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awesommm OS 👏👏really really nice romantic and well writen . 👏👏
keep writing dear
thnx maha! 😊 em so happy u liked it😳
awesommm OS 👏👏really really nice romantic and well writen . 👏👏
keep writing dear
Originally posted by: v_nikhita18
that was soooooo hot and soooooooo romantic hiba......
😳it rocked!!!!!keep writing more!!!!!!
Originally posted by: Ashlesha09
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Back to Unreserve😊Hey Hiba, hey ash 🤗Look I am back to unreserve nad this time on correct time, no late.So finally you tried your hand in Shot also and how fablously you tried, it was fab dear, just loved it but after reading your numerous updates it surely doesn't appear like a shot to me, frankly I thought i was reading JLH new update, look hw your ff are having impact on me😆😆 , lolx it had the touch of premeer just like in my ff so maybe u thought that...i was thinking of including it in JLH onli but chaned my mind😛 em so so happy u liked this one too dear 😳 but this is my First and the last OS coz i have enuf on my plate with JLH and hearts aflame😳 okay on a serious it was because here you potrayed Premeer of the show and there also with same beauty n intensity you potrayed them so thats why i find no difference, so its a compliment for your ff *Colgate Smile*lolx em really glad i made u smile😳😳 but that doesn't mean that i didn't like your, I liked it very much, very sensual and romantic and the way Heer regretted for her deed was the thing that we wanted to see in the show but creatives like always disappointed us and I am sure you too wanted something like this thats why you wrote it in a way which showed her luv, his luv n passion as well as her guilt at the same time, Am I right? Dekha how in such short spam I started understanding you so well😃😃.lolx its true u noe... the way u have started to understand my writings and what i was thinking while writing them is so true and eerie at the same time?? were u my sister in previous life birth??😆😆 jokes apart i really like the way u sense everything and understand my pov as very few ppl are able to do tht and ur one of dem😳😳Then to your shot, liked the way u highlighted importance of vermillion fr Heer and his hunger for her which is same even after so many years and he still manage to make her wild with pleasure with a mere touch of his. *sigh* i actually imained dis all while i was listening to this song* it certainly got hot in the room*😳😳Nice jobAnd I hope its sufficient to satisfy you😛😆 lolx its more than enuf to satisfy me! love u sweetie!🤗 thanx so much for urcompliements! they mean alot to me! 😃😃Hope to see more but surely nt att cost of ff as i luv thm more n more😊luvAshlesha
Originally posted by: Nitty2910
Oh Hiba,, The OS was wondeful, intensed, passionate and lovely.. really enjoyed reading it.... You should write more...
Awsome update. Loved the way you described Prem in wet shirt n Heer in the sari. Plz write more OS
OMG hiba i always adore urs writing never got chance to comment on urs ff's & after reading this i become total fan of urs it was really awesome.you wrote all the things so wonderfully.you should write more.enjoy reading it alot
luv
Fatima
wowwwwwwww............☺️...........
that was veryyyyyyy sensual, passionate and hottttttttttttttt....................*fanning myself*........... ............................ ................I loved it......................
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