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NEW-!Temptations! - Mayank and Nupur - Part 2 Pg 9 (Page 4)

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 8:27am | IP Logged
nice intro.....add me to ur pm list...

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
sounds interesting
plzz pm me when u update IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
nice intro yaar
n its really interesting
do cont soon
n do pm me when u update
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wowowow tht was cool
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Part 1
" sir Myra so gayi hain!" the maid said disturbing my peace of mind. I nodded and paid her usual weekly pay. She happily took it and left. I got up and walked to the nursery, she looked so peaceful sleeping, her chubby cheeks and emarald greens eyes reminded me of how beautiful her mother was.She had left us when myra had been born, i guess god likes to take away everyone i love.I softly touched myra's cheek and headed towards my room.

This room always reminded me of the past, that i had been dying to forget. Those happy memories had been forever embedded into this room. when myra's mom was alive she had filled this house with happiness and laughter but now the loneliess and queitness of the house haunted me.

I laid down and closed my eyes only to be woken up by sounds of wailing. I rused to the nursery to see myra up and awake crying loudly. I pulled her and tried to hush her, " baccha rote nahi chup ho jao soni chup hojao!" i said queilty trying to get her to stop crying. Myra was my only reason to live after her mother had left. She was my sole reason for living, it was because of her i come home every night to check if she is okay and kiss her at night so she knows she has a father who loves her.

She settled down after a while and started to giggle out loudly, " toh papa ko utha ke ab aap ko hassi arahi hai!?" i said while placing a kisses on her forehead. She looked at me with a cute smile and nodded, " accha! ganda bacha aise rote nahi!" i said to her, to which she started to giggle again, " gooo uhhmmpphh goohgggg" what was she trying to sya it always made me wonder what she was trying to say to me in her baby language.

After a while of chatting she fell a sleep and i placed her back in the crib. i walked back tot he room tired and sleepy. As laid on the bed my eyes instantly closed.


" Ms. White please check on myra" is said to the nanny as i hurried to get ready unfourtunately i had some how slept in. I rushed to the breakfast table where ms white was holding myra and trying to get her to eat something. Myra was being fussy and not eating it. I signaled Ms. white to hand me myra to which she did,

" kya hua baccha bhook nahi lagi kya?" myra just starred at me with a blank expression.

I picked up her baby food and fed her some pumpkin pie, which she happily accepted from my hand. I smiled and kissed her on the cheek. After feeding myra i handed her to the nanny and left for work


" jee babajaan hum tayar hain is vivaah ke liye!" i said obdiently like a good daughter. When my father asked me if i was ready to marry someone. I had always been the sober kind not with many friends only a few who are very close to me and that is it. Otherwise it was my parents who mostly controlled my life. My babajaan meant the world to me, and now that he had been diagonosed with cancer i could not and definetly would not refuse him.

I silently walked upstairs to my room and closed the door, sliding against the door my eyes became numb at the though of what i had just agreed to do. I had a dream of becoming a doctor standing on own two feet earning a name for myself before i get married. But now everything was ruined. I know the circumstances, I know they will never change, no matter how sincere the words. So either I should accept it & be happy now or decide to change it, which would mean changing myself, how I act, what I feel, what my dreams are, starting over. I just could not do that, i was always seen as the perfect daughter, how can i ruin that image.

I slowly got up and crept to the bed reaching to the dresser i pulled out a notebook, which pretty much looked like a dairy but it wasn't it was a book about expressions.I opened it and scanned the first page and kept on going until i found the one i was looking for, placing my finger on the context i read.....

Mere haathon se mit gayi lakeeren kahin,
bhool aaye hum apni kismat kahin.
Agar mile tumko kahin to utha lena,
mere hisse ki har khushi apne haathon pe saja lena

I closed the book and hid it as i heard footsteps advancing towards my room. In came my mom, she smiled and sat down on the bed near me. I could clearly see it in her eyes the happiness and joy my one yes had brought to her, but could she see the tears and sadness my decision brought to me. I guess she couldn't,

" nupur tune muhje duniya bar ki khushi dedi aaj!", i smiled and nodded, " aama jan hum aap se ek farmyish karna chahte hain!" i said hoping she would accept my wish happily.,

" bolo" my mom said looking at me as she grabbed my hand, " hum chahte hain ke hum ek doctor banjayein aur phir yeh vivaah karien, hum kuch bana chahte hain!" she realised my hand in anger and nodded no, " nupur tu janti haina apne baba jaan ko, woh teri parhayi ke khilaaf the par tu phir bhi university gayi, woh teri internship ke khilaaf the par tune woh bhi ki, ab bas aur nahi!" my mom said strictly before getting up, as she neared the door she turned back, " beta tu janti hain gunjan ke bad tu hi hai jise tere baba jan ko umeed ki asass hain, ab woh mat torna woh poore toot jayeinge!" and she left the room, as her words echoed through the room,

" gunjan ke baad........gunjan ke baad!!"

Gunjan was my elder sister, she had eloped with samrat and secretly had gotten married. She came back to get baba jaans blessings and after that we never saw her or samrrt again. I have no heard from her in the past 6 years after baba jaan and amma jaan disowned her. It was that day that my quest to becoming the perfect daughter had started otherwise it was always gunjan this, gunjan that, she was a daughter any father would be lucky to have, i was overshadowed by her being. But after she left i had become somewhat the daughter my parents had always hoped for.I had quit hanging out with guys, i quit the drama club i quite fashion. I became a simple girl with simple wait with her parents dreams.


Rainforest Cafe'

" chal bata ab baat kya hai?" sanjana kept on asking me.She was one of those friends with whom i was very close. She was my sviour through my tough times.

" sanju hum....wohh...." i stammered as i did not know how to tell her the dream i had been chasing all along had been taken away from me.

" nupur dehk ab bol bhi de warna mein ja rahi hoon!" she said with a angry face after she realised we had been here for an hour and i had not told her anything, After hearing nothing from me she got and grabbed her purse,

I opened my mouth, " sanju hamra vivaah tah hogaya hai" i shouted as she froze in her place and turned around, " ur kidding right?" she asked mocking me, i nodded, " nahi hum serious hain aaj baba jaan ne guftugu( conversation) mein hamare vivaah ki khuwaahish ki aur humne haan kardi" i said explaing to her about the earilier to talk with baba jaan and his reuqest to see me married.

" tu pagal hai kya yehi toh tera saal hai, nupur intership ke baad ek aur saal aur tu doctor banjayegi. tu is chor ke shaadi karna chahti hai!" i nodded no as she asked, " hum nahi sanju baba jaan, hum jante hain aap kya kehna chah rahe hain sanju par baba ki sayhat(health) humne is vivaah ke liye majboor kar rahi hai !" sanju looked annoyed with i had just told her. She knew how much i had wanted to become a doctor, but she also knew how much my family meant to me. I could sacrafice anything for them.

" mere pass ek idea hai, kyun na hum us larke se mil ke use sab kuch bata dein?" sanju said excitedly to help me out of this mess. I quickly agreed to the idea as no harm would be done to anyone.


i hope you like it


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.MayAngels. Senior Member

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by annie07

Plz add me to pm list

will do!

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
Summi that's really good!! lol you were calling me and Sneha a good're a great writer!! *hug* (lol i like Mayur too :P)

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Posted: 03 January 2010 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fariaa70

Hey Summi,
i loved ur CS.
it was very nice.
u should continue it.
And plz PM me.
waiting for ur 1st part.
plz update soon

thanxz faria

i will pm u!

i did updt!

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