love ne bana hi di jodi - Page 8

Posted: 14 years ago
Really nice update.Please continue soon..
Posted: 14 years ago
wowowow tht was really amazinggggggggggg part
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
diya is right
samrat is in love!
continue soon!
Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy maisha
really nice update
sajan scene was really nice
plzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
Posted: 14 years ago

yaar mujhe nhi pata tha diya k paas dimag bhi hai 😉

wel thn x 4 d pm
Posted: 14 years ago
heyy i just started reading thi ff...read all parts today. really good concept....with different character sketchs....i REALLYYYYYYYYYYYY dont like nupur tho...shes such a bitch...how cud u play wth someones feeling like that. I know shes nice inside...and shes doing it for her image and all..but still poor mayank....this is interesting to see what happens. I reallyyyyy hope that mayank doesnt fall for her but instead she falls for him...and looses the bet....it would b a nice lesson for her...plus also wud be different to what usually happens in serials...cz usually they normally win the bet breaking the others heart etc etc....
any way reallyyyyyyyyyyy good concept....loving it. cant wait for the next part!!
please add me to ur pm list!! :)
Posted: 14 years ago
cool story, do continue and PM me when you do ;D

Raviie.x
Posted: 14 years ago
                                                                     part=10
in the canteen....
sajan n mayur sitting when rest of them join
n=kaha the tum log?????
u=hum plan bana rahe the...
dia kicks on his leg..
n=plan?????
d=di..woh...
b=ab nups..hum saab aj sham disco janeke soch rahe the....
n=woh...kya idea ha...
s=ya......whats say chashmish?????
g=ab...ma disco nahi jaati samrat....
n=gunjan....comeon jab jaogi nahi to pata kaise chalega ke kitna mazzaa ata ha????
d=ha..babes hum thorina drink karte ha..buss thora enjoy karne keliye...
u=ha...tumhare begar humare plan ka kya fayda?????
everyone looked at uday....dia glared at him so benji spoke up...
b=humara matlab....humne ye gettogether ek sath sabkke sath milkar banaya ha...ab mana maat karna...please...
s=chalo na chashmish....
m=maan bhi ja gunjan
g=ok....
n=ye hui na baat
s=ok..mayank aur chashmish..ready rehna...
m=ma nahi aunga...
g=kyu bhai?????
m=are....kaal report ki tayyariya karni ha...notes banani ha...
n(in mind)=are...agar aj ma disco gayi to kaal kahi reports isse deneke time mayank ko shak na hojaye..mujhe nahi jaana chahiye....
n=ab...ma bhi nahi aungi...
s=kyu didz???? ab tum kyu nahi aogi?????
n=mujhe kaal ke notes ki preparations karni ha...tum jao...
d=cool...so gunjan ready rehna...bhai ayega lene keliye..winks at benji...
s=ok.....
g=thik ha...
benia n uday
b=dia..plan ke mutabik sab thik horaha ha...
u=ha balki ab to aur accha ha..mayank aur nups nahi arahahe...
d=age age dekhte jao....lekin uday apne mu pe control rakkho..ulta sidha kuch bola..to esa thappar parega....
u=nahi...sorry dia..
d=so guys..see u at night....
at the evening...
nupur...
n=uffo..is bet ke chakkar me aj disco nahi ja paungi...
d=di......
n=ha?????
d=r u sure tumhe nahi ana ha?????
n=ha kyu??? ese kyu puch rahihha????
d=nahi...kyuki aj sare servants chutti pe ha na...to ghar me tum akeli???
n=chinta mat kar...i'll b fine..wase humara hero kaha ha?????
d=gunjan ko lene gaya ha..accha ma bhi chalti hu..benji aur uady ko bhi lena ha..bye di..
she hugs her n gives a kiss on cheeks,...
n=bye..dolll....
sharma house..
m=gunjie jaldi tayyar ho ja...
g=ayi bhai..she comes out wearing a blue suit....
m=are wah...bohot acchi lagrahiha lekin tera chashma?????
g=lenses pehne ha....
m=accha....ja aur khub enjoy karna...
g=ok...
bell ringss...gunjan opens it...it was samrat...he was going to come in but seeing gunjan he was still..he couldnt move just stare at her....her eyes..her smile...her innocence....
g=hi....
s=hayyy....
g=samrat....
s=oh sorry..hi r u ready????
g=ha..i'm ready chale?????
s=ok.....they sat on the car n left..for disco.....
nupur...
n=uffo..ab kya karu?? tv pe kuch acha bhi nahi ha....
just then the bell rang.....
n=ab kaun agaya??????? shankar....uffo..ma bhul gayi koi naukar nahi ha..chal nupur aj tu khud darwaja khol...
she opens the door..n is....shocked!!!!
n=TUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM???????????????????? YAHA????????????????????????????????????????????
guys...sorry for delay n short update.....enjoy..n do comment...
Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeee update dear..
luved it..
pllzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
Posted: 14 years ago
hey great ff
read all the 10 parts in one go
plz add me to ur pm list

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