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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 11:40am | IP Logged
very cute poem, sistu !!! Clap

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
@suhanaa: tnx so much
 
@gurleen: tnx. that is a cute name.
 
@radha: tnx a lot.
 
@mru: thanks buddy!

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@momi: tnxa lot.

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
awesome  job! that was very well done!

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
@sonali: tnx a lot.

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
hello everyone!!!!

I am updating the poem on abeer!

aaye kuch naye log lucknow seher
mili kisi se nazrein ek peher
uski payal se bane deewane
unke samaan ko lagaye theekane
chat pe hue guddan se rubaroo
jab dupatta gaya chehre ko choo
badal garje phir hui baarish
lalla karne lage milne ki koshish
balcony me woh thi khadi
lalla ki unse nazrein mili

cricket ka ek catch choda
lekin unse muh naa moda

jab khogayi attaichi ki chabhi
madat karne pahuch gaye waha bhi
pehli baar otho e lagaya chai
aur buri halat hui hai

pata karna tha uska naam
lekin har koshish hui nakaam
jisne bechain kiya subah shaam
aakir mein pata kiya uski pehchaan
Jo dha rahi thi unpe queher
Us ladki ka naam hain leher


Smile I am not sure if it makes sense or not so plz do tell me if you want me to add something in this poem or any comments that you have. If you appreciate it, plz press the like buttonSmile


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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Sis .. this was fabulousss!! Amazzzing!! You have a gift girl .. you put down everything in words sooo beautifully!!! Clap Clap Love .. love .. loooove it!!
 
 
My most fav part was ..
 
"chhat pe Guddan se hue rubaroo,
jab duppata gaya chehre ko choo" Clap Clap 

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ektaj

Sis .. this was fabulousss!! Amazzzing!! You have a gift girl .. you put down everything in words sooo beautifully!!! Clap Clap Love .. love .. loooove it!!
 
 
My most fav part was ..
 
"chhat pe Guddan se hue rubaroo,
jab duppata gaya chehre ko choo" Clap Clap 


Thanks so much ekta. It is just becoz of the support i get from you all.

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