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Posted: 10 December 2009 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Hey guys! I am adiba. I had an alternative story for dmg 2 in my mind so i thought i would make it an FF.. Hope you guys like it! if u have any comments/criticism about my FF please let me know! Cheers! Smile


index


part 1 & 2 : Page 1


Part 3,4,5: Page 2


Part 6 & 7 : Page 3


Part 8: Page 4


Part 9: Page 5


Part 10: Page 7
 
PART 1
The story starts from the scene when Sid drops Tamanna home after their Safala trip. So, they get home and sort of keep recalling their times together.

Yuvi feels guilty for behaving rude with Naina. (After the scene where Yuvi is angry for being unable to find Dr. Shashank's file and asks NAina to stay away from him.)
He decides that even though Naina's gonna live at Dr. Shashank's, he will not drag Naina into this & thinks he should apologise to her. "Hum to sirf acche dost bhi ban sakte hain" he says. But somewhere within his heart, he was falling in love with Naina, so he kept thinking about Naina. He knew he couldn't stay away from her long, no matter how many time he tells her to stay away from her.

Naina at her house, thinks about today's incident and thinks that it's enough. She can't let Yuvi do whatever he wants to her. "Us dafford ko toh sabak sikhana hi parega. Samajhta kya hai apne apko?" She keeps walking around the room and thinks. Suddenly an idea clicks on her mind. "Kyun na main Yuvi ki tarah "angry young man" i mean "angry young woman" ban jau?" She smiles "Wah Naina, kya idea nikala hai! Par yeh to bohot mushkil hoga mere liye!" She goes infront of the mirror and tries to make weird angry faces like Yuvi."Shayed itna bhi mushkil nahi! Itna acting to mein kar hi sakti hoon...Dr. Dafford, kal se tumhe ek nayi naina dekhne ko milegi!"

The next day, everyone arrives at Sanjeevani except for Yuvi. Naina keeps waiting for Yuvi in the locker room and as soon as he arrives, she gets a rude look on her face. Yuvi goes to his locker, gets his things and greets everyone hi. Then he says"Hey Naina!". Naina says "hi" in a very stern way and leaves the locker room. Yuvi looks a bit shocked. "Isse kya ho gaya? Lagta hai abhi tak naaraz hai."

At nurse station, Dr. Kirti gives them duties.

"Dr. Naina & Dr. Prasad: OPD
 Dr. Yuvi & Dr. Atul: General Ward
 Dr. Tamanna & Dr. Siddhant: Children's Ward"

As soon as she says that, Sid is like, "YES!" . Everyone looks at him. he gets a bit embarrased and says,"I mean thank you dr. Kirti!"

Tammy & Sid start waliking to the children's ward. "Waise Tamanna, ab jab humne Safala project thik tarah se complete kar liya hai, hum dost ban sakte hain na?"
Tammy stops and looks at him. she was about to say something when they heard a loud noise of someone screaming. They ran to the children's ward and went to the kid who was making the noise. "Kya hua? Aap chilla kyun rahi thi?"
The kid looks scared and shouts again "COCKROACH!!!"
"Cockroach ? " Tamanna looks scared "Kahan?" She sees the cockroach, screams along with all the other kids and  sort of holds Sid's lab coat, scared. Sid feels a bit uneasy and looks at the scared face of Tammy and is lost in them for a while (you can hear their title music lol) until he realizes the chaos that has been created for just a cockroach and decides to kill it himself. "SHUT UP EVERYONE!" he shouts. "Main kuch karta hun" He gets a broom, and starts to follow the cockroach but can't get it. He roams around the whole chasing it but in vain. The kids are not scared anymore and are laughing at Sid. At last, the cockroach get in a hole and Sid lies down where he was. "iss bloody indian hospital mein toh bloody indian cockroaches bhi hai! Kahaa phas gaya yaar!"

In the General ward. Yuv keeps thinking about Naina. He wonders how to apologise to her if she doesn't talk to him.

In OPD, Naina wonders if her plan was working. "Lunch time pe pata chal jayga" she smiles.

At lunch, Everyone's at canteem except for Naina. Sid is telling everyone about their Safala trip. Naina comes. There is just one chair left to sit beside Yuvi. But Naina shows some attitude and gets another chair and sits between Tam & JP.

JP behaves shy(Like he usually does!) "Arre Flower ji, hume nahi malum tha aap mere paas bethne ke liye itni betaab thi." he smiles.
Naina smiles at him too and looks at Yuvi in a rude way. Yuvi feels a bit shocked and angry.

After lunch, everyone goes back to duties but Yuvi follows Naina and stops her. "Kya hai?" Naina behaves as if she doesn't really care.

"Tum subeh se aise kyun behave kar rahi ho as if i don't exist?" Yuvi says. Naina ignores and starts walking again. Yuvi gets angry but calms himself. "Dekho naina , mein to bas yeh kehna chahta tha ki...."
Naina finds jiggy and starts talking with him. "Damn it! Itna Attitude!" Yuvi says and leaves. After Yuvi's gone, Naina smiles and thinks, "Lagta hai plan kaam kar raha hai!"

At the end of the day, everyone's at their respective houses.

Tammy: "Pata nahi humare Safala project thik tha ki nahi! Kal iska report milne wala hai."

Sid: "Dari hui kitni acchi lag rahi thi miss gayeb.." he keeps thinking about her and falls asleep.

Yuvi: "Dr. Shashank ka woh file to main hasil karke hi rahunga lekin Naina ko kaise manau?" He keeps wondering but suddenly relizes that he shoudn't be thinking about Naina. "Mujhe meri mission pe dhyan dena chahiye, Naina jo bhi kare usse nujhe kya?" But he keeps thinking about her again and decides that he has to apologise to her and talk to her because it feels so wierd when she's not talking to him.

Naina:Ab samajh mein aaya rudeness kya hoti hai ,mr. attitude?? yeh to bas shuruwaat hai! aage aage dekho main kya karti hoon!"

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So, this is all i got for now! if u guys like it, i'll continue! 
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Edited by adiarmaan - 11 March 2010 at 7:17pm

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Posted: 10 December 2009 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
nice
update soon

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"you can hear their title music lol"

LMAO. good beginning.

keep updating :)

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awesome,plz continue soon.

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nice story
for once yuvi gets shock cause of naina's attitude lol
update soon :)
 

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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Hey guys! thanks to those who liked it...got some time to write the next part up so here it is! hope u like it! Smile
 
 
 
PART 2

The next morning, Sid arrives at Sanjeevani and finds Jiggy messing with Naina's locker.

"Are Jiggy! Kya kar raha hai?" he asks.

Jiggy gets scared to see him and says "Woh mein woh woh..."

"Woh woh kya??" Sid's confused.

Then Tammy arrives and Sid goes to her. "Hey Tamanna ! Kaisi ho?"

By this time Jiggy slips out of the locker room and says "Bach gaya! Agar sabko abhi pata chal jata ki maine Naina k locker pe phul rakhkha hai to bewaja meri insult karenge. Par mujhe bhi to use batana parega ki main use like karta hoon" he smiles and goes back to his bed.


In the locker room, everyone's reached there by this time. Naina opens her locker and finds a white rose. She gets sort of happy and confused at the same time. "Kisne rakha hoga yeh?" After thinking for a while, only Yuvi comes to her mind "kahi yuvi ne to nahi rakkha? kal to woh mujhse shayad sorry bhi kehna chahta tha!" She smiles and looks at Yuvi gettin stuff from his locker.


"Sabhi interns nurse station pe report kare" They get the announcement and leave for nurse station. Tammy looks wooried so Sid asks "Kya hua?any problem? Tammy says, "Woh aaj humare safala project ka report aane wali thi na, isi liye.. Sid smiles. "Don't worry yaar. Kuch nahi hoga, Trust me." They both smile at each other.

After assigning everyone their duties, Dr. Kirti tells them about Sid and Tammy's reports and says that it was very good and they won't be suspended from Sanjeevani. everyone is really happy for this and Sid hugs everyone but when he comes to hug tammy, they both get a bit awkward and just shake hands. "Maine kaha tha na, we'll make it! " sid says and tammy smiles.

During their duties, Naina keeps wondering who kept that rose.

At lunch, naina tells everyone about the rose she found in her locker.

JP says "Kya? humare hote hue koi aur aapko phul de, yeh kaise ho sakta hai?"

Sid says "Interesting! waise woh koi bhi ho sakta hai! ek doctor, ek intern, ek patient ya phir ek chaprasi??" he starts laughing.

Naina gets angry at sid "Kya yaar kaha meri help karega, meri problem solve karega, aur tu hai k bus mazaak.."

Yuvi says, "waise Naina, yeh koi problem to hai nahi! kisine tumhe phul diya hai, kaante thori hi na diye hai!" Everyone laughs.

Naina looks angrily at Yuvi. "Waise mujhe lagta hai mein jaanti hoon woh kaun hai par sure nahi hoon."

Jiggy says, "Really? Tu jaanti hai? kaun hai woh?"

NAina "Shayad... par woh to mein sure ho kar hi bataungi" she looks at Yuvi indirectly and tries to figure out what's in his mind. But as usual, he's got sort of an expressionless face so she can't tell anythng from that.

Yuvi thinks, "Naina ko kaun phul de sakta hain? pata karna parega."

At night, Tammy feels thankful to Sid for being with her during the trip and making it a success. "Sid ne humare liye jo kiya, uske liye hume use thanks to kehna chahiye ..par kya ek thanks hi kafi hoga? usne humare sapno ko tutne se bachaya hain." she keeps thinking.

SId on the other hand, wonders if he's gonna go to America or not. "agar mein chala jaunga to Miss gayeb...Miss gayeb ka kya hai? usse mera kya lena dena? kya yaar uske bareme itna kyun sochta rehta hoon? agar america jakar aise dumb behave karunga to meri to naak hi kat jayegi..kya karu kya karu!" he falls asleep.

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 And do let me know whether it's good or bad. Will like to know Smile



Edited by adiarmaan - 27 January 2010 at 5:55pm

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nice update
poor jiggy - he is dead meat once yuvi gets his hands on him lol

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it was awesome,plz continue soon and longer parts.

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