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heyy guys i have started a new gallery of mayur os........ i will post my mayur os here only......... plz commment and enjoy............

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MY PREVIOUS MAYUR FF (MAYUR THE LOVING BIRDS)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1265202

MY ONGOING MAYUR FF (MAYUR THE TEMPTATION)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1316915

MY ONGOING MAYUR FF (KYUN KI)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1333671

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index

1. kuch baatein unkahi page (mayur) 1

2. pairs are made in heaven page (mayur) 4

3. the confession of a silent heart (mayur) pg 6

4. aakhir wo pal aa hi gaya (mayur) pg 8

5. true love is the strongest power (mayur) pg 10

6. naye rishtey (sayank) pg 13

7. dil hai tumhaara (mayur) pg 16

8. sangam tera (mayur) pg 18

9. love is the ultimate strength (mayur) pg21

10. hum tum (mayur) pg 27

11. those 15 seconds (mayur) pg 31

12. happiness... (mayur sanu majan) pg 35

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1st one shot........

kuch baatein ankahi........

samrat: out of the house right now....... (he shouted)
nupur: but meri baat to suno samrat......
samrat: bhabhi plz......... ab mein aapki aur insult nahi karna chahta aap plz chale jaaiye..
nupur: par..
mayank: nupur tumne suna nahi samrat ne kya kaha chali jaao yahaan se........
nupur: mayank tum bhi........ meri baat to sun lo ek baar,,,,,,,,
mayank: kehne sunne ko baaki hi kya reh gya hai,,,, tumne jo maa ke saath kiya wo kya kam tha.......
nupur: mayank tumhe bhi aisa lagta hai ki mene maa ko,,,,,,,,
mayank: bas nupur isse pehle ki tumhe thakke maar ke ghar se nikaala jaaye tum khud hi chali jaao........
nupur kept quite ,,, went to her room...... took her clothes,,, and left the house.......
she was not understanding wat all was happening,,,, she cud hav spoken the truth but then she thot if her husband ,, yes her husband whom she loved dearly,,, who loved her from heart thinks that she can do such a thing then there is nothing in the world worths for her,,,,,,,,,,, he does not trust her,,,,,,,,,, she was shattered..................
samrat: bhai ab kya hoga?? maa thik to ho jaayegi na,,,,,,,
mayank: haan samrat... sab thik ho jaayega.......... maa ko hosh aa jaayega...........
samrat: bhai yeh sab kese ho gya........ bhabhi.... bhabhi aisa kese kar sakti hai..........
mayank: naam bhi mat lena uska.....
then the doctor came out of mm's room......
m: doctor maa....
doc: she is doing good...... yeh kuch dawaaiyaan hai.. le aana,, unhe hum hospital le jaa rahe hai...... abhi wo kuch bol nahi paayengi........... to hum unhe le jaayein........
s: sure doctor.......
then sheena arrived.......
sh: myank ab aunty kesi hai?
m: better,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
then gunjan came.. she is wearing a pair of tight jeans and top...
g: nupur kaha hai? (she is just a frnd of nupur not her sister)
m: nupur... yeh sab kuch ussi ki wajahh se to hua hai.........
sh: haan......
g: uski wajah se? usne kya kiya?
m: haan,,,,, paison ke liye nupur itna gir jaayegi mene socha bhi nahi tha....
g: kya?
sh: haan,,,,,, nupur ne hi power of atorny paane ke aunty ko jaan se maarne ki koshish ki,,,,,
g: wat??????
sh: haan...... mene khud dekha tha........
g: ho hi nahi sakta.......
m: aisa hua hai gunjan,,,,,,,, jab maa aur nupur farm house gye tab nupur ne maa ko terrace se thakkaa de diya,,,,
g: where is nupur?
samrat: wo ghar chod kar chali gyi......
g: kya.........
she ran to the door,,,,,,,, and ran on the road so as to find nupur.....
and she found her in her old house......
g: nupur.......
n: gunjan tu,,,,,,, aaja......... (hiding her tears)
g: kaha tha na mene thodi bold ban jaa....... thoda bolna seekh le......... par nahi......
n: tu aa na andar........
she move inside......
g: baat kya hai...... bata mujhe........
n: ab koi faayada nahi hai jjo ho gya so ho gya....wese bhi ab in baaton se koi faayada nahi hai......
g: mein tujhe bachpan se jaanti hoo..... doosron ki galti chupaane ke liye khud ko fasaa leti hai.....
n: kaash mujhe pata hota galti kiski hai.....
g: matlb,,,
n: mein to neeche kitchen mein thi...... tab pata nahi maa ke chillane ki aawaaz aayi aur mein waha se baahar aayi to dekhaa maa giri hui thi aur unke sir se khoon nikal raha tha......... mene kuch nahi kiya gunjan kuch bhi nahi kiya........... (she started crying)
g: i knew it,,,,,,, tu aisa kar hi nahi sakti.... chal ab sab ko bataate hai.......
n: koi faayada nahi hai....... jab mayank mujhpe vishvaas hi nahi karta to ab mere liye yeh sab kuch maayne nahi rakhta........
next day.......
samrat: gunjan tum yeh kya keh rahi ho......... bhabhi ne kuch nahi kiya,,,,
g: haan.......
sam: par tum itne yakeen se kese keh sakti ho?
g: samrat nupur aisa kar hi nahi sakti.................
sam: par....
g: samrat...... tum mujhse pyaar karte ho na....
sam: of course.......
g: to mujhpar trust nahi karoge......
sam: thik hai...........
g: aunty ne kya kaha??
sam: maa ko bhabhi ke baare mein kuch nahi pata.... bhai ne kaha uss incident ka zikr bhi nahi karna,,,, aur maa kuch bol bhi nahi paa rahi hai,,,,,,, doctor ne kaha hai ki unke vocal cord pe chot lagne ke kaarad unse koi baat na kare.......
g: mujhe aunty se milna hai........
doctor arrives........
doc: its a gud news...... she can speak now........ but keval ek jana hi unse mil sakta hai
m: sach... .maa..
doc: aap mein se nupur kon hai........
g: kyu kya hua????
doc: patient nupur se milna chaahti hai......
sam: wo abhi yahaan nahi hai........
m: doctor maa se mein milne jaaunga.........
he enters the room.......
mm is lying on the bed.........
wen she sees him an expression of disappointment is clearly seen on her face....... that she wanted nupur.........
m: maa........
mm: nupur kahaan hai?
m: maa aap thik to ho na..... (ignoring her question)
mm: mayyu nupur kahaan hai.......
m: usse ghar se nikaal diya mene.,,,,,,, (he shouted) usne jo kiya uske baad.......
mm: nupur ne kuch nahi kiya...........
m: aap usse bachaana kyu chaahti hai.....
mm: usne kuch nahi kiya mayank.....
m: kya..
mm: mujhe kisi aur ne thakkaa diya tha,,,,,,,, kyuki jese hi kisine mujhe terrace se thakka diya mein gir gayi aur jese hi mein chillai nupur mere pass aa gyi,,,,,,, koi 4th floor se itni jaldi neeche kese utar sakta hai,,,,,,, mujhe nupur ne thakka nahi diya tha,,,,,,,,,
m: par........
mm: par kya mayyu tumne nupur par itna bhi bharosa nahi kiya.......... wo aisa nahi kar sakti.............
mayank left from there...........
totally irritated by his behavior........ he was feeling guilty....... extremely guilty............
gunjsn from mayank's expression understands everything..
g: kyu mayank..... tumne aisa kyu kiya,,,,,,,, accha hai aunty ne tumhe bataa diya,,,,,,, bhagwaan na kare agar unhe kuch ho jaata to tum to nupur par kabhi vishwaas karte hi nahi na,,,,,,,
while on the other hand samrat was at nupur's house.......
s: bhabhi i m really sorry for wat i did........
n: koi baat nahi saamrat aakhir devar hi to bhabhi ko sataata hai,,,,,,
s: bhabhi aap bahut acche ho................ maa ko hosh aa gya hai aur wo aapse milna chaahti hai.......
n: kya .......... maa ko hosh aa gya.........
and they rushed to the hospital............
mayank saw nupur coming with samrat......
nupur crossed mayank ignoring him,,,,,,, and mayank was not in a state to say anything,,,,,,,
the whole night nupur served mm.........
after one week mm was dischrged,,,,,,,, still dere was no sign of talking between mayur,,,,,,,,,,
nupur again went to her house.....
at night.....
nupur was having a cup of cofee wen the door bell rang.........
she opened the dor and found none other than mayank.........
she left the door open and moved inside,,,,,,,
mayank followed her,,,,,,,,,,
m: nupur plz meri baat to suno.......
no response........
he held her hand .....
m: plz nupur suno to........
n: tumne suni thi kya mayank??????
m: nupur i m really very sorry,,,,,,,,
n: sorry????? kis baat ke liye??? balki mujhe tumhe thank you kehna chaahiye......... yehi kahaa tha na tumne,,,,,,,, kyuki tumne mere khilaaf police mein report nahi karaayi,,,,,,,, to thank you mr. mayank sharma ki tumne mere khilaaf case nahi chalaaya................ thank you....... thank you veyr much. (and she burst into tears)
mayank tries to console her........ but she moved back.......
n: aaj bolne do mayank....... koi bhi rishta vishvaas pe khadaa rehta hai........ aur tum.......
m: to ab tum mujhpar vishvaas karlo nupur ab se aisee galti nahi hogi.......... plz...............
n: tum plz chale jaao mayank.......
m: mein nahi jaaunga nupur.......... bcoz,,,,,,,,, bcoz i luv u nupur,,,,,,,,,,,,,
npur was speechless..........
n: i love you too...........
and they hugged................
m: to chalein.......
n: hmm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
wen they reached home they got to know that the culprit was sheena........ and gunjan found this out.........
and mayur were a fabulus couple now..............
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heyy guys this is my first attempt to write os.... hope you lyk it.....



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hey congo for ur one shot gallery........

i am very happy for u........

and i am the first on to give you my wishes.........

pata hai starting mein mujhe rona aa raha tha........

aur woh chat waali baat to vakai ajeeb thi......

i kept wondering who did that........but i knew it should be sheena.......

but then i loved the one shot.......

keep writing more...........

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lovely os dear.It's superb.Pls write more os.

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Originally posted by mahaklovesmayur

hey congo for ur one shot gallery........ thank you

i am very happy for u........

and i am the first on to give you my wishes.........

pata hai starting mein mujhe rona aa raha tha........

aur woh chat waali baat to vakai ajeeb thi......

i kept wondering who did that........but i knew it should be sheena.......

but then i loved the one shot....... i m glad

keep writing more...........

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Originally posted by A-N-S-H-I-K-A

hufh!!
well...if not considering mahi's 'res'...den m d first one to coment!!! yes you are......
awesum OS dear...
thank you
i luvd i...
twas really gr8...
wow....
thanx 4 d pm... =) my pleasure

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