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wowowow tht was awesome

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Posted: 13 December 2009 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Thankz Sana...Fariaa and Dmgmjht..

@Lucario- Yeahh..my name is Dhruv =D

@Seema- Thxx..nd yeah..there is a misunderstanding...between both jodi'z....don't worry mysteries will reveal soon.. =D

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DAY 5

Nisha: Kya matlab hai tumhara Anshuman?
Anshuman: Shruti Rohit ko akela chor gayi thi kyunki usko lagta tha ki who usay pyar nahi karta..lekin tum janti thi ki mein tum se kitna pyar karta tha..phir bhi tum..
Nisha: Mein Shruti ko akela nahi chor sakti thi….aur mein janti thi..ki agar hamara pyar sacha hai..to hum ek na ek din phir milenge..
Anshuman: Lekin…who note jo tum ne behja tha jana se pehle
Nisha: Woh..mein nahi chahati thi, ki tum mujhe naaraz rahoo jab mein chali jaoingi, isle takin tum nujhe nafraat karo, meine tuhe woh nakli note diya tha.
Anshuman Kya..kya yeh sach hai..
Nisha: (tears in her eyes) Tumhe kya lagta hai..ki tumahri Nisha tumhe aisa hi chor kay chali jaigyi? Mein sirf tumhari hoon...
Anshuman: (hugs Nisha)
Rohit: (hugs Shruti)

Momentarily..*knock knock*

Rohit: Yeh kaun hai…?
Anshuman: Lagta hai ki Tarun sir neh hume dhund liya hai..
(everyone keeps a distance from each other now)
(Anshuman opens the door)
Tarun sir: I'm sorry, mujhe ap sabko akela nahi chorna chahiya tha..
Nisha: Nahi…koi baat ni sir….who actually humay bhi diyaan dhene chaiya tha….
Tarun sir: Okay, ab chalte hai jaldi se…kyon ki kal sabko 6:00 am hall mein attendance ki liya ponch na hai..correct?
Everyone: Yes sir!

Day 6:

*everyone says good night to each other, and leave for their rooms*
That night everyone has trouble falling asleep, they keep receiving flashbacks of their lovely times spen together.

5:00 am

Nisha: Good morning Mumbai!!!!
Shruti: Di, ap itni jaldi uth gay?
Nisha: Are wa, Shruti, tum to mujhe pehle uthgayi!
Shruti: Haan di, aaj ka din bahut khaas hai hum sabka liya...
Nisha: Acha? Kyun?
Shruti: Kyon ki,aaj pehle din hai training ki liye, aur Tarun sir ne kaha hai ki late mat hona!!
Nisha: Uh..chalo phir tyaar hotein hai..

In boys room

Anshuman: Utho!! Utho Rohit!! Kahaan koh gaya??
Rohit: Huh..kisi kay khayalo mein..
Anshuman: Uska liye bahut time hai, lekin tyaar hone mein sirf 40 minutes bachein hai!!
Rohit: *startles up* Kya, sirf 40 minutes?
Anshuman: Haan, mein tyaar hoon, ab bas tum jaldi sai naaha dokhe bahaar niklo!
Rohit runs toward bathroom

5:50 am
All cadets in lounge

Nisha: Lo, dekho ab ayein hai yeh dono..
Shruti: Di, lekin 10 minutes pare hai meeting start hone mein..
Rohit: Hey, beautiful! (says to Nisha)
Shruti: *angry now*
Rohit: (starts laughing) Are mein to maazak kar raha tha..
Anshuman: Good morning Nisha...
Nisha: Hello Ansh..tum kaise ho?
Anshuman: Mein, bilkul fit and fine!

Announcer: SILENCE!
*everyone lines up in rows*
Announcer: It is 6:00, and we don't have time to waste, everyone go to their instructors.
Tarun sir: Okay..ab tum sabko ek test pass karna hai.
Rohit: Test huh? Who to mere bayan haat ka khel hai..
Tarun sir: Acha, dekhtai hai..tum sabko yeh obstacle course complete karna hai. Aur jitna aisan yeh lagta hai, utna hai nahi, so be careful. First round, you will have to climb this 50 feet brick wall. And in order to complete each round, everyone has to pass it. Clear?
Everyone: Yes sir!
Rohit: Okay, me pehle jaata hoon, phir tum sabko help karta hoon, okay?
Ansh: Sure dude!
Ansh: Okay, apna par yahaan rakhna.
(Rohit is half way up, then starts to stumble on the rope)
Shruti: Be careful!
Nisha: Don't worry, he'll be fine!
Ansh: Hmm..ab Shruti tum chalo.
Shruti: Mein,..tikhe hai..
(Rohit yells from the top: Araam se aana Shruti!)
Ansh: Haan haan, who dyaan she ayegi!
(Shruti finally reaches the top, but as soon as she lets go of the rope, she is about to fall back down, but Rohit grabs her arm, and swings her over the wall.
Rohit: Tum tikh ho na?
Shruti: Thank you..(blushes away)
Ansh: Okay, Nisha tum tyaar ho na?
Nisha: Ab…jaana to pare ga na…erm…agar mein girgi..?
Ansh: Mein tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga! Do you trust me?
Nisha: Khud se jaada.
(Nisha grabs the rope, and starts climbing up, but her hands slip off the rope, and as she tumbles down, Ansh catches her in his arms)
Ansh: Tum bhi na Nisha! Ab mujhe hi tumhe leaky jaana pare ga upar!
Nisha: Kya! Tum mujhe carry karke upar jao gay?
Ansh: Hold tight!
(Before Nisha knows they have reached the top)
Rohit: Acha, dude tum Nisha ko impress kare ho?
Ansh: Mujhe Nisha ko impress karni ki zaroorth nahi hai dude!
Nisha: Acha, dekhte hai…
Rohit: Ooo…lagta hai Nisha is playing hard to get..
Nisha: Aur nahi kya, itna intizaar kiya hai, toh thora hor hi si? Kyun Ansh?
Ansh: Hmm…we'll see.
Shruti: Ab agar tum sabke bateein hogi ho toh next course per chalein!

Tarun sir comes

Tarun sir: Next obstacle, you have to swim into the lake and bring back the rings which are inside it.
(everyone leaves to the lake)
Shruti: Paani bahut deep hai!
Nisha: Haan, aur humein swim karna nahi ata..
( a group of girl cadets pass by named Jenni, Tina, and Arti.
Tina: Wow! Look girls, these girls don't know how to swim!
Jenni: Oh my god, what bhenji type people are they!
(Shruti and Nisha are getting angry)
Arti: Kasha, hum is team mein hote…cool guys..huh girls?
(everyone's angry)

EPISODE END

Precap: Despite the fact that Shruti and Nisha don't know how to swim, they jump into the lake to get the rings! Everyone is shocked. What if they drown! OMG!




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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
Part 1 and 2
awsome plot Dhruv
and I want to know about the past


Edited by rkmnkp - 14 December 2009 at 4:23pm

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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
Part 3 Kool, so there is misunderstanding among Rohit and Shruthi
Kool
want to read next part
 

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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
OMG awsome part Dhruv
Aushmaan and Nisha don't know how to swim and they jump in the lake ot get the rings???????
AwsomEEEEEEEEEEEE.
and their hug in the begining
awwwwwww,
nice FF
I realli love it.
But the only problem is that
that its a little hard 4 me to understand
Mayank as Aushmaan
Nupur as Nisha
Gunjan as Shruthi
and Samrat as Rohit.
Since I am used to their name a lot.
lol
Par sacchi mein love ur concept
and superb job
too good.
And please add me in your pm list,
aur haan
update karna nahi bhool na.
Do cont soon.
-Lina-

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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
awesome update
the scenes were so cute
and sweet
loved them
oh no!
hope the girls don't drown!
continue soon!

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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
@Lina- Thanks so much! =D Yeahh..sorry I knoe it can get very confusing with the names...! Very sorry bout that... =D Thankz so much for ur awesome comments..means a lot...! =D

@dmgmjht- Thanks so much....appreciate it loadz! Haha...I got da suspense building rite..lolzz

Thxx guyz..u all rock

Dhruv

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