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Wow really nice update..sajan and mayur scene was cute.....continue soon...

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wowowow tht was cool

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part 4

As they all went inside they were surprised to see such a big dance acadamy school.their were beautiful red curtains,sparkling lightening ,tiles flooring and beautiful bunch of flowers strucked at the wall which were making the place dazzling.
 
nupur-'yeh.....yeh toh bohut sunder hai....its beautiful!'
gunjun-'ha nupur yeh jagha kisi heaven seh kam nahi lagti'
samrat looking at gunjan-'aur ek beautiful girl ne bhi is jagah ko aur beautiful bana diya hai!'
gunjan becomes a little shy after hearing the compliment of samrat
suhaani-'voh kaun hai....joh red sleevless top aur short skirts mein waha khadi hai?'
they saw a beautiful cool girl was standing on the stage with a mike in her hand.
girl-'hey everybody!welcome to the world of dance.....'dance acadamy school' from where aapka career shuru hona wala hai so give a big hand of applause for that whoooo....'
mayank-'par yeh kaun hai?...kahi hamari dance teacher toh nahi!'
samrat to himself-'wow!itni hot girl! hamari dance teacher.... maza aa gaya'
gunjan-'tumne kuch kaha samrat!'
samrat-'main....maine nahi... nahi kuch nahi kuch bhi toh nahi'
girl-'mera naam dia hai and am your new dance teacher and this is benji your dance steps correction teacher!'
benji-'hi!tum logo koh yaha bohut kuch sikhne koh milega aur bohut maza bhi aayage so all the best guys!'
dia-'toh aaj hum log sabse pehle partners select karenge'
gunjan to herself-'yes! ab mujhe is museebat samrat ka partner nahi banna padega jo maine promise kiya tha kyoki partners toh yeh decide karenge'
dia-'yaha in saare tubs mein bohut saare colourful,designer aur different patterns ke crazy balls rakhe hue hai aur iske upar cardboards laga diye gaye hai jise koi cheating na ho sake toh sabko yaha ake ek ball nikalna hoga aur jis boy aur girl ka ball same hoga vohi dance partners ban jayenge'
nupur to herself-'arre vah bohut maza ayega kash mayank aur mera ball same nikal aaye'
samrat to himself-'kash mera aur gunjan ka ball same nikal aaye'
gunjan to herself-'kahi mera aur samrat ka ball same nikal aaya toh!...nahi nahi please bhagwan asa mat karna'
 
suhaani and mayank were looking at their faces suprisingly as wat happened to all of them.
 
just then a handsome boy with some kind of intention enters and stands at the door of the place and everyone was looking at him.
 
 
to be continued................................
i hope u all liked.comments/critize r required.i shall be waiting for itSmile
 
 

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great update.. luved it.. Clap Clap
continue soon.. n plzz add me in ur PM list... Smile

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heyyyy
nice update
i think we all know who are gonna be partners
n i think the guy would be adhiraj
plzzzzzz continue soon
 
 

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