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Posted: 07 December 2009 at 10:46am | IP Logged
hey guys..........this is the link to my first thread........

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1250238

thank u..........

click here to read all the removed parts of the story....

all the removed parts of my story

"life in a movie"

are pasted on my own site.....

mahak-goel.webs.com

they had to be removed cause people were copying its lines......

the lines originaly written by me........

but put up by some unknown people on various sites.........

so i removed all the parts,........

but if u wanna read them...........

then follow the following steps.........

mahak-goel.webs.com
>my blogs
>life in a movie

all the parts r posted by me there..........
and all the story is through comments by me.......(mahak).......so u can read them there.......
and one more thing........do check the second page of comments........it has reached the second page too......

and all my stories r pasted there........if u want u can check them out........


well "life in a movie" is a story about love, betrayal, marriage, fault, suspense, criminals, guilt, and etc......it shows us the trauma of nupur and mayank who meet 5 years after their breakup of marriage....they loved each other to the core in past.....nupur hate mayank to the core in present...but will time give them second chance???? what had happened in the past??? will the movie they r shooting for will make them realise that they r made for each other???? will they accept each other and forget abt the past? or will they loose each other forever?

to know more........keep tuned to "life in a movie" by Mahak


new thread link is- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1326825

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 03 November 2010 at 4:46am

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hey guys......

i still can't believe that this is my second thread going........

u guys have given me sooooo much love that i even can't tell u..........

u guys always encouraged me to write more and more.......

thank u all soo much.......

for showering the love on me........

thank u for encouraging me to publish my work........

i never knew that my work will be considered as tolerable enough.........

i never even thought that my first ff "life in a movie" can cross more than 50 pages.........

but u made it upto 150 pages!

thanks for ur love........ i was tremendously gratified by u love...........

thank u.........

and keep the shower of ur love falling on me continuously...........


my links to other ffs-

my short story gallery-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1278042

arrange marriage mayur-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1297288

my one shot gallery-
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1300068

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part 14 on page 1

promo on page 10

part 15 on page 18

entire story so far on page 24

promo on page 31

part 16 on page 42

promo on page 55

part 17 on page 64

promo on page 79

part 18 on page 92

promo on page 109

part 19 on page 122

promo on page 140

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 18 January 2010 at 11:03am

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story so far- mayank aur nupur ek film shot par milte hain......vahan par unki life se related hi scenes hote hain......nupur hates mayank......gunjan is mayank's fiance.....mayank loves nupur......ek shot ke beech mein nupur ki lipstick mein poison nikalta hai........she goes in serious condition..........mayank is revealed to be her husband.....samrat is dia's father......dia is nupur's daughter.....mayank recalls his past......the way they met.......the way they fell in love........and the way they got married........

ab aage-

coloured text is past and black is present........





past-
The wedding was completed and now one thing remained........

their room.......

today they had broken the wall that separated them......

at least....

After the vidaii.......

and all the rituals,

Nupur went with mayank to his house.......

their house.......




In the room-

Mayank was astonished……..

the room looked so beautiful……

and Nupur was sitting on his bed but not like the filmy serials one…….

but with her delicate legs down…like on a chair...

she shivered on hearing the door next to her close…….

Mayank too was nervous……

he did not know what to say……



In the dim light of candles, they saw each other……..

as if they were mesmerized by each other's beauty……

the room had no light except the light due to the candles……

there were roses spread all over the ground….

and as for Nupur and mayank……

they looked tooooo beautiful in the dim light of candles…..

their bed was also decorated with roses….

nupur's favourite……

mayank's favourite....

or perhaps.....

their favourite.......



Then suddenly, Nupur started crying.....

she was missing her family......

mayank asked to stop crying but she couldn't........

she had left her family......

she did..........

Mayank on seeing her cry, hugs her in order to console her…..

he couldn't see tears in her eyes......

he simply couldn't.......





present-

Par us waqt mujhe kahan pata tha ki ek din main hi tumhare aansoonyon ki vajah ban jaaonga?

Maine tumhe bahut dukh diye hain.....

par phir bhi Nupur tum uth jaaona please......

main tumhe dard mein nahi dekh sakta hoon.....

nahi dekh sakta hoon......

and mayank was crying like the hell still holding nupur's hands.......



They hug each other passionately……….

and Nupur stops crying at once……..

a sudden feeling overcomes them………

a feeling which cannot be explained….

mayank puts his hand on her delicate waist……..

and she moves her hand to and fro on his back….

they were enjoying each other's closeness…..

this time they did not separated quickly...…..

after some time they realize each other……..

and feel shy……

silence……



Mayank started moving towards her……..

she moved two steps back…….

he moved ahead……

she moved back until she was stopped by a wall……..

he came very close to her………

very close…..

and she could not escape as on her back was a wall and in front mayank……



nupur felt her heart beat running very fast……..

and as for mayank, he was overcome by a feeling of love……….

he simply adored her……

she was an angel and she was his……….

he came very close to her….

so close that their noses were touching each other…….

nupur was very astonished at his behaviour…

she could not understand what was happening……

but whatever was happening……

she loved it……



Nupur- suniye.....aap mujhe chod dijiye...

Mayank- suniye? Angel yeh kya hai?

Nupur- who maa ne kaha tha ki shaadi ke baad apne pati ko unke naam se nahi bulana chahiye......

Mayank- par hamari to love marriage hai na?

Nupur- par maa......

Mayank then drew her more closer to him.....so close that.....

Mayank whispered in her ear – to…….? Ma ne tumhe yeh nahi kaha ki tumhe apne pati ki har baat manni chahiye?

Nupur was somewhat astonished but she controlled herself.

Mayank- to tum mujhe mayank kahogi na?

Nupur- ji

Mayank- ji…..?

Nupur- I mean.....haan theek hai…….main tumhe mayank hi kahongi..



Mayank then wrapped a necklace around her neck…the necklace made of diamonds……

Nupur- yeh kis liye?

Mayank- aaj se tum meri ho…….yeh hamari pehli raat ka gift…….

Nupur felt too shy to speak……

too numb to say anything..…



They talked for sometime and then…….

Mayank went back and asked her to sleep……..

coz the day was tiring…….

they both slept……

not like that……..

but on one corner each……..

nupur wanted some time for it and so did mayank……





hope u all liked the update!
its not that there aren't any romantic updates........
its just that i will update them later..........
right now they need to understand each other more closely........
and give time to this new relationship...........

plzzzzzzz comment.........
it makes me feel grt.........
and plz hit the like tab........
and regarding the pm facility........
do tell me who wants to be informed and who not.......'
i wont trouble anyone now.........

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Posted: 07 December 2009 at 11:28am | IP Logged
am reading tis fic fr te frst time!!mujhe kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aa rahi hai~~

samrat is dia's father???nupur is dia's mother??gunjan is mayank's fiance???nupur is mayank's wife?????

ok am gng bonkers!!! cross connection n proper connection kaise ek saath ho sakti hai?

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Posted: 07 December 2009 at 11:30am | IP Logged
aww, that was very sweet Mahak...........loved it

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Posted: 07 December 2009 at 11:40am | IP Logged
OMG! OMG! OMG! Blushing
 
Mahak...What an interesting part!
Woww...U made my day so spcl=) Hug
 
U really rock , No mistakes...Just too excellent!
 
The romantic scenes was less again...But the way u MIX the hugs...the closeness it was outstanding part.!.!.! Embarrassed
 
I hope see this Mayur hug in real! How u describe it, It was so good!
 
You're an amazing writer Mahak!
 
This part was the BEST...I understand that they must know each other so well...Ur idea is tooo great!
 
Waiting for next update *Must be ROMANTIC* LOL
 
You rock! Clap
 
Can't wait for ur next update=)
Aisho .


Edited by Karan.P.Rocks - 07 December 2009 at 11:41am

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wowwwwwwww this is so uniquely written and is so colourful and alluring,
 
great work, keep it up!

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