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Sofna IF-Sizzlerz

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Nicely written! lvd th endin....... y sad? Its fiction cn we nt @ least gv him a happy endin.....

but u do hav a lv/hte relatnship with Yuna FF don't u???

U strt 1 thn BANG in th midle thrs a new 1, y nt compile ALL 2gether?????

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Shut Up. It was not at all crappy !! It fact I loved it !!

Nicely written !! And I loved the ending. perfect altogether !

You must write more !!

Appy

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@elo...aww thank you *hug*...true they are a greek tragedy...and that's what makes me sad...I hope they have a good ending even if things turn ugly in the middle

@nitica ... aww thanks *hug*...true it may definately (and hopefully) not happen this way but when Yuvi will fall in love...he will give his everything to her

@Tush...thanks *hug*

@ash...thanks *hug*...it is true when Yuvi will be happy...Naina will be broken...that is extremely heart breaking for us fans...but hey we want that...so Yuvi realizes his love for Naina...RS rocks!! :P...ya i do hope as well that they end up together happily (they better or I am coming to India to make them)

@komz...thanks (lol you don't get a hug because you threaten to stalk me :P)...lol kidding :P

@jen...can I go and give Yuvi a hug...you can give Naina a hug :P...lol what do you mean when's the next? gosh woman...

o ya i didn't give you a hug *hug and sticks out her tongue*

@payal...my superman *hug*...lol that's cus I'm off from school (not that would have stopped me from writing anyways :P)...ya she is Nancy Drew...I would be really surprised if she didn't follow them that day

@sofna...lol ya we should be writing ff that are happy...lol i promise to write a fun-filled one...soon...maybe :P...lol well this is a one-shot...i'll complete the other one...but i didn't think this would fit in my other ff...cus in the other one...Yuvi himself told Naina the truth...btw thanks *hug*

@leah...aww thanks *hug*...lol damn it now you sound like Jen...but don't worry i'll attempt another crappy one-shot...lol they are so short!!!

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1stlyyyyyyyyyyyyy thnk u 4r sharin wid me Smile

n u have written very well Thumbs Up

par.............mera UV akela kyun reh gaya Broken Heart

" jaisi karni waisi bharni" ismein se smthin will cum in near future

do make moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee on yuna n do PM

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Originally posted by 1kaarzoo

1stlyyyyyyyyyyyyy thnk u 4r sharin wid me Smile

n u have written very well Thumbs Up

par.............mera UV akela kyun reh gaya Broken Heart

" jaisi karni waisi bharni" ismein se smthin will cum in near future

do make moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee on yuna n do PM

aww you welcome...lol aren't you my friend... :P i have to share with you

thanks!!...*hug*

well he deserves it after playing with Naina's feelings...but hopefully everything will work out for the better

lol kk...i shall do more writing...it's better than writing 20 page essays :P

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Oh sumi.. that was beautiful.. i feel for yuvi, but i feel more for naina.. its sad.. but he kinda deserves it too !! *sigh* its really confusing on whose side i am.. i keep on oscillating between the two !!

it was amazing , esp how yuvi shouted out his fear.. that was the most endearing part - my heart actually went out to him for this.. its sad where life takes u.. and we are going to see naina's heart being broked and yuvi;s mission being fullfilled simultaneously !! what a pity !!

oh, n i forgot to add before.. thnks for the PM!!

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Nice one Sumi...For once I would like Naina to give Yuvi the now hot now cold treatment. Lets see him suffer through it!

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oooow!

its amazing!

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