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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 2:57am | IP Logged
LOL

A very stupid limerick attempt on RK ...

Eternal love was in store for us

Day after day we remained entranced, with so much fuss

With Rajbir-Kranti, yeh dil maange more ...

Emotions ran amok through the open door

As love and romance took up haven in celestial mush!  


Was trying my hand in something different.
LOL
Wink




Edited by poetic - 15 December 2009 at 2:59am

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 3:40am | IP Logged
very good poem Poet....
Only very few lines.. yet it told a lot....
Akhir aapne apni naam rakhleee....

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Thanks Pen. Hug

Actually writing a limerick is mind-boggling. Wacko Only 5 lines and one has to follow the AABBA pattern. I thought it would be easy but it was really a sweat-worthy effort.

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 4:57am | IP Logged
 
An eternal sigh was in store for me

Daily the pesky rat I would see

How that creep  
 
Would drive a jeep  
 
And continuously torment my Kudee !!! Wink


Edited by skeptical - 15 December 2009 at 4:58am

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 5:42am | IP Logged
LOL too good Skep! Thumbs Up You are a master in everything literary. Sigh!

The jeep after a few days became history
What we got at the end was MRD ... our story
Was it worthwhile? Was it good?
Did our mind crave for the elusive food?

Everything turned out to be fair and hoary


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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 5:54am | IP Logged

The story turned from valiant to humdrum

Yet we came for their dished out crumb
 
We just waited
 
With breaths bated
 
The serial perished but not our forum......... 

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 6:18am | IP Logged
We are eternal, we are strong
Our love for MRD... our way sees no wrong

The makers are fools we all know

Someone tell them you reap as you sow

May our association with MRD continue for long 


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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Both of you are saying so many things in few lines...
In my face it brought different types of smiles...
 
Loved the way you write skep...
Poet your lines are ahead one step...
 
Hope like this, we can cover many more miles....
 
 
(Don't know how my lines sounds...Confused)


Edited by pennu - 15 December 2009 at 7:49am

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