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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fariaa70



Oh my God ,

                    

U made me cry dear.[/ p]        this was what i felt while writing the oneshot

[P]Its really touching.



I m getting emotional after reading it



I loved it from the core of my heart.



U r awesome to write 1 shot.

        thanx     

Plz do write more.

                      sure

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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurarti

nice OS
but very very very sad nd touching

plz Mayur ko kabhi aise juda mat karna

Luv

Nidzy



glad u liked it
don't worry fir kabhi mayur ko juda nahi karungi
thanx for your comment

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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surbhi123

Cryyou really made me cry reading your one shot . it was really touching Crycant see my mayur separated , will die without them Crynupur was really sweet , she really loves mayank a lot . she even dont want him to tell about her coming death Cryyou did a good job dear Smilelekin
jab padhna start kiya aur next day tak jab mayank ne nupur ke ghar ka
door ring kiya tab tak chehre par ek sweet si smile thi Tongueaur baad mein vo smile aasoo mein convert ho gayi Crymain yehi dua karti hu aisa mere mayur ke saath kabhi na ho . great effort waise Clapyou really showed how much they love each other .Cry mayur can do anything for their loveBig smile, and one more thing , the saaree you selected was beautiful . definately nupur usme gorgeous hi lagegi Tongue<br>


glad u liked it
ya mayur really do love each other and care for each other
and nupur is really sweet and she loves mayu more than her life
i too pray nothing such happens with our mayur
thanx for your precious comment


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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pari.theprinces

twas so touching,,,,,,,,,,, but i wanted mayur to be together,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


thanx for your comment
and i too wanted mayur to be together

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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ansh_Arti

It was simply amazing man!
very touching!


x x




glad to know you liked it
thanx for your comment

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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 10:11am | IP Logged
hey.....

why did u made me cry????????

i knew that something like this will happen........

but why???????

i loved it though...........

continue writing one shots........

but happy ones plzzzzz

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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Hamein rola kar tmhe kia mila...:"(..........

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Posted: 18 December 2009 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
it was so touching!
very sweet!

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