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very nice and cute update!
especially the sajan scene... =D
and nups and mayank were gud too..
keep writing =D
HinaL

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tht was awesome

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Great Update
plzzz continue soon!!!

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lovelyyyyyyyyyy updatessssssssss

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                                                                   part=8
after class mayur went to the canteen n found sajan sitting with the gang....
n=hi guyss....uday tum class kyu nahi aye????
u=woh..upsss....esehi..
n=class bunk karna buri baat haa...
s=kya???? yaar dia..please mujhe pinch karna kahi ma galat to nahi sun raha hu?? di aur class bunk na karna..baat kuch jami nahi...
n=sam..apna mu band rakh!!!! varnaa....
s=ok...
m=kyu samrat ne kuch galat kaha?????? tum classes nahi karti thi kya????
n=nahi..woh kya ha na ke kabhi kabhi bunk karti thi....par abhi nahi karti ab to regular classes jati hu...
b=ha abhi nupur har roz classes jati ha...
d(in mind)=ye di....diko kya hua ha??? aj kaal regular classes jati ha jabki di exams ke ilawa kabhi class ki shakalbhi nahi dekhti thi....phir aaj????
g=bhai..pata ha aaj na miss aha ne ek naya project dia...
s=jisme ma aur chashmish i mean gunjan partners ha...
n=woh..ma aur mayank bhi....
g=bhai...ma aur samrat is project keliye khub mehnat karne wale ha...
s=ha...project ma bhi taki drama me bhi hum 1st asake....
n=mane aur mayank ne deal ki ha ke mayank project me mehnat karega aur ma uski help karugi..aur phir drameke time ma mehnat karungi aur woh meri help karega.....
m=ha.....aur pata ha nupur ko project karte hue mss aha bohot khush hui thi....
samrat,dia,uday,benji=nupur aur project????????????????
m=ha...kyu?????
n(in mind)=oh no....agar sabne bata diya ke ajtak me koi bhi projetc nahi karti to mera sara banaya khel bikhar jayega aur phir dia se bet bhi har jaungi aur apna image bhi gaya!!!! nahi..mujhe kuch karna parega...
n=kuch nahi..mayank...ye log ese choke ha kyuki ajtak mane sabko project,exams me help kia ha..aur aj tumhe phirse kyuki khudka project ha na...
m=kyu??? tume pehle kabhi kia nahi kya?????
n=kia ha na..par akele..isbaar kisiki help..isiliye inko dhakka laga....kyuki ajtak nupur shergill ne kisibhi kaam keliye kisiki help nahi li....rite guys?????
all r confused so they just nodded except samrat...becuase he knew she was just doing to win the bet n he didnt want that as mayank was his frend
d(in mind)=oh..ab ma samjhi..di ye sab mayank ko impress aur phir bet jitne keliye karrahi ha..manna parega my didz is he best!!!!!
g=ma....coffee leke ati hu.....
s=tum ruko ma bhi kuch sandwitches leke ata hu.....benji chal.....
b=ok....
a girl=dia...tumhe principal bula rahe ha.abhi....
d=now?????oh no..guys ma abhi ayi...uday mere ane tak mujhe table pe mere chocolate donats with milkshake dikhne chahiye warna tum is college me nahi dikhoge.....
u=ok..lata hu..he also goes with samrat n benji....
m=ab tum dono betho ma project keliye kuch boooks leke ata hu..abhi aya
now there was only gunjan n nupur..
g=nupur....
n=ha?????
g=tum samrat sebohot pyaar karti hoona?????
n=matlab??? ye kaisa sawal ha gunjan????? ofcourse..is duniya me ma apne bhai aur behen se sabse zyaada pyaar karti hu..they r the most precious thing in my life....
g=mujhe pata ha..mane bass esehi pucha...uss din tumhe dekkhe....
n=woh kya ha na ma samrat ko kabhi iss halat ma nahi dekh sakti......is duniya me mujhe sabse zyada dard tab hota ha jab mere bhai behen ko takleef hoti ha.....
g=kabhi??? matlab usse ye pehle bhi ho chuka ha????? nupur was now quiet...
g=bolo nupur..samrat ko ye kaunsi bimari ha???? jissse woh achanak se itna bimar..sar dard....kya ha ye????
n=woh...gunjan....before she could complete samrat benji n uday came...
s=ye lo chashmish...tumhari coffee....mere sandwitchess...benji ka burger....aur di ka noodles...
n=thnxx sam....
u=ufff....ye dia kaha ha??? dhamkake kaha chali gayi????
n=ab..usse princine bulaya ha..atihi hogi....
d=hey guyss..i'm back...
n=kya hua????
d=kuch nahi.....woh...kaal ki test match agle hafte ha.....
s=what????? par kyu???? agar princiko ye lagta ha ke ma bimar hu aur khel nahi paunga then thats wrong i'm fine..ma abhi batake ata hu...
d=bhai..esi baat nahi ha..woh riffles college ke bb team ke captain ka accident hua ha....hath me chot ayi ha..isiliye agle hafte....
s=ma to ghbara higaya tha....
g=ghabrao mat samrat(holds his hand) sab theek hoga..aur agle hafte ha isse tum aur bhi acchese practise kar paoge ha na?????
samrat gives a smile to her n both starteat each other.......while others are looking at them n smiling....
n=samrat......no response....
b=abe.......he pushes him....
s=ha?????? kya ha yaar benji????
b=abe..nupur bula rahi thi..
s=oh..sorry di...
n=koi baat nahi.
then mayank comess.....
m=nupur.ye rahe bookss.....
n=books???? as she never opened a single book.....
s=ab kya hua di?????????
n=kuch nahi.....kya karna ha??????
m=tum baas inmese notes banake kaal le ana baki ma karlunga....
n=notes aur woh bhi kaal???????
m=ha..kyu koi problem ha????
n(in mind)=ha...bohot bari...mane ajtak koi book khola bhi nahi...ur aj nnotess????? aur woh bhi kaal???? kaise he bhagwan please kuch to karo....
m=nupur...
n=ha....thik ha ma karlungi......
m=ok...phir abhi class chale?? shukla sir ki class ha...
n=ha...chalo...bye guysss....
b=nupur...tumhara noodlesss.....
n=kaal khalungi...notes bananeme mehnat karni hogi na.....
then mayur goes to class....
s=chashmish mujhe kya karna ha????
g=kuch nahi..samrat tumne kaha yehi bohot ha..ma karlungi aur agar help chahiye hoga to bata dungi...
s=zarur batana....kyuki tumhare lie ma kuch bhi kar sakta hu.....(mjht tune starts to play) n both smile at each otherr....dia uday n benji r watching n enjoying all thiss....benji comes to dia n whispers
b=ye kya horaha ha????
d=love....
u=gunjan...
b=n
d=samrat........
all=yess......
then they hear the bell ring n there eylock breaks...
g=woh......
s=ab...mujhe practise keliye jaana ha....
g=samrat......
s=ha?????
g=class nahi chaloge??????
s=ab tumne kaha ha to mana bhi nahi kar sakta...chalo.....
b=par dude..abi to tu bb ke liye jane wala tha..
s=abhi class ja raha hu..koi problem?????
b=nahi...ja..bye....
s=tum dono bhi araheho......
d=hum?????
s=ha..candy...
d=ok..bhai..uday tum bhi jao....
u=ok..badme milta hu....
they show sajan walking together n mayur walking together......!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope to enjoy my part!!!!!!!!!


Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 07 January 2010 at 3:34am

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 6:32am | IP Logged
nice part

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very nice, continue soon..............plz pm me wen u do

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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
hi!
very nice part..
really liking sajan connection ;)
keep it up..
HiNaL

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