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Jaadu ye kya chal gaya(part 16@pg 65 updated) (Page 3)

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pls cont soon
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I really liked your ff.SmilePlease do update soon.Big smile
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hi guyz sorry 4 this too late update...............this is a bit shorter part ................hope u all like it..........................
                                         PART 2
All men are  back from the office.Naitik was not with them.akshara asks dadaji about naitik and dadaji says that he will come late because he has a lot of work 2 do.Akshara was sad and then  after the dinner, naitik comes with lots of bags in his hand .when akshara asks he says that it was a surprise .
after sometime akshara was setting the bed and naitik comes hugging her from back.
akshara:choddiye mujhe,koi dekh lega.
naitik:to kya hua ,hamare ghar walo ko bhi pata chalna chahiye ki ham dono ek dusre se kitna pyar karte hai.
akshara:zaroorat nahi,, ab ap mujhe chodiye
naitik:nahi
akshara:kyo
naitik:kyonki ab ap mujhe mera gift  dengi
akshara:nahi
naitik:kyo
akshara:kyonki jabtak ap muje chodenge nahi tab tak apko apka gift kaise milega.
naitik(leaving her):thik hai.ab jaldi se mera gift dijiye.
akshara opens her almira and takes out a small box
akshara:ye lijiye,apka gift
naitik:ye kya hai?
akshara:kholiye to sahi.
naitik opens the box and as he opened it he saw rose petals in the box.he takes out the petals and after that he sees a beautiful diamond bracelet on which i love u naitik was written.naitik says thanks to akshara and after that he hugs her.but akshara pushes him back and says that she wanted her return gift.Heart
naitik:thik hai,lekin meri ek condition hai.
akshara:kya?
meri condition ye hai ki mai jo kuch bhi kahunga pure do hafte tak apko meri saari bate manani hongi.
akshara:lekin 2 hafto tak kyo?
naitik goes near his almira and takes 2 tickets out of that.
naitik gives them to akshara and  says that they were going to manali.
akshara was really very surprised and she hugs naitik tightly and kissing him she says i love u .Heart
hope that u liked it and plz post ur precious comments and click like below. 
 
 
 


Edited by aksharasingania - 21 April 2010 at 7:12am

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very nice Shreya..................keep writing!
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 Nice part.........good work

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it was a very cute part dear ClapClap
cont. soon
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heyy yaaa. its very niceeeeeSmileSmileSmile continueee
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very very nice dearThumbs Up.very nicely written remembering that old naitik akshara who were deeply lost in love .gr8 job. yaad dila diya naksh ke romance ko jisper sare yeh rishta ke fan marte the.gr8 gr8 gr8 job.waiting for next part.do continue soon.i was just imagining how romantic were they before.and 4 this u deservClapeClap

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