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Phir Milenge - SHAADI update pg 34 (MJHT FF) (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 December 2009 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by seema.mittal2

Heyyyy dhruv
Nice part
Plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm


Thanks Seema :D Welcome
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@Fariaa- Thanks so much for da commentz....lol..they'll be fine..thxx...haha..sure..I'll try to make my updatez long...!
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Day 8

In hosptial

Doctor: Hmm..zara si chot aye hai Nisha ko, aur Shruti ki saans rukh gayi thi paani key niche
Ansh: Doctor, kya hum inhe waapis academy leh ja sakte hai?
Rohit: Haan, doctor sari formalities bhi puri ho chuki hai…
Doctor: Well, I'm sorry, but they need about 3 to 4 day bed rest for complete recovery
Tarun sir: I see doc, okay I will give my group a 4 day break. Waise bhi, hum is halat mein training nahi kar sakte..
Ansh: Thank you sir for understanding
Tarun sir: No prob Ansh, tum sab meray bachon ki tara ho.
(Tarun sir leaves)
(Ansh and Rohit enter hospital ward)
Rohit: (holds shruti's hand) Kaisi ho ab?
Shruti: (coughs) Tikh..tikh hoon mein
Ansh: (leans on Nisha's bed, and touches her bandaged forehead) Dard to nahi ho rahe na?
Nisha: Umm..thora sa…(laughs)
Ansh: Tum bhi na Shruti kya zaroorth thi paani mein jump karne ki? Mene ka tha na ki wait karna humari!
Nisha: Wo..umm
Rohit: (interrupts moment) Ansh, rehne do na, baad mein baat karthe hai, chalo academy ki jeep agi hai, chalte hai.
(everyone sits in jeep)
Nisha: Ansh, mujhe bahut ajeeb sa lagra haii (touches head)
Shruti: (cough cough cough)
Rohit: Hmmm, Ansh kya tum soch rahe ho jo mein soch raha hoon?
Ansh: Yupp, driver zara campus park mein drive karna.
(they reach campus park)
Rohit: Follow me guys..
(10 minutes later after walking in park)
Shruti: Wow…(amazed)
Nisha: Yeh jaaga! Kitani pyaari hai!!
Ansh: Ao, picnic table pay behte hai..
(everyone eats lunch)
Rohit: Umm, ab game kehle ek?
Nisha: Game! Wow!
Ansh: Depend karta hai Rohit..
Shruti: Let me guess, Truth or Dare? Right Rohit? Tumhari favorite college pass time game…mujhe yaad hai..
Rohit: Wow chasmish! Impressive..
(takes out empty green bottle, and spins it)

Day 9:

(Rohit spins the bottle, and it lands on Shruti)
Rohit: Hmmm...so Shruti, truth or dare?
Shruti: Umm..truth?
Rohit: Okay..so..kya yeh sach hai ki tumhe lagta tha ki agar tum mujhe chor kay chali jao gi, toh mein tumhe bhul jaonga?
Shruti: Mein chahati thi ki meri jaane kay baad tum mujhe bhul jao..
Rohit: Lekin, college mein jo hua tha wo kya tha..?
Shruti: Rehne do na Samrat, baad mein baat karte hai..
Rohit: Nahi, Shruti mein jaana chahata hoon.
Nisha: Rohit, mein tumhe patati hoon..
Shruti: Di..lekin
Nisha: Hmm..Shruti sach to ek na ek di samne aana hai..aur koi rishta juth ki buniyaad per jaada der tika nahi rehta.
Shruti: (nods head)
Nisha: Yaad hai Rohit jab hum play kare they?
Rohit: Pride and Prejudice?
Nisha: Haan, tab ki baat hai...jis din tumhne Sheena ko propose kiya tha purey college kay samne. Shruti ka dil tutgaya tha uss din, uske sapna bikhaar gaya they, lekin woh chahati thi ki tum kush raho. Isliya, Gunjan ne faisla karliye, ki us din kay baad woh apne ap ko tumse door rakhe gi, woh tumhe apni paarchaii ki parak bhi nahi aani daygi. Woh kabhi bhi nahi chahati thi ki uska pyaar tumhare aur Sheena kay beech aye. Sheena jaanti thi ki Shruti Rohit say pyaar karti hai, lekin Shruti nay Sheena ko ek kasam di thi. Ek kasam ki tumhe kuch bhi na pata chale. Shruti ne mujhe bhi kasam deh rakhi thi. Aur phir, ek din, Karan, ki excel college mein entry hui. Karan, jo Morena mein tha, Shruti ka best friend.
Rohit: Hmm..mujhe yaad hai, yeh Karan...Shruti mujhe woh bilkul bhi nahi acha lagta..huh..
Nisha: Karan Shurti ko bahut chahata tha woh use itni mohabbat karta tha...lekin..
(Rohit becoming angry)

Precap: Rohit ko bilkul acha nahi lagta Karan, aur woh use ek basketball game challenge karta hai..kyunki woh college ka champ hai, lekin Karan bhi, Rohit jitna smart, aur cool hai..




Edited by Dhruvii - 16 December 2009 at 1:11am

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yippee!!!!!!! im the first to comment it was a really nice part
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fabulas upddates dhruv
really awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Hey really nice one....keep it up
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awesome update...
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heyyy dhruv
Really nice update
Now ur telling the whole past
That will be intresting
Plzzzs continue soon
N thanx for the pm

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