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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 4:46am | IP Logged

all guyz who want pm for the update plz add me..........

so it will be easy for me.........

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sasya

great startClapClapClap.ridhima was checking him out when she was kidnapped wow i think i will do that too if the kidnapper is soo handsome.and armaan comment was too good.according to what ridhima said he does not look like a kidnapper wonder why he is doing this.continue soon......
Happy New year

tanx a lot for taking time out to comment.........i ll definately continue soon and let u know

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 6:03am | IP Logged
hey happy new year.........

gr8 concept...........loved it

plzz add me in...do pm me wen u will cont

cont asap

love
sanna

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by REDnBLACK

hey happy new year.........

gr8 concept...........loved it

plzz add me in...do pm me wen u will cont

cont asap

love
sanna

tanx..........u r already in my pm list

i ll definately let u know when i 'll continue.........

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 7:01am | IP Logged

Originally posted by pinkss

very nice intro cont. sooon

tanx a lot dear...............

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by loveoflifeksg

That was awesome u shud cont as soon as possible I loved it anyway nice concept and I wonder y he is actually doin that but we will find out later so plz continue soon I wud love to read it

Love Aisha

tanx for the liking my fic ayesha........and for the comment

and u 'll soon get to know y he is doing this?Wink

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 7:10am | IP Logged
hey zara..nice intro..
 
Ridz was walking when someone pulled her into a car..n made her unconscious..
 
n then she was left in a room..which was dusty..but was well equipped..wow..
 
Armaan came to meet her..n she was checking him out..lol..who wont?!..he shud seriously be an actor though!
 
He started checking her out after that n averted his gaze when she looked up..
 
he gave her a long lecture that he just wants the money..n does'nt want to turn bad..
 
Ridz was right abt him being a kidnapper..but she so wants to go home..aww..
 
Shashank n Padma got really worried to find out that Ridz is missing..
 
btw i hv a suggestion..can u seperate the para's?..n use quotes when writing dialogues?..make stuff more clear..use **** when there's a new scene n stuff..
 
update soon
 
-aish

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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aish_punk

hey zara..nice intro..
Ridz was walking when someone pulled her into a car..n made her unconscious..
n then she was left in a room..which was dusty..but was well equipped..wow..
Armaan came to meet her..n she was checking him out..lol..who wont?!..he shud seriously be an actor though!
He started checking her out after that n averted his gaze when she looked up..
he gave her a long lecture that he just wants the money..n does'nt want to turn bad..
Ridz was right abt him being a kidnapper..but she so wants to go home..aww..
Shashank n Padma got really worried to find out that Ridz is missing..
btw i hv a suggestion..can u seperate the para's?..n use quotes when writing dialogues?..make stuff more clear..use **** when there's a new scene n stuff..
update soon
-aish

tanx a lot aish for the detialed comment of appreciation

i have noticed all ur suggestions in my account and definately will be care ful about them next time....

huge love for the suggestions it 'll work for my improvement dear........

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