Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 3

mahi......congo on ur 2nd thread dear.......n update ws really awesome n superb n  vry sweet....😳😳😳...plz continue soooooooooon

such an awesome part! well done on the second thread... please do continue!=)

very nice update....loved it...

hey u r a wonderful ff writer mahak ,,, wow i loved this ff ..  but i hacve the same complaint too ,,, thr romantic scenes were too less yaar

awwww mahak awesome update loved it......it was great....now plzzzz continue soon

Awesome part mahak

heya Mahi!!!
first of all...congo on ur new thread!!!
den....sry 4 d l8 reply!!!
now...twas an awesum upd8 yaar...
twas really xelent!!!
par kitna chota tha yaar...huh!!
but twas really superb!!
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)

gr888 prt

hi mahak
]i will not say this is not romantic actually
it is sweet and romantic
i love the way she said sunyeji and the way they show
i love it mahak
 
you write very very good
dil se
 muje ye padker kuch yaad aa gaya wahi write ker rahi hoon
  " kuch baatein dil se samjatein hein
     kuch baatein aankhein kahtein hein
     kuch baatien tum kahtein ho
     kuch baatien hum yo samjayein hein
     lakin jab bhi hum milte hein kyo
     lab kuch kahten nahi bus aankhein bola kartin hein
     bus aankhien bola karti hein...........
     saanso ke aahat hoti hein
     jab tu chupke sa aata hein
    aata kuch or nazar na jab samne tu aa jata hein...
    mere dil per tera pehra hein...........
    mere dil per tera pehra hein...........
    kya tujko batoo mein mera pyar kitna gehara hein...............

this is the most lovly poem one written frm my diary
and im second time writing it on net
this is for you
batana kassie lagi........
luv you
aditi

thank youuuuuu so much ur fantastic and u really good at thissssssss