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Hi, some of you have been writing some real superb FF and scenes for SanRaj that are truly fantabulous to read... I wrote a couple of the weekend and thought i could share them with you... its not half as good as the ones ive read but this was my first shot... hope you all like it... X

Memories are Magical
 
DM awoke abruptly calling Santu's name. Since the day she had gone this had happened many times but he hid his uneasiness behind a false smile. He showered and reached into his wardrobe to get ready for work.
 
His eyes fell upon Santu's sari's, he pulled out a red one remembering the time he and Santu had joined Meghna/Rasik for dinner. It had been late and the four decided to stay overnight at the resort hotel. He remembered how he and Santu lay under the stars talking into the early hours of the morning and eventually falling asleep upon the balcony hand in hand.
 
Another memory that he remember was the time Hiten and Toral had given the couple tickets to Austria for their first wedding anniversary. How much fun they had? How he laughed as Santu fell in the snow and how whilst trying to help her up DM had fell himself. How they had snowball fights? How they had laughed?
 
Placing the sari carefully back into the wardrobe, he wiped away his tears. All he had was memories of Santu but these memories were magical...
 
(This is just a small scene, as i am having problems with adding my other scenes, will try to put them up soon... anyone curious, Santu isnt dead she has just walked out of DM's life)
 
Enjoy... Xxx


Edited by SanRajDeewani - 08 April 2010 at 9:49am

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WOOOOW...dat waz really gd pleaseeeeeeeeee carry on....wanna no wat appens next

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sorry double post


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Posted: 28 December 2009 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
great start SanrajDeewani,ClapClapClap I wonder why Santu walked out of DM's life and why did he let her go. Confused Please do continue

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gr8 start cont soon plz!!!!!!Clap

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I like the last line best!
Santu walked out on DM? fantastic. I always want to write the same thing but after twice, many tears flooded the forum and so i attack more basic issues and am hell bent on making Santu's life in the mansion better!
 
Good work SRD. Please do not ever make the mistake of comparing your writing to that of others. We are all different and think differently. There is no better or worse here.
It is all in good fun (as i always say).
Keep writing.

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HMMMMMMMMM GOOD 

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it is very nice.........but why santo walk away...don't let them break up

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