FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END - Page 4

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thanks alot cutegurl224 and shafoo.
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hey  really nice parts..........continue soon.tc
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love at first sight for samrat...nice
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part 3
 
gunjan-'tum....tum ne asa kyo kaha?'
samrat-'maine kya kaha?'
gunjan-'jada bhole mat bano.....tum khud ko samajh teh kya ho?yeh sab ulta seedha kyo kaha?'
samrat-'dekho gunjan...tumhe sad nahi khush hona chahiye kyoki girls mujhe apna bf bananaa chahti hai main unhe nahi....tum shayad pehli asi ho jise maine khud opportunity di hai apni girlfriend banne ki toh kya banogi?'
gunjan-'kyaaaaa?bilkul nahi,abhi jab di aur nupur aayengi tab tumhe unhe sab sach batana hoga samjhe!'
samrat-'okey par ek sharth peh'
gunjan-sharth!kaise sharth?'
samrat-'tumhe dance mein mera dance partner banna padega bolo banogi?'
gunjan felt a little hesitated and  then said-'thike lekin pehle di aur nupur ki galat famie sort out karo okey!'
samrat-'okey!'
just then mayank comes there and asks to samrat-'samrat?tu yaha kya kar raha hai fees nahi jama karega?'
samrat-'arrey fees....main toh bhool hi gaya tha'
mayank-'tu chod tujhse kuch nahi hoga yeh paise mujhe deh main he jama karke ataa hoon'
then mayank took the money from samrat's hands and went to the fees collecting office.mayank enters in between the queue and nupur starts yeiling at him without seeing his face as he was standing in front him by saying-'oh hello?dikhta nahi hai yeh line hai !asa kaise beech mein  ghus sakte ho? apne aap ko samajh teh kya ho?...........and then mayank turns back and says-'oh sorry main peeche lag jata hoon'
nupur was looking and looking at him... her eyes were not blinking for a second and then mayank asks-'kya  hua? tum asa kya dekh rahi hoon?'
then nupur realizes what she was doing and she bent her eyes down and says-'nahi... kuch nahi tum yaha lag sakte ho its ok'
mayank-'thanks waise mera naam mayank hain aur tumahra?'
nupur-'nu...nupur'
mayank-'hmmm....very cute name'
then mayank and nupurdeposites the fees and nupur and suhaani went to gunjan and mayank went to samrat.
suhaani-'hum agaye gunjan'
just then mayank came there and says to samrat-'chalo samrat maine fees jama kar de'
and mayank and nupur saw each other with surprise and says together-'tum?'
mayank-'main samrat ka bhai hoon'
nupur-'main gunjan ki best friend aur suhaani ki dost hoon.....samrat,tumne apne bhai ko nahi bataya ki tum gunjan keh bf hoon?'
mayank-'kya....bf....samrat??
gunjan was looking at samrat so that he tells the truth
samrat-'no asa kuch nahi hai main toh sirf joke kar raha tha main gunjan ka bf nahi hoon maine toh gunjan ko pareshan karne keh liye asa hi kaha tha...sorry gunjan'
gunjan smiles a bit and says-koi baat nahi tumne sach bola yehi kaafi hai'
mayank-'acha thike ab bohut bate hue ...'.chalo ander chalte hai practice start hone wali hai'
nupur-'haan thike'
and they all went inside the acadamy.
 
to be continued.............................................................................
 
 
i hope u all liked it.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.
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awww such a cute update! 😳
realllyyy liked it! πŸ˜ƒ
do continue soon dear!πŸ˜ƒ
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Wow really nice update..sajan and mayur scene was cute.....continue soon...
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thank a lot cutegurl224 and lucairo