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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sajan_Ekta

Lovely Part!Clap but It was too Short next time a bigger one! Continue soon!
thanks sajan_ekta.....yes sure the next part will be quite longer.

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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 5:13am | IP Logged
heyyy arushi
it was a really nice update though short
plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm

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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
really nice part...awesome

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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
am so sry for late update
an awesome update loved it man
also loved the songs put in it
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by seema.mittal2

heyyy arushi
it was a really nice update though short
plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
thanks seema.mittal2 

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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lucario

really nice part...awesome
thanks avi...

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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekts

am so sry for late update
an awesome update loved it man
also loved the songs put in it
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
thanks a lot ekts......

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 1:01am | IP Logged
hi guys! how r u all doing? well,this is the last part of my FF as i am going to end up my story because my mind was not getting any further idea to drag my story.i know that after reading many will get disappointed as they all have expected more and for that i am really very sorry but still i hope that u all will read and give comments.........Smile
 
part 22
 
after reaching to the camp mayank and samrat stops suhaani, nupur and gunjan
nupur-'kya hua?tum hum teeno ko ander jaane seh kyo rokh rahe ho?'
samrat-'voh nupur...bhai tum logo ko kuch batana chahta hai.'
nupur-'kya?'
mayank-'mere paas us murderor ko pakadne ka ek plan hai...magar mujhe iske liye tum sab ka saath chahiye.'
gunjan-'hum sab tumahre saat hai mayank'
mayank-'toh suno.....he tells his whole plan to nupur, gunjan and suhaani.'
nupur-'mayank yeh toh bohut acha plan hai'
mayank-'haan nupur aub hum is plan ka anjaam thik raat ke baaraa baje denge kyoki hum camp ke liye sirf ek din keh liye aaye hai aur humare paas time kam hai isliye jo karna hoga aaj raat ko hi karna hoga.main yeh baat bohut ache seh jaanta hoon ki voh murderor aaj phir seh kisi ko marne ki koshish karega isliye main poore plan keh saath tayaar hoo'
suhaani-'lekin mayank police ki poore force bhi toh hai...voh apna kaam nahi karegi?'
mayank-'voh zaroor karegi....magar jabse us khooni neh nupur peh humla kiye hai tab seh mera vishwas police par seh uth chuka hai'
just then dia interuppts and says-'tum log yaha sirf baate hi karoge ya kuch masti bhi khaoge!'
samrat-'mam bas hum aa rahe the'
dia-'okey!'
they all went inside the resort where many dishes were kept and some games were also arranged.
dia-'okey so lets play truth-dare game'
everyone sat in a circle and placed a bottle in between and the game started.
at first it came on mayank and on her opposite suhaani was sitting so nupur makes a sad face then suhaani hurriedly pulls nupur at her seat and sits at her seat and co-incidendtly nobody notices also.
nupur has to ask so she asks-'mayank truth or dare?'
mayank-'truth'
nupur-'acha toh tum batao ki tum mujh seh kitna pyaar karte ho?'
mayank-'main tum seh utna pyaar karta hoon jitna koi romeo juliet seh nahi kar sakta,jitna koi ranja heer nahi kar sakta aur jitna koi majnoo laila seh nahi kar sakta.'
nupur blushes slightly and everyone clapped for him.
then they again moved the bottle and it cames at gunjan and to her opposite samrat was sitting.
so samrat asks gunjan.
samrat-'gunjan truth or dare?'
gunjan-'truth'
samrat-'gunjan kya tum mujhe sabke saamne apna boyfriend maante ho'
gunjan blushes and then said-'haan samrat main tumhe sabke saamne apna boyfriend maanti hoon'
everyone clapped for her where as suhaani and nupur were surprised that how their innocent gunjan became so bold'
dia-'okey guys now its time for some food.
they all have their food and then in the evening they played blind folded game which they were really enjoying.
then it stuck 11:00 o' clock in the night and they all gone inside their respective tents.
all were slept accept our gang who were constantly waiting inside their tents for 12:00 o' clock.
suddenly gunjan heard a noise at 11:30 pm.
'gunjan mujhe bachao...gunjan please mujhe bachao'
gunjan-'yeh toh samrat ki aawaz lag rahi hain'
she went out of her tent and was going inside the dark bushes and somebody was following her with a rifle raised at her just then he was going to shoot.samrat holds that man who by mistaken shoots at the tree which frightens gunjan and she turns at her back and saw samrat holding a man who was trying to shoot her.
gunjan-'sam....samrat yeh...'
samrat-'gunjan bhaago yaha seh jao'
gunjan-'nahi samrat'
samrat-'gunjan please tumhe meri kasam'
gunjan looked at him and leaves just then samrat took that rifle from that man's hand who has covered his half face with a hankerchief.
samrat-'ab jo main kahoonga voh tum karoge straight chalo otherwise i will shoot u'
the man obeys him and walks straight just then everyone gathers over there and samrat pulls that hankerchief out from that man's hidden face and everyone were shocked it was adhiraj.
suhaani-'adhiraj tum.....maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki tum itne gir sakte ho'
mayank-'toh voh tum the jisne nupur ko jaan seh maarne ki koshish ki thi'
samrat-'aur aaj shayad gunjan ko bhi mar dalta agar meri neend nahi khulti aur gunjan ko us ghane bushes ke beech jaate na dekhta.
police-'ab aap sab hum pe chod dijiye ise ase saza hogi jaha seh yeh kabhi nahi nikal payega'
nupur-'vaise yeh jaan toh le ki aakhir isne yeh sab kiya kyo'
adhiraj-'kyoki main best dancer banna chahta tha aur main apne career keh beech mein kisi ko aata nahi dekh sakta tha'
dia-'aur isliye tumne kitno ko jaan seh maarne ki koshish ki...'
benji-'tum in sabki sazaa milni chahiye'
the police force took adhiraj in the jail.
from then their lives changed and after one year samrat ,gunjan, mayank and nupur got a chance in a dancing movie and suhaani was taken in that movie for a supporting role and later gunjan got married to samrat and nupur got married to mayank and suhaani got married to aakash as they both liked each other when they were in dance acadamy but never told and our nupur finds it out and dia got married to benji and at last all the couples lived happily ever after.
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