NEW-!Temptations! - Mayank and Nupur - Part 2 Pg 9 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

omg summer you are awsome writer

i thought you didnt know hindi but your urdu
is definitely awsome
love it and thanks for the pm
 
ps i think you have forgotten me
but i am sneha who wrote those
crazy songs on DMG lol


no sneha i remeber u hun
i don't know hindi
actualli one of my friends she writes them for me!
so ya!
i'm glad u liked it

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
great update
thankz for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
great update
thankz for pm


hey pooja
thanxz hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesoem Summi..loved this part!
Waiting..please update soon!
Love
Aranya
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice and cute one
cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey summer..nice part..
 
Mayank was working when Nupur came to his cabin..she was really shy..n he encouraged her to speak..but then she talked about marriage..wow..he had no clue about it..n they were confused.
 
when they came out they realized they had come to the wrong place..Nupur decided she will get married to that guy..aww so sad.
 
Nupur's mom asked her not to write also..aww..thats bad..she must be really hurt nw..n she tried calling Gunjan..Samrat picked up n was happy to hear its her!..but then why did'nt anyone come to speak?..weird..
 
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
 
-aish
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww nupur is so cute......lol.....poor mayank.....confused.........plz update soon............
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi summer,

U updated it after long time

Lovely update.

So Mayank was not the guy to whom nups mom-dad made her  riashta.

U brilliantly portrayed shy and scared nups and confused Mayank

Mayank encouraged nups to talk to him

Loved this part very much.

Plz update next part soon.

take care

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Posted: 14 years ago
Aap jante hai Hume aapka ye bhag bahut pasand aaya
Aap hamesha aise hi likhiyeji
Hume lagta hai Mayankji Nupurji ko pasand karne lage hai
Aur hume ye bhi lagta hai ki Nuourji ke Aamijaan aur abujaan unke saath thodi zyadti kar rahe hai
Unhe unki bhi khawaisho ka khayak rakhna chahiye
Hume acha laga ki Nupurji ne apni behan ko yaad kiya
Shayad wo unki Madad kare
Hum chahte hai ki Mayankji Nupurji se Shaadi kare aur wo bhi unke Aami Abu ki ijazat ke saath
Jaldi se iske aage ka bhag bhi likhiya
Dhanyawaad
Dnt worry im not making fun jus trying to do my urdu also good
Liked it
Hop u liked my urdu😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
character sketch-

love it.............
can't wait to read........
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