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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
hey don't do that i mean put some romantic scenes for yuvi and naina,  otherwise it is good

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Hey everyone! Sorry for taking forever to post part 3...I have the story written upto like part 6 but i just can't get the time to type it up! Confused But Thanks  a lot for your comments i am happy to know there are people out there who appreciate my work. Smile Soooo, here's Part 3 and i'm gonna add the next part ASAP!!!! Thanks- Adiba.
 
 
Part 3
 
The next morning, Tam and Sid arrive at Sanjeevani.
Sid:Hey miss gayeb! Kya haal hai?
Tam:(smiles)Hum acche hai. Aur tum? Kal raat ki race kaisi thi?
Sid:Oh ! It was awsome i mean so cool u should have seen it!
Tam:Achha.. Sid woh hum tumse kuch kehna chahte the...
Sid: Yeah sure kaho na...
Tam: Woh hum tumhe thanks kehna chahte the safal project pe humara saath dene k liye.
Sid: Woh to tum already keh chuki ho na?
Tam: Haan par thik se nahi kaha tha..agar tum america chale jate, to phir humara sapna toot jata aur sab kuch khatam ho jata.
Sid: Oh yeah you r always welcome yaar!
Tam: Agar hum tumhare liye kabhi kuch  kar paye to hume khushi hogi...
Sid: Ok then i'l remember that!
They both smile.

Tam starts reading a file. JP, Naina arrive.

Naina: Hey guys! Good Morning!
Sid: Hey Naina!Hey JP!
Naina: Hey Sid! Hey Tamanna!
JP: Arre subah subah aap logon ne yeh kya hey hey laga rakkha hai! Humra sarr dard se phata jaa raha hai aur aap sab hai ki bas hey hey mein lage hue hai!
Sid: JP! Kya ho gaya hai tujhe? Itna gussa kyun ho raha hai??
Everyone's a bit confused!
JP: Are ka kahe! Kal raat humare ghar k saamne ek dhongi baba ka show chal raha tha aur sari raat uske bhajan sunte sunte hamari nind ur gayi kaano mein itni sari ghantia baji k aap ab mujhe ek chalti phirti mandir kehke bhula sakte hain..
Sid: Ok mr. Ghanti, ab cool it!
Jp: Kya cool it? bolne se hi ho jata hai kya? humara jo neend kharab hua woh wapas to nahi milne wala!
Naina: Aur iske bareme chillane se bhi kuch nahi hoga!
Jp: Chillana? Yeh appko chillana lagta hai? Kal raat agar app waha hoti to aapko pata chalta chillana kya hota hai!
Naina: Are JP, dekh ab kuch zyada hi bol raha hai! Teri himmat kaise hui mujhse aise baat karne ki?
Sid: Oh hello, tum koi miss India ho kya jo koi tumse aise baat nahi kar sakta?
Naina: Kya kaha...............
Then there's a chaos! Sid, Naina and JP start shouting and arguing.

Jiggy arrives and doesn't understand what is going on. He wants to talk but Sid says "Tu chup kar Jiggy!" Jiggy gets scared, steps  behind and steps on Tam's feet. Tam gets hurt and the file on her hand flies off to JP's head and JP looses balance. He can't see anything and his hand hits naina shoulder and naina looses balance as well and amost falls. Just then Yuvi arrives and gets her from falling. They both look at each other and smile. Naina says sweetly, "Kitni ajeeb baat hai na..jab bhi main girti hoon, tum mujhe sambhal lete ho"...Yuvi smiles and says"Haan....Huh??" Yuvi gets her up and goes to his locker. Naina joins the chaos of Sid and JP again but they both keep looking at each other...

Sid has duty with Naina in General ward. He is unable to concentrate properly today. He keeps remembering what Tam said "Agar hum tumhare liye kabhi kuch  kar paye to hume khushi hogi..." And talks to himself..."Kya maangu usse?"
He asks a patient "Dude, bari confusion hai..Tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe kya maangna chahiye?" The patient smiles and says "Aap usse uska dil kyun nahi maang lete doctor??" Sid looks angry "Kya? Dil kyun maangoo? Mein thori hi na usse pyar karta hoon??" "To phir aap jab bhi aate hai bus ushi ki bareme baat kyun karte hai doctor sahab?" Sid smiles but gets angry "Kya yaar, mein suggestion maang raha hoon aur tum ho k..."  another patient comes and says "Tum use dinner pe kyun nahi le jate? Tum dono ek saath time bhi spend kar sakoge aur dil bhi nahi maangna parega!"  All the patients laughs. Sid Says, "Ha Ha Ha , very funny! " He looks angrily at everyone then says,"Par dinner ka idea accha hai..par kya woh ayegi?"

At lunch,
Sid asks Tam if she wants to go for a dinner with him.
Tam: Hum kaise jaa sakte hain...
Sid: Kyun nahi jaa sakti? Tumhe dinner se allergy hain??
Tam: (Smiles) Nahi woh humare baba....
Sid: Oh ..Parents ka prob....let me think...
Naina: Isme think karne waali kya baat hai? Mein bhi chal rahi hoon tum dono k saath!
Sid: Matlab? Tu humare saath kyun jaane lagi?  We dont want any "bin bulaya mehmaan" u know so tujhe aane ki koi zarurat nahi..
Naina: WHat? Thik hai to phir mein nahi aaungi, mein aana bhi nahi chahti thi. Par maine socha tha ki agar mein chalungi to Tam k baba ko lagega ki ladki saath ja rahi hai to woh jaane denge.par jab tu nahi chahta ki mein jaoon to thik hai.....
Sid: Are haan what an idea!!sorry yaar!
Tam: Sid, tum bhina soche samjhe kuch bhi bol dete ho!
Sid: Sorry yaar really sorry!
Naina: (Shows some attitude and then smiles) It's ok!
Sid: Ok then, it's final! Aj raat hum dinner pe jaa rahe he..
Naina: (To Yuvi) Waise agar chaho tum bhi aa sakte ho...
Yuvi: Ji nahi..mere paas aur bhi kaam hai..
Naina: Accha? to phir mat ana..aur JP, Atul tum log??
Sid: (angry and Whispers to Tam)Yaar yeah Naina ka bas chale to puri Sanjeevani ko invite kar le....
Tam: Hume koi problem nahi, Yuvi, Jp, Atul tum sab invited ho...agar aa sakte ho to zarur ana...
Everyone smiles at Tam.


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Edited by adiarmaan - 27 January 2010 at 5:42pm

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Love the ff continue soon!

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Posted: 21 December 2009 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
tamz is so adorable.........inviting everyone for dinner.........lolz......do continue.....i really wanna know thw chaos that they will cause at the dinner

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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Part 4
 
The same night, Sid & Naina are at the restaurant. Sid waiting for Tam & Naina for Yuvi. They become sort of restless.
Naina: Hamesha jiska intezaar hota hai, wohi sabse late ata hai!
Sid: Exactly! Bas ready hokar dinner pe hi to ana hai! Isme kitna time lagta hai?
Naina: Haan yaar! Ladkio ko zyada time lag sakta hai, u know make-up and all, lekin ladka hokar itna late?
Sid: Yaa..(gets confused) What? Who ladki hi to hai!
Naina: What? woh ladki kabse hone laga? Sid tumhara demaag thikane pe hai?
Sid: Oh hello! Mera demag apni jageh par hai, lekin mujhe lagta hai tumhara demag na, kahi ghumne gaya hai!
Naina: Oye! Bohot ho gaya hun! Khud ladke ko ladki kehta hai aur mera demag ghumne gaya hai?
Well, another chaos occurs!!

Yuvi arrives and sees them arguing. He says, "hey guys! Kya hua?". They both say "Shut up!" without looking and continue with their arguement. "GUYS!!" Now Yuvi shouts to make them stop. They both stop and see Yuvi.

Naina: Lo! Yeh aa gaya, ab poocho isse, yeh ladka hai ya ladki!
Yuvi: (shocked) What?
Sid: (confused) What?
NAina: Kya what? Sid tumhi toh keh rehe the na, k Yuvi ladki hai?
Sid: Maine kab Yuvi ka naam liya? Mein to Tamanna....(He remembers that Tamanna's not arrived yet so he gets tensed) Mein dekh kar ata hoon Tam abhi tak ayi kyun nahi....
Sid leaves.

Naina: Oh to itne kam k beech aap ko aane ka time mil gaya?
Yuvi: Haan, maine socha Tam ne itne pyaar se bhulaya hai, mujhe to aana hi chahiye!
Naina: Accha? Tam k liye aye ho? Thik hai phir woh jab aa jaye ushi se baat karna! Mujhse door raho!
She gets angry and looks away. Yuvi smiles and looks at her. He removes the hair from her face and puts them behind her ears. (YuNa Background music? :D) Naina looks at him and they are lost in each others eyes. "Waise yeh main tumhare liye laya tha!" he takes out a pink rose and gives her. Naina smiles and takes it.
Yuvi: Tumhare uss rose-wale ka kuch pata chala?
Naina: Nahi..Par tum kyun pooch rahe ho?
Yuvi: Jo de raha hai uski naak todna hai na, isi liye...Just kidding! (I love the way he says that! :D)

Sid goes outside talking to himself. "Kya samajhti hai apne aap ko? Kudhki party mein itna late?..." he keeps talking and bumps into Tam and they look at each other.
Sid: Tum itna late kaise ho sakti ho yaar?
Tam: Sorry woh...
Sid: Kya sorry? Pata hai mein kabse tumhare liye intezaar...
Tam: (smiles and holds her ears) Sid, hum sorry to bol rahe hai na! Ab chale?
Sid smiles and they both go inside the restaurant.

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Edited by adiarmaan - 27 January 2010 at 5:51pm

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hey nice..
will update again in detail..
good wishes..
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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
in part 3, i loved jp's complaint....so lol...
and the tamanna asked everyone to come...so sweet....:)

in part 4, loved everything from the beginning <3

please keep updating :)
n can u PM me when u update? thanks :)

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Hey guys! posting part 5! Hope u'll llike it.. and also, i probably can't update until saturday sorry about that!Confused but i will try to update soon! Thanks a lot guys for liking my FF, love u all! keep reading and hit the like button if u liked it! cheers! Smile
 
Part 5
So, Tam and Sid get into the restaurant and see Yuvi and Naina sitting together. Sid goes to them and says, "Yuvi, tum zara udhar jaake bathoge?" Yuvi's a bit confused but says "ok" and changes his sit and sits opposite to Naina. Then Sid sits beside Naina and talks to Tam "Haan haan Tamanna tum wohi Yuvi k pasas bath jao! Yaha se mein tumhe thik tarah se dekh paunga!" and smiles. Everyone is looking as Sid in a wierd way then Tam sits beside Yuvi.

Then they all have dinner and talk. After the dinner, there is an announcement which says that it's time to announce the "couple of the day". The announcer says "And the "couple of the day" is...." and spotlight goes to Yuvi and Tam. Everyone claps but Sid-Naina are like "WHAT??" .
Announcer: Congratulations! Aap dono hai ajke special couple. Now please come to the dance floor and have a dance! Aur aap dono ko milta hai humare taraf se ek gift hamper!

Sid: WTH?
Naina:Lagta hai spotlight galat jageh par pohoch gayi!
Tam: Hume to dance karna nahi ata!
Sid: exactly, bilkul nahi ata!
Naina: Haan haan, kuch bhi nahi ata!
Yuvi: Guys stop it! Mujhe dance ata hai Tam don't worry! Let's go warna sabke saamne embarrace hona parega!

He takes Naina's hands and they are off to the dance floor! the music starts and Yuvi starts dancing with Tam (The way Sid had danced with Tam In the "Just Chill" episode?? but obviously yuvi-tam aren't feeling that connection and are not attracted to each other! )

Sid: Yeh kaise ho gaya?
Naina: Pata nahi!
And they both make a face as if they have been fooled and just keep looking at Tam-Yuvi dancing!

Yuvi and tam dance and have some casual talk. Like their hobbies, childhood and other random stuff. By the by, Tam asks Yuvi about his family "Tumhare family mein kaun kaun hai?" yuvi looks a bit shocked and angry. but he still answers the question, "Mere maa aur bhaiya" he doesn't say anything else so Tam says, "oh, tumhare bhaiya kya karte hain?" Yuvi gets even more angry and says "KUCH NAHI!" and looks away! Tam is a bit perplexed and scared at his behaviour so doesn't say anything. After a while, Yuvi realizes that he was being a bit too rude with Tam so he askes her "aur Tumhare family kaun kaun hai?" Tam smiles and says "Bus humari aai, baba aur hum" . Yuvi says "No brothers or sisters? Tum to bohot bore hoti hogi naa?" Tam says "Nahi. Kyunki humare chawl main jitne bacche hain unke saath hum bachpan se khelte aaye hain aur abhi bhi khabhi kabhi khelte hain par internship shuru hone k baad hum unhe time hi nahi de paate!" Yuvi says"Accha? I see!" Tam says "Arre Time se yaad aya, time kya hua hai?" Yuvi says "9.30". Tam looks shocked "bohot raat ho gayi! hume ghar jana hoga!" Yuvi smiles "9.30 bohot raat hai? Abhi to raat shuru hui hai! Anyway, main tumhe drop kardu?" He asks. Then Sid appers from nowhere

Sid: No, thanks a lot dude! Main drop kar dunga, ok?
Yuvi: Alright! If u insist!
Tam: Nahi hum chale jayenge...
Sid: Miss gayeb! Shhh....Chalo!
Tam and Sid Leave.Naina comes to yuvi.
Naina: Kafi accha dance kar lete ho! Waise mujhe lagta hai woh rose tumhe Tam ko dena chaihye tha, mujhe nahi! Then it would have been perfect! Don't u think?
Yuvi: (in the sweetest way possible) Naina! Mein kya karta....?
Naina: Thik hai thik hai!ab mujhe ghar drop kardo!
Yuvi:Jo hukum! (Smiles and starts walking behind Naina)

Sid is driving the car and isn't talking much!
Tam: Sid, Kya hua?
Sid: Kya?
Tam:Tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe?
Sid: Kya bolu ? Ab bolne kiye kuch bacha hai kya?
tam: Matlab?
Sid: Matlab, today it was supposed to be just u & me...Par uss Yuvi-naina ne sab kharab kar diya!
Tam: To is mein gussa hone wali kya baat hai Sid? Woh bhi to humare dost hai. Hum sabne eksaath dinner kiya, baate ki...
Sid: Lekin dance to tumne ushi k saath ki naa? Aur tum dono to aise dance karrehe the as if....
They both give each other a frowned look.
Tam: (a bit angry) Kya? Lag raha tha ki hum uske girlfriend hai?
Sid: (realising his mistake) umm..sorry Tamanna...i didn't mean to say that!....Meine kuch zyaada hi bol diya na?
Tam: Haan
Sid: Sorryyy...
Tam looks away.
They reach the chawl and Tam gets down starts walking.
Sid: Tamanna!
Tam turns and looks at him, angry.
Sid: Plz yaar maaf kardo na! (he holds his ears)..i'm really sorry (makes a cute sad face!)
Tam wants to say something but smiles at the way Sid is saying sorry! He looks so cute and kiddish, who couldn't forgive him?, she thinks and says "It's ok!"
They both smile. "Good night, sid" Tam says and leaves. Sid keeps looking at her....Suddenly gets out of the trance and thinks "Oh god! Mein itna furious kyun ho gaya? Woh to bas dance hi kar rahi thi na!Why did I react? Oh god, yeh Miss gyeb na, mujhe pagal karke choregi!" He gets irritated and leaves.

Naina has opened her chatterbox while on yuvi's bike. She talks about when she's gonna go to dr. shashank's house, what happened to her landlord, how she couldn't finish her packing, what instructions her father gave her and so on.....
Yuvi listening to them and looking at Naina time-to-time through the looking-glass. They reach home.
Yuvi: Bye,naina!
Naina: Bye!
Yuvi: BtW, tum gussa to nahi ho?
naina:kis baat k liye?
Yuvi: Tam k saath maine dance kia ...
Naina: (hesitating) Nahi! Mein kyun gussa hone lagi? Mujhe kya pharak parta hai....
Yuvi: Accha? koi pharak nahi parta?
Naina: (uncomfortable) nahi....
Yuvi: Ok then! see you tomorrow!
 
Yuvi leaves. Naina thinks, "Mujhe sachmuch paharak nahi parta?...Parta hai??...Nahi parta....parta hai??..." she continues to think and gets into the house.


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Edited by adiarmaan - 27 January 2010 at 5:52pm

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