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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kweetrockstar

hey
i loveeeeee the story
plz add me to the pm list for the next update


Thanx a lot for ur comments dear.
I'm glad that u love my story.
I'll surely add u in the pm list!!

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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by naureen_aly

lovely part
finally armaan has realized that he love d riddhima
 


Thanx a lot Naureen jana.
I'll update soooooooon

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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chahatmalhotra

hai.................. its really a great part................ pls do continoue soon..........sorry for late reply as was busy in some work..................


love
chahat


Thanx a lot jana for ur appreciation.
Its ok yaar I know we al have a busy schedule.plz don ask sorry again ok.
I've updated the AR thread on star forum and have also reopened ur ff thread.So just check it out ok!!

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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrachiluvsKSG

oohhhh asma di

it was a fab..
n its ok bout the pm
thnk god i found it..!ooff
anyways...
it was gr8...
n awww...
armaan is finally in love wid her...
yaaayy..
waiting for ur nxt part.!
love ya
Prats


Thanx a lot Prats jana.
I'm very happy that u like my ff sooooooo much.
i'll update soooooooooon

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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhruvikaluvsKSG

heyy asma di
nice part
loved it
finally Armaan got to know his feelings too gud
 
luv dhruvika
 


Dhruvika dear thanx a lot for ur appreciation.
So u r happy 2 see Arman's feelings.
I'm sure u wud love the next part.

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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by namita18

Hey
Awesome part .,i love every bit of it,
The romantic scenes nd kiss was so gud,...
Nd finally armaan has realises his love ...he is so cute yaar nd ridzi was so smart grl wid self respect nd dignity nd beautiful ,
Pls update soon ..eagerly waiting for next part..that i hope is going to be confession..
Pls update soon nd add me to ur pm list..
Luv u
Takecare


omg !!1
Thanx a lot jana for loving my ff soooo much.
I love the comments in detail and loved to see u telling me ur feelings about my part.
Well regarding the next part just have patience till I update.he he
Don't worry I'll update son and wud surely add u in the pm list.

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Posted: 23 February 2010 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaankashridz

HI ASMA
I AM NOT NEW
BUT STILL MAYBE U DONT KNOW ME
I AM MARYAM
OR U COULD CALL ME BY ANYOTHER NAME
I DONT MIND
BUT I LOVE IT
IT WAS TOOOOOOOO GUD
SORRY DIDNT KNOW THAT U UPLOADED SO LATE COMMENT
BUT TRUST ME U DID TOOOOOOOOOO GUD
I AM IN LOVE WITH UR FF
ITS TOTALLY UNIQUE THAT IS THE THING I LOVE ABOUT IT
AND U WRITE SO GUD
U SHOULD WRITE MORE STORIES
AND IF U DO SO
PLZZZZZZ DONT FORGET TO TELL ME
I WANT TO BE FIRST ONE.
LUV U
MARYAM



Oh jana I love u for this. can't tell how much delighted I'm 2 read ur words.
I can't believe that u loved my ff sooooo much Maryam.
Thanx a lot jana!!!!
Its ok jana for the late comment.Plz don say sorry ok.
I've written 2 more stories here on IF.ACtually I'm a regular member of star forum and come here just 2 read ffs and sometimes I post my ffs here also.
I'll give u the link of my other two ffs.
I hope u may like them.


Edited by asma_227 - 23 February 2010 at 1:32am

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Posted: 24 February 2010 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
PART 8-LAST PART

Armaan was missing riddhima badly.He was just waiting for the evening wen he'll go n get back his love.
Just enjoy the song while the love birds are away.

Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan

In raahon ki dooriyan
Nigahon ki dooriyan
Hum rahon ki dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan

Kyun koi paas hai
Door hai Kyun koi
Jaane Na koi yahan pe

Aa Raha paas ya door mein ja raha
Janu na mein hoon kahan pe

Yeh dooriyan

In raahon ki dooriyan
Nigahon ki dooriyan
Hum rahon ki dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan
LyricSMasti.com


Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan


Kabhi hua yeh bhi
Khali Rahon pe bhi
Tu tha mere saath

Kabhi tujhe milke lauta
mera dil yeh khali khali haath
Yeh bhi hua kabhi
Jaise hua Aabhi
Tujhko sabhi mein paa li

Tera mujhe kar jaati hai dooriyan
Satati hain dooriyan
Tarsati hain dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan


Kaha bhi na mene
Nahi jeena mene
Tu jo na mila

Tujhe bhule se bhi na
Bola na mene chahun fasla

Bas fasla rahein
Ban ke kasak jo kahen
Ho aur chahat yeh aur jawan
LyricsMAsti.com
Teri meri mit jaani hai dooriyan
Begani hai dooriyan

Hat jani dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan


Kyun koi paas hai
Door hai Kyun koi
Jaane Na koi yahan pe

Aa Raha paas ya door mein ja raha
Janu na mein hoon kahan pe

Yeh dooriyan

In raahon ki dooriyan
Nigahon ki dooriyan
Hum rahon ki dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan



Finally the evening came n Armaan went to Riddhima's house.
He was sitting in the hall talking to her parents wen she walked down in a maroon saree.HE just forgot to blink his eyes n was completely mesmerised by her beauty.she was looking extremely gorgeous in that saree.
Riddhima's cheeks heated up wen she found a pair of eyes fixed at her.
Anjy whispered: Armaan toh gaya aaj.dekho kaisey deewanon ki tarah dekh raha hai tumhain
Riddhima blushed a little.
Then after the dinner AR drove back home.In the mid of the journey Armaan stopped the car in front of an ice-cream parlour.
RI: ARmaan yahan kyun gadi roki
AR: tumhain ice-cream bahut pasand hai na isliye
RI: haan lekin tumhain kaisey pata
AR: bas pata hai lets go.
Wen she came out he held her hand n walked in.A chill ran thru her body as he caressed the upper part of her hand wid his fingers.She instantly looked at him n so did he n she found a new emotion in his eyes.She cud not make out wat was it .His eyes had a longing desire of sumthing.They ate the ice-cream in a joyous mood wid few cute converstaions n then came back home.
Wen ridz entered the room she found it completely dark.
She moved back wid fear but Armaan held her hand.
As she walked in wid him the lights were on n she found the whole room to be decorated wid beautiful red n pink roses.
The bed was covered wid rose petals n was decorated for a newly wed couple.Armaan locked the door.She turned to him.
RI: Armaan yeh sab
AR: acha laga
RI: bahut acha par
He bent down infront of her.
AR: u know wat riddhima mujhey nahin pata tha ki pyaar hota hai lekin jabsey tumhain mila hoon tumhain jana hai tabsey tumharay alawa yeh dil aur kuch nahin sochta.har waqt sirf tumharey paas rehnay ko dil kehta hai tumhain mehsoos karnay ki aarzoo jagti hai.tumhari deewangi ne mujhey bhi paagal bana diya hai.I love u I really really love u.I can see myself growing old wid u.I can see u cradling our child in ur arms.I can see us being happy forever n forever.
Tears flew down her eyes.this was wat she had waited for soooooooo long.She was hapy very very happy.She bend down n hugged him
RI: I luv u too Armaan .pata nahin kabsey yeh sunna chahti thi tumsay.jab meri shaadi fix hui toh laga ki shayad yeh hasrat lekar ab mar bhi jaungi par ab jab tum mere paas ho main kitni khush hoon main bata nahin sakti.mujhey bhagwan se ab aur kuch nahin chahiye.tumhara pyaar aur tumhara saath hi meri zindagi hai Armaan.
Armaan was touched
AR: itna pyaar kaisey kar sakti ho mujhsay
RI: pata nahin .bas itna jaanti hoon ki main tumharay baghair ab aur nahin ji sakti.I love u I love u very very much Armaan.meri zindagi tumharay naam se shuru hokar tuharay naam par hi khatam hoti hai.
HE cupped up her face n sucked off all her tears.
AR: kya merey liye dobara meri dulhan banogi plz.I want u too see in that dress again.
She nodded while blushing.
He smiled n went out of the room n came back half- an hour later.while he was out Miki asked him.Niki was his cousin sister.
NI: hey bro aap yahan kya kar rahay ho. aapko toh bhabhi kay saath bedroom mein u know
AR: u know ki bacchi bahut badi ho gayi hai tu.ek baar teri shaadi ho jaye fir batata hoon.
Ni: tab ki tab dekhengay abhi toh aap apni biwi kay paas jao.bechari aapki raah dekh rahi hongi.
Armaan ran behind her but she was fast enough top reach her room n close it on his face.
Wen Armaan came back he saw Riddhima sitting on the bed.
He slowly walked towards the wardrobe n bought a packet.
He sat near her n said: yeh main tumharay liye laya tha tumhara wedding gift lekin us raat baaton baaton mein hi saara time nikal gaya .acha hua ki mainey tumhain yeh tab nahin diya.aaj main isey tumhain apnay kay saath de rtaha hoon aur haan mainey us gift ko kal change karkay tumharay liye yeh specially banwaya hai.
HE opened the box infront of her n she found a platinum chain wid a diamond studded AR in it.She touched it n said:its beautiful.
She had tears in her eyes seeing that.
AR: n so are u.
He wiped off her tears and kissed her eyes.
She blushed.
She opened AR n found their pictures inside it.
RI: Thanx a lot!!!
AR: thanx a lot meri zindagi mein aanay kay liye aur ismain pyaar kay rang bharnay kay liye.
He tuk the locket n put it round her neck.He also put the ear rings.
HE first tuk a photo of her in his mobile n then went closer to her.
She clutched the bedsheet wid her toe as he moved closer n closer.
He held her hand n kissed it.
She shivered n looked at the other side.
He held her chin n made her look into his eyes.
AR: I love u a lot riddhima aur main aaj hamaray is relation ko tabhi poora karoonga jab tum comfortable hogi.agar tum thoda aur time chahti ho toh I can wait.
She put a finger on his lips
RI: mainey bahut intezar kiya hai Armaan is pal ka.inhain sapnon mein imagine kiya hai ab aur intezar nahin hoga mujhsay.
He smiled n leaned his face upon hers n kissed her lips wid utmost passion n desire.She pulled him more close nn responded equally matching his passion.
Her hands went to his hairs n ruffled them while his hamds opened the pins of her dupatta.
He moved her dupatta n looked at her wid hungry eyes of luv n passion.
She felt a bit shy n nervous n crossed her hands round her chest.
AR: can I make love to the most beuatiful woman on this earth.
She smiled n nodded.He then removed her hands n buried himself in her hairs.
They stretched on the bed n he showered her face wid numerous kisses.She worked upon the buttons of his shirt n tore them apart as she was also as aggressive as much as he was.HE removed his shirt n she shifted a little.Her back faced him.Removing all the hairs from her back he kissed her neck at the back n removed the chain from her neck.Kissing her ear lobes he removed the ear rings.
HE opened the hooks of her blouse n caressed her back making her shiver badly.She held the pillow more tightly .Her heart was out of control.she was shivering wid this intimacy thoroughly and he simply enjoyed the tremors that ran thru her body wid each touch of his.He kissed her back n kissed her waist by moving down.Unable to hold herelf more she turned to face him n he kissed her tummy.He moved up n kissed her jawline-her neck passionately.She also rolled upon n showered his bare chest wid numerous kisses.He again kissed her taking the control n slowly moved the blouse down her shoulder kissing every inch of every body.Her legs were entagled by his as she tried to protest a little.He cud feel her thudding heart.she tried to resist him a bit but he interwined his fingers wid hers n broke a few of her bangles.He kissed and caressed her body till she was desperate in his passion.
HE gave her the love bite at numerous places n slowly moved down .They explored each other the whole night as this was the night wen they both united to become two bodies n one soul.


Edited by asma_227 - 25 February 2010 at 1:05am

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