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Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

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When r u updating..??
right now!

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gr88...m waiting 4 ur update...plzz pm me....

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 11:02am | IP Logged
part 21  
dia-'lets play a game'
dia's words made adhiraj and suhaani came in their senses and they started looking here and there.
 
benji-'antakshri'
nupur-'haan! bohut maza aayega'
 
dia-'acha thike doh-doh ka pair banaate hai....joh jinke saat baithe hai voh ek doosre ke partners hai okey'
everyone were ready for the game and then the chance came to adhiraj and suhaani.
 
dia-'tum dono ko 't' seh koi song gana padega'
they both started looking at each other.
nupur-'come on yaar....t seh kitna simple hai'
 
adhiraj looks at suhaani and sings-'tum ko paaya hai toh jaise khoya hoon...
kehna chah hoon bhi toh tum seh kya kahoon....
kisi zubaa mein bhi voh lavz hi nahi......
ki jinme tum ho kya tumhe bataa sakoo.....
main agar kahoon tum sa haseen......
kayanath mein nahi hain kahi......
tareef yeh bhi toh sach hai kuch bhi nahi.....'
 
everyone starts clapping for adhiraj even suhaani also gets a little surprised then she also starts clapping.
benji-'okey now ab samrat aur gunjan ki baari...tum dono ko 'h' seh gana hai'
 
samrat looks at gunjan lovingly and then says-'yeh song gunjan keh liye...'
gunjan becomes a little shy then samrat sings-'hmmmm.....pal mein hi mujhko mila pal naya haa....
kuch milaaa haan kuch magar kho gaya haa....
kya karoooo kya naheee....
lavz mein tum kahi....
hosh mein dil nahi....
tere aa jane seh...
tere aa jane seh....
tere aa jane seh hooooo'
then they all heard a soft voice.it was gunjan-'pal mein hi mujhko mila pal naya haaa...
kuch milaaaa haan kuch magar kho gayaaaaaaa'
then again samrat smiles and sings-'
kya karoooo kya naheee....
lavz mein tum kahi....
hosh mein dil nahi....
tere aa jane seh...
tere aa jane seh....
tere aa jane seh hooooo...'
they all cheered for them loudly and samrat and gunjan starts smiling.
 
then its turn for mayank and nupur
dia-'tum dono ko bhi 'h' seh gana hai.
 
mayank starts singing and looks at nupur-'hulchul hui....'
n-'zaraa shor huaaa.....dil chore hua ....'
m-'hmmm teri ore hua....'
n-'hulchul hui....'
m-'zaraa shor hua....'
n-' dil chor hua....'
m-'teri ore huaaa...'
n-'asi chali jab hawa ishq hua hai hua.....'
m-'oh asi chali jab hawaaa ishq hua hai huaaa....'
they all clapped for them and finally they reach to the camp.
 
to be continued..............................................................
i know this part was not that gud Confused..but still i hope u all liked it.....comments/critisize r requird....Smile

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 11:10am | IP Logged
awesomeeeee update..
bt itna chota kyu..?? next tym try to give a longer update..
luved d sajan part.. omg.. sam sang pal mein hi for gunji.. n den gunji too joined him..!! Day Dreaming awww.. soo sweettt.. luv dat song..!!!
lovely update dear..
luved it..
pllzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sajanroxx20

awesomeeeee update..
bt itna chota kyu..?? next tym try to give a longer update..
luved d sajan part.. omg.. sam sang pal mein hi for gunji.. n den gunji too joined him..!! Day Dreaming awww.. soo sweettt.. luv dat song..!!!
lovely update dear..
luved it..
pllzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
thanks jyotika....actually i was feeling very sleepy thats why can't able to write more but the next part will be longer.

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awsome yr i loved it please cont soon n thnx 4 the pm

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 12:53pm | IP Logged

hey awesome chapter

Felt really good while reading itSmile

Thanks a million

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wowowow tht was amazingg part

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