the roads, the signals, the traffic jams...

"Nothing's changed...everyhting is the same..." he thought and smiled. 

He arrived at Purohit bhavan...gave the cabbie his rent and proceeded towards the main gate...

He saw his home...and a smile came across his face.
     
As soon as neared the gate, the security personnel got up to salute him

"Welcome sir"

Dev smiled at him

He pulled his suitcase...and went in...he saw the green lawns spread across...the beautiful flowers lined in the lawn, the cane table and chair set that lay in the lawn far across, the gardener attending to the flowers. "Man I am finally back"...

He walked to the door and was about to ring the bell but didnt do so.

A mischevious smile flashes across his face and goes behind the huge mansion...

Behind the mansion, he removed his jacket and rolled his shirt sleeves and looked up ...the balcony which belonged to Nandu's room... 

He thought "Nandu must be in school"...and smiled

He quickly climbed the pipe and reached for Nandu's Balcony on the first floor...of the house

He manages to put his one leg inside the balcony and then his other and sighs...

He slowly walked inside...Nandu was not there in his room... Dev slowly opens the door and comes out of the room. He saw his home now...

"It was changed" he thought... "But not much...just the paint, the corridor furniture"...He walked across to reach his room
     
He reaches his room, turns the knob and opens the door and enters in and closes the door. 

Once inside the room, he saw his room had not changed a bit. He lay across his bed and sighed. 

"Man...Its so relaxing here..." he said smiling.

Just then He heard some footsteps and hid behind the large window...He saw dadima coming in



(Continued from 1) Dadima came upstairs to Dev's room...she touched the handle and pushed the door. The door opened... she entered the room...

Today as she discussed about Arjun's marriage with family members...she missed Dev a lot. 

She remembered playing with Dev...she sat down on the bed and her gaze shifted to a photoframe kept beside...Picking up the frame in hand... "Dev kab aayega tu...apni dadima ko aur kitna tadpayega hmm?..."

Just then a voice came ...

"Dadima...ab aur nahi tadpaoonga..."

Dadima was stunned to hear Dev ...she looked up "Dev"...and knitted her eyebrows in confusion.

She turned around and saw Dev standing behind her...

She exclaimed happily "Dev" as he came to her and hugged her

"Tu kab aaya" she asked happily still hugging him.

"abhi Dadima"...he said still flashing a mischevious smile.

"Aur tu yahan kaise..." she asked 

"Dadima aapko surprise jo dena tha...aur waise bhi I am Dev...thodi dramatic twist ke liye...i came in through the windows instead of the usual way..." he said winking an eye.

"Dev...tu bilkul waisa ka waisa hi hai..." 

"Aur aisa hi rahoonga humesha" 

"Tu aur tere surprises...khair tu aa to gaya"... she said happily. 

She looks at him carefully... "Dev apna khayal nahi rakhta tha?"

"Dadima please...main apne aap ka bahut acha kahyal rakhta tha"...

"Dev...lekin mera kya...tere bina teri iss dadima ki kya halat hoti hai...janta hai" she said in a mock complaining tone. 

"Dadima who to maine abhi abhi dekha na...the way you took my pic and held in your hands and talked to it...said it all". 

Dadima narrowed her eyes "Dev"...

"Haan dadima mujhe bhi pata chalta...meri pyaari dadima mujhe kitnaaa miss karti hai" he said hugging her tightly. 

She smiled.

They come down to the hall ...

Mrinalini just comes in after dropping nandu to school and vaishali comes from the kitchen to collect something

" Ma, bhabhi"...Called Dev.

Vaishali and Mrinalini turned around in surprise. 

They were surprised to see Dev coming down from the staircase.

"Dev" Vaishali said happily and walked across the room to hug him.

"Kaisa hai tu?" she asked him still hugging

"Waisa hi jaise dikh raha hoo...Completely fine Ma". He said

She looked up at him. Her eyes brimmed with tears.

"Ma aapke ankhon main ansoo... Kya huwa..." he asked concerned

"tu nahi samjhega...bete ko itne dino baad dekha hai na...kisi bhi ma ki ankhen bhar ayengi" Dadima said.

" So deverji...aap dadima ke saath...when did you come" Mrinalini asked in a very formal tone.

Dev looks up at her. His smile vanishes. 

"Dev tu...aur tu upar. Kab aaya tu?" asked vaishali curiously.

"abhi thodi der pehle" dadima replied

"abhi?" vaishali asked.

"Haan...pooncho apne ladle se...ke janab kaise aaye"...

"Haan Dev hum bhi to jane ke aap kaise aaye huh?" Mrinalaini asked arching her eyebrows slightly.

Dev's gaze shifted to Mrinalini. 

He walks across to her...his gaze fixed on Mrinalini's gaze. 

Mrinalini stood there with her hands crossed. 

Dev comes to her. 

"Aapke bete se poochiye" he said coldly.

"huh? Nandu se?" she asked confused.

Dadima and Vaishali looked at each other confused.

"Haan...er...waise Nandu ke room ka design aapne banaya hai...Right". He said in the same tone.

"Right" she said shrugging her arms. 

"Then Thanks".

"Thanks...for what?" she asked smirking.

He sighed. 

"For the Design..." 

"Design?" she asked shrugging her shoulders.

Dev bursts out laughing...Mrinalini looks on for a moment

"Mr. Dev Purohit" she said curtly... "May I know whats it...that's making you laugh so madly".

He stops laughing and looks at her. 

Mrinalini's lips start to tremble and she breaks out in to peals of laughter. 

"Bhabhi..." Dev says fondly and hugs her. She hugs him back

Dadima and Vaishali sigh and look at each other.

"Tum dono kabhi nahi sudhroge...". Dadima said.

"Dadima...Dev itne dino baad aaya hai...obviously we can't meet just like that..." mrinalini said

Shifting her gaze to Dev ... "Right".

"Right bhabhi".

"Hmm Wait Got you...tum...nandu ke room se aaye..."

Dev looks on... "Yeah right"

"Balcony se...you mean you climbed up" she said widening her eyes.

He explained everything...

"deverji matlab...you didn't change at all huh?"

"why to change when I am so good" winks an eye

" yeah right...itne bade ho gaye hai...but still a prankster...thats good huh" Mrinalini said shrugging her arms.

" bhabi..."

Dadima interrupted... "bas karo tum dono...aate hi shuru ho gaye"

"are dev tera suitcase kahan hai"...asked vaishali

"Ma bahar hai... I hid it so that you people cant guess about me"...

"Tub hi na Dev..."

She called out the house help to bring the suitcase in...

"dev jaa beta mooh haath do le"...paused for a moment... 

"Okay..."

Dev turns around...to walk to his room.

" maaji ab jab dev aa hi gaya hai...to hum jald se jald vrindavan jaa sakte hai"      Vaishali asked Dadima

Dev stops and turns around.

"Vrindavan"...asked dev confused

Mrinalini answered him with a smile " Jee haan deverji...Arjun ki shaadi fix ho chuki hai...he is getting married in Vrindavan" 

Dev was stunned. He came to Dadima.

"What...So early"...

" are jaldi kahan hai" said dadima

"Comeon dadima...obviously jaldi hai..." he argued.

His gaze shifted to vaishali "Mama aapne kuch kaha nahi"

Vaishali smiles "are main kya kahoon jab arjun ne ladki pasand karli".

"Lekin itni jaldi kya thi" he said.

"are agar Arjun shaadi karna chahta hai to isme hum mana kaise kar sakte hai". Dadima replied.

"Hmm..." Dev said...still thoughtfull.

"Anyways I will get freshened up..." He sighed

Dev goes to his room and takes a shower and changes in to some comfortable clothes and sleeps...as he needed some well deserved rest!


After three days...The purohit family was about to leave for vrindavan...

Nandu was crying...as he too wanted to come along with other members to vrindavan.

Dev tried to coax him " Nandu...you also will come after few days...and then you have your school that's why..."

But Nandu was adamant... "No chachu...mujhe bhi aapke saath aana hai"...

"Mumyji...i think I will stay here itself" Mrinalini said

Dadima insisted Mrinalini to come...

"beta nahi tujhe to aana hi hai...vaishali bhi nahi aa rahi"...

Vaishali had to go her sister's place as she was unwell...After trying and coaxing much...finally nandu agreed to stay with his maasi (aunty) for sometime and the purohits left for vrindavan

While on their way...In the car... 

Dadima spoke "Waise main kya sochti hoon ki ab agar Dev ki shaadi ke bare main bhi sochna shuru kare to"...

Dev is startled and looks up stunned...

Seeing this Mrinalini chirps in... "Haan Dadi ma I also need a devrani now..." 

Her gaze shifted to Dev , who now looked at her dangerously...

"Haan waise aapne baat to sahi kahi hai...dev aur arjun ke beech umar ka faasla jyaada bhi nahi hai...arjun ki shaadi fix huwi hai to ab hum dev ke liye bhi" Vivek said

"Aur dadima meri nazar main to kuch ladkiyan bhi hai"...said Mrinalini...This increased Dev's fury

He remembered Laurens Words...

"Ah Mr. Dev what do you think, as soon as you reach there, you will be showered with...er...some thousands of pics...of girls" 

Dev followed him " Oh please...nothing like that, my family is not like that"

Laurens chuckled "Well Dev I think your days of flirting around are gone...and yes sure do call me for your marriage" He teased him and surely enjoyed doing so.

Dev wondered "Are they really gonna fix my marriage so soon as they did for arjun...Damn Man laurens was so right!..."

Mrinialini interrupted his thoughts " Dev...what happened thinking about your marriage already..." She teased him

He laughed without humor "No bhabhi and I am not ready for marriage...atleast not so soon"

"Are abhi nahi karega to kab karega..." dadima asked 

" I have just come here dadima...gimme some time na..." he pleaded. 

He grimaced at his bhabhi and murmured in her ears "And bhabi aap please...dont hang me..." Mrinalini chuckled at this.

They reached delhi...where susheel had come to pick them up...from there they traveled to vrindavan...

As they traveled across...Dadima chatted with Vivek while Mrinalini was busy with her mobile...Dev's attention turned to the beautiful scenery...Dev rolled down the windows to look around... 

The streets were narrow and represented a village feel...Cows wandered aimlessly along the dust lanes... There were several trees, with their flowering branches reverently touching the dusty ground. And hosts of madly cooing birds...

He saw pond, temples, villagers pass as the car moved... 


He had never seen all this. The sun was about to set and the scenery looked delightful.

Soon they reached Purohit house in Vrindavan...Arjun stood there in the gate to welcome all of them...He touched the elders feet to take their blessings. 

Seeing Dev he called him "Dev..." Dev turned to look at him and went to him and hugged him... 

"Congrats Man"... He said

Arjun Smiled "Thanks...And how are you...When did you return?..."

They walked inside the house...Mrinialini said that she was tired and went in to freshen up...Dev and Arjun went to terrace to chat...Dadima sat along with susheel 

"Susheel to bahu se kab milwa raha hai?"

"Ma...aap jab kaho...kal milwa dete hain".

"Theek hai" Dadima said happily.

Meanwhile in terrace...

Dev asked Arjun curiously "So what made you say yes so soon for this"

Arjun looked at him " You mean marriage"...paused... "Well Deepika is nice"

Dev exclaimed "Oh so her name is Deepika"...

" Yeah...She is beautiful, good natured,...and somehow I feel she has all the qualities I desire in my wife"...

Dev looked on...without saying anything...and finally spoke... "So you said yes". 

Arjun shrugged "Hmm. You say...did you get your someone special in US...or didn't get her yet..." 

Dev looked up...then smiled "No I didn't get her yet"...!! 

Arjun smiled back.



Edited by sia_lovely - 29 September 2011 at 3:35pm

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wow! its gr8.....i read part 1 and 2 also.....its very nice.....continue soon.

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