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sistu

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:05am | IP Logged
hello everyone
 
 
after watching yesterday's episode, i decided to write a poem on abeer. And here it goes:
 
ghar mein kar ke padhai ka bahanaa
chat pe hota hain patang udanaa
dost ke saamne badi baatein phekna
suniye GF ke baare mein kya hain kehnaa
patang aur pyaar ko hain ek saa dekhnaa
GF ko patang sa hain nachanaa
Chutiki ke saath hasna hasanaa
Daadi ko hain khoob chidhanaa
aur maa ko hain sirf maska laganaa
yaaron ke saath hain waqt bitanaa
har ladki ki tasveer ko thukranaa
chah hain  taqqar walli se nazrein milanaa
 
Khud ko samajhtein smart
hain saari unme baat
ladki milni chahiye namkeen
ho woh saadi aur seedhi
ho thori teekhi thori meethi
dahi vade ke hain shaukeen
pasand aajayein inhe koi bhi
bas aise hi hain humaare lalla jee.
 
Hope you guys will like this poem.
 
SmilePlz do leave a comment or you want me to add something and plz press the like buttonSmile
 
 
 


Edited by sistu - 07 January 2010 at 3:00pm

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Awesome poem Sistu. It hits Abeer urf Lalla to a T. Love how you highlighted what he wants in a girl and how his philosopy of  a girlfriend.

Good job Star

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:14am | IP Logged
@jhaan: tnx dear.

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:14am | IP Logged
wonderful poem sweetheart..HugHug..i love it..i will watch the 1st epi at once..haven't watch it yet..Embarrassed..only for GK..you know na..Wink..thanks for the PM..i joined the forum..Cool

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by liv2laugh

Awesome poem Sistu. It hits Abeer urf Lalla to a T. Love how you highlighted what he wants in a girl and how his philosopy of  a girlfriend.

Good job Star

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so you are here also..love you Jhanz..Embarrassed..*hugss*..

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:17am | IP Logged
@neha: ya for GK u shud watch this show, that is exactly why i m here. tnx a lot!

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divzfan

Originally posted by liv2laugh

Awesome poem Sistu. It hits Abeer urf Lalla to a T. Love how you highlighted what he wants in a girl and how his philosopy of  a girlfriend.

Good job Star

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so you are here also..love you Jhanz..Embarrassed..*hugss*..
 
we r his baggage, remember?LOL

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Posted: 29 December 2009 at 6:24am | IP Logged
haiiiiiiiiiii such a chweet poem 4 our chweet chweet lalaaji !! Blushing

FAB JOB Sis dear !!!!!!!!!! u rock !! Thumbs Up

- Luv Niki..Smile

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