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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..
loved the story..
continue soon..
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cont soon yaar nice FF πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just loved it! You were Awesome,Fabulous,Terrific,Outstanding !
I think that Samrat has visited Morena in his childhood and saw Gunjan and they both have become friends n Gunjan have hurt him in some way and they both get seperated in their childhood. It's only my guess!? Pls Pls continue soon.
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woww, very nice
gud starting
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nice FF...Pls do continue it
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Originally posted by: cute_monaya_fan

 

 

INTEZAAR'''''''.(part 1)

Scene: campus of excel college, mumbai'''..hmmm ek nazar dalo to hi pata chal jata hai ki yeh college nhi balki koi chidiya ghar hai! Aur nhi to kya''..pata hi nhi chalta ki kaun kya kar raha hai.haan yeh to sahi kaha aapne madam humara excel colledge colledge cum aur machibazaar zyaada hai by god

Waise bhi hume sab se kya kam, nazar to usi pe padti hai na jo sabse alag sabse different hota hai''..fir bhi har kisi k sath ghul mil jata hai.

 

Amidst of these crowd we saw somebody coming'''.a boy in dark blue jeans and yellow tee. He had a ball, probably basket ball in his hand oops!! Actually on top his finger as he was continuously spinning it and wistling; while the girls passed away'''.some glaring at him while others had the courage to greet him'''..courage to behold their shyness within, "hi, sammy'''.", "hi babes, hi beautiful"'''were his short and simple replies.

hi by god sammy mere sammne ek baar to aao itne simple replies dene k liye zinda nahin bachoge by god
Sammy--------the handsome hunk of excel, the coolest dude, basket ball champ and every girl's dream boyfriend (but god knows who is "HIS DREAM GIRLFRIEND") '''''."hey jako, kahan ja raha hai?", he asked suddenly to another boy passing by.

 

Jako--" aur kahan annie ko dhundne''''wo actually diya ka liner uske pas hai''''.aur''.."  "''''aur diya ko abhi wo chahiye, right" completed sammy

"right sammy, achcha mai chalta hu"

"are pad yeh to batata ja, kahan hai pura gang"

"aur kahan canteen mein''''''.." jako completed his sentence  and vanished into the crowd.

 

"hm''''to sab wahi honge", samy murmured to himself and headed towards the same.

 

Scene: canteen, students in small and large groups sitting idly and chatting, playing'''.while some were also trying to penetrate through their notebooks. Amongst all these our concentration deviated towards the food parlour where chinu was up on his feet , serving sandwiches and hot coffees.

 

     Arey kya hua''.u don't know chinu 😲😲😲'''.the head of the food department of excel college πŸ˜›πŸ˜›, I mean the canteen waiter or rather the sweetest entertainer.

i know chinnu yaar . vo na hota to excel colledge kaise chalta kaise?????
pure colledge usike classroom i mean canteen mein hi to  milte hainπŸ˜†
By the way as we all know canteen is the chill out zone for foodies; but seriously I haven't seen such a foodie in my life--by god πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

 

A boy carrying an abnormally large sandwich on a plate proceeded towards a table which is previously occupied by 5-6 more boys n girls. As soon as he placed his specially made sandwich on that very table, everybody at once''''"Uday!!!"

 
*uday yeh to duniya ka 8th ajooba hai .. vaise jo bhi hai world best hai by god*
"kya hai''."the boy replies irritatingly, "kitni baar kahan hai itni zor se mat bulaya karo, mujh jaise masoom insaan ko darr lagta hai"

 

"Dodo, kya hai yeh"---------asked a girl sternly sitting among them in a micro mini teamed with halter.

"Dids, mera naam dodo nhi hai uday hai, dats U_D_A'''''..(after some head scratches)___Y,

hi by god mera sweet bacha .. ok sorry i know zyaada pyaar ho gaya par kya karun dodo ki inhi harkaton pe to dil kurbaan hai
 ok"''.. "ouch ,why did u wack me dids?"

"kyunki tum isi layak ho", a sharp reply from the girl.

 

"Hey candy, wassup. Subha subha apne is bechare bhai pad chilla kyun rhe ho?"

"Sammy, plz ab tum iske side mat lo"

 

Sammy: ok ok, main chup hi raheta hu (and puts finger on his lips)

On this note, another girl of the gang jumped on her feet---------as if she has received the shock of her life, slapping the cheek of the guy sitting next to her with her long black pony tail.

yeh kya😲ab nups mayu ko marne bhi lag gayi..
hi mera bechara mayu poor soul 

Sammy: arey kya hua nupur, koi electric shock laga kya?

Nupur: (coming towards sammy and touching his forehead) sammy tum thik to ho na, tum aur chup''''.tumhari ta..aa..biyat''''.

Sammy: (interrupting) tabiyat! Kya hua hai mere tabiyat ko? I'm well and hearty babes.

 

"uhm'uhm'''sammy'''.", the slapped boy beside nupur said in somewhat a warning tone

 
hi     is line pe to by god dance karne ko dil karta hai jaan ..  

Sammy: oh! Sorry dude''..i'm very sorry. Main to bhul hi gaya tha k nupur ab tumhari private property ban chuki hai'''aur tum nupur ki; kyun sahi kahan na nupur (and winks)

Nupur: ab kya karein sammy, mayank ko tumhari tarha apne aap ko public property banakar social work karne ka shauk nhi hai na''..isiliye. Waise uske paas (after some pause, suddenly) aur bhi bahaut sarei kaam hai samjhe (the cyclonic reply of nupur at some 4000 decibels)

And just like a tsunami exits from the canteen, pursuaded by her mayu, I mean mayank--------nupur's raj of ddlj, leaving behind the gang and sammy who at the moment is bursting into laughter for being successful in his mission of tempting Ms. Nupur bhushan.

 

"Bha''.i! stop it." , a girl said while entering the canteen. "Maine abhi abhi nupur ko jaate hue dekha aur tabhi mujhe laga tha ki kuch to gadbar zarur hai, aur abh yahan tum''''''.abh to sudhar jao. Sach mein bachpan chala gaya pad bachpana abhi tak nhi gaya!"

 

Sammy: (controlling his laughter) uffo'o suni, after all they are my friends sweet sis, itna hak to banta hai na mera. Aur shayad tumhe nhi pata, samrat k jaado se aaj tak koi nhi bach paya to hamari nupur kya cheez hai!!! Yu mana lunga (and gives his usual naughty smile)

 
hi suniiiiiiiiiiiiiii... ok ok i am not going to cry now... par kya karun inka pyaar dekh kar control hi nahin hota by god😭😭 

"waise sam tu suhani ko hamesha suni kyun bulata hai", enquired uday.

"pahele tu bol, tu mujhe sam aur diya I mean candy ko dids kyun bulata jai,sammy aur di kyun nhi"--cross questioned sammy.

 

"wo isliye kyun ki''''''..kyun'''.ki''''''(again head scratches)'''''.haaaaa''.kyun ki'"

"kyun ki jo log hamare liye special hote hai, hum hamesha unke liye har cheez special chahate hai''..yahan tak unke naam bhi, a special copywrited one"'''.explained sammy

 

"aur suhani se special sammy k life mein koi nhi hai, hai na'''" instant reply from a sweet voice of an equally sweet and plain looking girl, sitting beside uday.

 

"oh wow what an xplanation gunjan, isiliye to tum meri sab se favourite sis ho'''..par ek confusion abhi bhi hai'''..special logo k liye specil naam''''to fir sam  gunjan k liye koi special naam kyun nhi? Wo bhi to tere liye special hai na!!"

 

On this note, gunjan's expression changes clearly disclosing her discomfort. Very tactfully handling the situation, sammy replies, "ab kya karu, teri tarha kitna sad khujlaya pad fir bhi apne is sweet and simple friend k liye aaj tak koi perfect name dhund hi nhi paya'''(sigh'')"

"koi baat nhi sammy mere liye gunjan hi perfect hai'''..aur dosti kisi naam ki mahautaaj nhi hoti, tum mujhe jis naam se bhi bulao hum hamesha dost rahenge".

 

 

"Really guys, believe nhi hota six months back''..hum sab ki feelings gunjan aur nupur k liye ekdaam opposite thi and now I must say not only our gang but our life is also no life without both of you''' specially mine", a sweet note from diya which made our innocent gunjan blush'''diya continues "aur sammy!!! Ek taraf gunjan jo sammy ko tolerate hi nhi kar pati thi to dusri taraf tum who was the master mind behind the plans hatched to send them back''''.aur ab you two are such good friends!!! πŸ‘

It's unbelievable"

"whatever, lekin jo bhi hota hai, achche k liye hota hai''''..zara socho agar gunjan chali jati to mujhe mera bhai  wapas'''''.." suhani was interrupted by gunjan, "aisa kuch nhi hai, sammy hamesha tumse attached tha'''bas 5 saal tum usse dur london mein rhi isiliye use laga k tumhe apne bhai ki padwa nhi hai. Pad jab use yeh ahesaas hua k tum bhi use utna hi pyaar karti ho jitna wo tumse''.tab bhai aur bhai ka pyaar dono laut aaya"

 

"right gunjan, lekin iska full credit tumhe jata hai, agar tum mujhe suni ke us waqt ke circumstances nhi samjhati to'''''.sach mein main bhi kitna idiot hu, ek 13-14 yrs ki ladki apne parents k hote hue koi decision kaise le sakti hai!!! (after some pause in a grievetone) agar chahe to bhi nhi."

Both bro-sis stare at each other, their eyes filled with tears''.enough to say a thousand words.

"yeh lo diya tumhara liner"''..ice broker jako

 

Suhani and sammy controlling their emotions'''''"anyways bhai, aaj practise jaldi khatam karke ghar aa jana''''within 7. is dat clear?"

 

"ok baba, pad saat baje hi kyun?"

"hm'''.dats a surprise"''..suhani replies with a smile.

"me will wait '''.ok bye guys, me have to go for practise''''c u all later", and sammy departs.

   
ok friendz, oops i know thoda zyaada bara ho gaya, hope u all will read it, n i will wait for ur comments---------good or bad........everythin is welcomed
 
luv u all
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v nice update....continue soon.....
thnkx 4 d pm...
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finally finally i completed it ..
yippii
ok now i am starting ...
really jaan it was superb n i love sammmmmmmmmmmmmmy shoooooooooooo much ...
hi bygod tune mere dil k kitne sleep karte hui feelings ko jaga diya
jaise chaddi aunty i mean sheeeeeeeee nah k liye nafrat .....
hey sammy gunjan ko chashmish kyun nahi bulata ????
aur mujhe kyun kagta hai k sammy k past ki vo ladki gunjan hi hai ...
aur vo apne past ki ladki ko hi chashmish bulata tha...
by god....
its sooooooo ok i don't have any words jaan..
pls pls pls pls pls pls i beg u jaldi jaldi se update karde ......
n i want more of sammy ...
n how can i 4get u made me hate adharaj too.
n i loved the uday of ur ff ... esp in first part...
pls pls update as soon as possible....
n han ek aur baat
tell me ur name dear pls
 
 
loads of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanku sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo so very much my dear friendz--------------------------
dolly18, samicute, aahana86,dreamer2305, Sajanroxx20, Sajan_Ekta, tshq2623, swati_mhjt, aabha_monaya, ritu_mayurkaSh, kris97, LOVEBARBIE, zummi03, sana866, lucario, disco_diva....... n so so sooooooooooooooooooooooo many of u. wel if i ve misd ne name plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do forgive me.............ders so many of u dat d names jst don end. tonnes n tonnes of thnx  2 u all for showerin so much of luv on my story intezaar. im really sory for such a long delay, bt i promoise to ud it very soon. for nw dis shrt ud hope u all wil like it n jst like b4 nw again i m goin to wait 4 ur reply.
friendz for lack of time n loads of study i may miss out some of my friendz 4m my pm list.............but plz u don 4get to read..............as soon as i'll get time i wil try to be in touch wid u..til den here it comes
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Part 3:

Recap: Sammy dreamt of a voice calling some "samrat" & he wakes up shouting "plz ruk jao". He was swetin a lot. He said to himself that he is only Sammy.

Continue.................

Knock on the door

"bhai, bhai wake up. College nhi jana hai kya?"

"ya suni, jst comin within a few min"

After some time at the dinning hall------------"gud morning bhai" ; "gud morning suni, my lil sis". Sammy picks up a toast and while eatin goes out. "arey yeh kya? Breakfast to karo?"β€”suhani

"no wa already late, gunjan ko bhi to pik up karna hai. So me Levin., tum bhi college jaldi aa jana car leke. Ok"----sammy says while leavin.

"ok bhai, bye c u". "bye"------------comes from the faded voice of Sammy.

Scene bhushan house

Like everybody moreanians are also getting ready for the college. But wassup wid nupur? She looked too tensed and is runnin all over searchin something.

Gunjan (noticing dis): kya baat hai di? Kya kuch dhund rhi ho?

Nupur (nervously): ha gunjan. Wo Human Rights k upad jo project may aur mayank bana rahe the na, won hi mil rhi hai!

Gunjan: yeh baat. Isme padeshaan hone wali kaunsi baat hai, mil jayegi.

Nupur: aise kaise mil jayegi. Tu janti nhi gunjan, agar mayank ko pata chal gaya na.............to wo toh  mujhe kachcha hi kha jayega. By god.......uska gussa pata hai na!!!

Gunjan (naughtily): janti hu mayank k gusse k barein mein, pad yeh nhi pata tha k meri dib hi kisi se darti hai.

Nupur (feeling a bit awkward): darr..........main kab............ki...si se darr ne lagi?

Gunjan: achcha!  Nupur: ha......sirf mayank ko chod ke. Aur jab se maine use I LUV U kaha hia, wo to mujhe apni persnl property samajhta hai, isiliye baat baat pad hokum chalata hai............

And luks towards her small sis pathetically. Both of them starts laughin. Suddenly gunjan's mobile strts ringin.............."gunjan tera phn baj raha hai.........tu ja aur main bhi chalti hu" and nupur leaves...........b4 leavin she again turns bck, "gunjan kyat u mere saath aa rhi hai?"

"nhi di, aap jaiye main Sammy k saath aa jaungi" & she picks up the phn while nupur leaves.

Gunjan "hallo"................."uhm.....uh.....m (as if clearin the throat)....ji gunjan ji............kya aap neeli akash k tale khade aapke mitra shriman Sammy mahashay k saath maha vidyalay jaane k liye kripya karkethoda shighra....................shighra.................

On the other side gunjan smiles as she is able to understand that Sammy  has 4goten the rest of the lines or rather has 4gotn shukla sir's shudh hindi gyan. "thik hai main aa rhi hu......"

"ji ha, bhavesh ji aapka intezaar kar rahe hai"

Gunjan comes down and finds Sammy standin outside the house with his bike watin 4 her..........

Gunjan: chale

Sammy: kisne roka hai?

Gunjan: Sammy

Sammy: yes gunjan............

Gunjan gives a fake angry luk on which Sammy starts smiling. Sammy: ok lets go.

On their wa 2 coleg Sammy as usual starts blabberin----------tellin everythin happend the previous day, as because of the party he was not able to share it wid gunjan. And gunjan the silent listener.......... "ha yeh lo coleg aa gaya aur meri daily news bhi abhi k liye khatam. Tum jao main bike park karke aata hu."

Gunjan says ok and starts movin towards the coleg building. After movin for 2-3 steps she turns and comes bck to Sammy, "kuch kahena hai gunjan? Tum wapas kyun chali aayi?"

"wo main tumhe yeh dena bhul gayi thi" n hands over a tiffin box to Sammy. On openin sammy's face lite up wid smile as it contains gajar ka halwa. "waise to tumhe yeh bahaut pasand hai par aaj iski tumhe zarurat bhi hai" . Sammy luks puzzled. "ghar se bhukhe paet nikle ho, agar kuch nhi khaoge nhi to basket ball practice kise karoge" , and givin a sweet smile she leaves for her class.

                "Sach mein u r my best friend gunjan, mere bina kuch bole bhi tumhe sab pata chal jata hai........................aur ek main hu jo tumhe uske saath compare.................yeh sheena bhi na...... (slappin  his forehead herself).............uski baton ki wajha se hi..............." but b4 he could complete the sentence in his mind, he felt somebody snatched something from his hand only to find uday openin the tiffin box.

Alas! Tiffin box sirf khol hi paya pad shayad uske andar rakhkha hua halwa khana uske naseeb mein nhi hai. He did not feed himself 1 spoonful, Sammy hit him hard on head & took the tiffin box bck sayin, "yeh mera hai" .

An irritated uday replies, "pad aaya to mere ghar se hai na aur banaya bhi to meri hi favourite sis ne"

Sammy (keeping his hand around uday's shoulder): ha ha very smart. Shayad tu bhul raha hai, teri bahen meri bst friend hai. Aur wo yeh mere liye layi hai.

And he leaved the place eatin the halwa while Uday followed him beggin for just at least 1 spoonful.

On the other side gunjan on her wa to classroom...."aaj Sammy ka mood thik hai. To kya use suhani aur raj k barein mein baat karu?.....................nhi agar aise hi bol dungi to pata nhi shayad wo gussa ho jaye.....koi aur tareeka apnana padega".

Suddenly her eyes felt on the basket ball court......................"idea! loha hi lohey ko kaat sakta hai" .........she leaves but didn't go to class, instead she went to princi's office.

After some time she comes out with a big smile, "kaam ho gaya" & leaves for her class.....................

 

[Note:what is gunjan upto now? How far wil she go to brin raj n Sammy 2gethr?how long wil gunjan n Sammy be friendz?

Guys i knw u all wnt to c sajn moments...............me xtremly sorry for not been able to give much of it.................n for dat u need to wait sum time more..............wo kahawat suni hai na----- "sabr ka fal meetha hota hai"...........so plz, hope u wil be co-operative n ya don 4get to pst ur comment . hope u wil like it n if u do so do press the like button.............n i'm tryin my level bst to post the nxt ud today n8 if nt den by 2mrw. Til en read dis prt n snd me ur comnts.

C ya