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FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END (Page 7)

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Posted: 19 December 2009 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
wowowow tht was cool really amazingg
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Posted: 19 December 2009 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
thank you guys for such nice compliments but wait for the twist that will be coming in the next part.
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amazing updates
loved it to the coreeeeeee
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Posted: 20 December 2009 at 2:35am | IP Logged
hey nice parts pls update soon
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Posted: 20 December 2009 at 6:25am | IP Logged
really nice..continuee soon
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Posted: 20 December 2009 at 6:39am | IP Logged

part 5

the boy was going to enter just then dia stopped that boy.
 
dia-'u r late!isliye tumhe ander ane ki koi permission nahi hai.tumne yaha keh rules nahi pade kya?tumahra naam kya hai?
boy-'adhiraj.....adhiraj hai mera naam.mujhe ane mein thodi der hogayi.agae seh nahi hoga so please let me come in.'
dia-'okey! tum ander aa sakte ho but from next time be on time.'
adhiraj-'hmm'
dia-'ok guys and gals ab hum partners choosing shuru karte hai'
everyone starts digging their hand inside the tub and start finding for their partner.
nupur-'are gunjan yeh dekh mere ball mein red flowers ka pattern hai tere may kya hai'
gunjan-'mere mein purple stars bane hai! di tumahre mein kya bana hai?
suhaani-'mera yellow colour ka hai'
three of them start finding for their partner and gunjan finds someone waving his hand with a purple stars ball.
gunjan-'excuse me!mera bhi same patern ka ball hai'
the boys turns to her. it was adhiraj
gunjan-'tum....tum toh adhiraj ho hena'
adhiraj-'ha aur tum?
gunjan-'main.....gunjan hoon'
gunjan felt happy as she is not samrat's partner
on the other side samrat finds a girl waving her hand with a red flowers pattern colour ball and his ball's colour was also with red flowers pattern
samrat-'tum toh nupur ho hena gunjan ki best friend right!
nupur-'right!'
samrat and nupur both becomes sad as they don't want to become partners.
mayank-'mere ball ka colour bhi yellow hai'
suhaani-'aur mera bhi'
they both smiled slightly
nupur-'samrat voh mujhe tumahra partner......'
samrat-'mujhe bhi tumahra partner nahi banna tha actually.....'
they both screamed toghther-'mujhe toh mayank/gunjan ka partner banna tha'
nupur-'ab kya kare?'
samrat-'ek idea hai!'
he whispers something to nupur's ear
nupur screamed with joy-'yessss! ab hume time waste nahi karna chahiye'
samrat-'right!'
nupur-'thike tum jaldi seh power circuit ke pass jao thike'
samrat-'okey!'
 
to be continued...........................................................
i am afraid that this part is quite short but i will surely try to post the next part longer.extremely sorry for not sending u all pm as i am not an active member so can't add u all in my buddy list and pm u all.i hope u all understand.eagerly waiting for your responses.Smile
 

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Posted: 20 December 2009 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Great update!!!
i wonder what's Samrat's plan to make Gunjan his partner??
pllzz continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 20 December 2009 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MoNaYaRoX

Great update!!!
i wonder what's Samrat's plan to make Gunjan his partner??
pllzz continue soon!!!!
u will be knowing it very soon!Wink

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