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maanu

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Posted: 27 December 2009 at 8:07pm | IP Logged

hi kavya......

nice one.......

the name of the new born was really thoughtful.....

do write more......

thanks for the pm

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prernawaghray

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Posted: 28 December 2009 at 3:56am | IP Logged

hey kavya
this was a very emotional one yaar
but loved it :)

yashimalhotra

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Posted: 28 December 2009 at 1:23pm | IP Logged

wooow
that was great
I am left speechless
great update
love ya

kweetrockstar

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Posted: 28 December 2009 at 9:06pm | IP Logged

hey
beautiful story
thanks for the pm

nidha1983

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Posted: 28 December 2009 at 11:55pm | IP Logged

woah Kavya its really awesome one so touching but a sweet solly for late reply thanks for the pm

From Ridhima"I love ur soft Blue eyes,
I love the way u give me surprise,
I love the way u kisses me,
I love the way u misses me.

Baby I love u and this is true,
I love u more than words can ever say,
I'm giving my entire self to u,
All of my mind, body, and soul.

My love for u runs deeper then the sea,
No place on earth rather be in ur arms is where I belong
My love for u is simple, deep, and strong.
I feel it flowing towards u from my heart,
I'm depending on ur gentle and sweet love.
I've learned the full meaning of love
By being loving by u....." To Armaan

http://i383.photobucket.com/albums/oo271/kvn1983/5994241179recent-1.gif

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Posted: 30 December 2009 at 5:10am | IP Logged

Kavya.......awesome os.......

i always luv reading ur oneshots.....u r damn good.....

write more n more.....

luv u dear......tc!!

Caramel_21

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Posted: 04 January 2010 at 3:03am | IP Logged

hey kavya it was a beautiful one shot.
thanks for the pm.. do write more.. : D

frnd.of.frndz

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Posted: 19 January 2010 at 1:42am | IP Logged

Hehhehhhe..

urrrmmmm.. Sorry for mein Super Late in commenting here yar..

kaan pakad ke sorry hai ji.. mujhe sachi dhyaan nai thha..

okk now comming to the OS..

Its Awesome.. It had all those lil emotions jo humari life ,mein bohot important hoti hain..

Everything from Love-Tears-Hope-Blessing-pain nd finally satisfaction..

Really it had all the emptions perfectly portrayed..

I loved the lil Girl.. her conversation with the unborn baby nd wishing santa to take away her parents tears was simply beautiful.. I'm it took a good turn in the end nd had a happy family together..

Chholly once again sweetu.. nd thanku for reminding me about this.. ek baar padhke laga ki maine shayad yeh puri padhi hi nai thhi.. Dead

.. aapko to pata hai na main ek dum shupel depul vala nalayak hoon comments karne mein..

Love You Sweetu bacha..

Thanku for the lovely OS

aapki Rucha Di..

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