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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 8:05am | IP Logged
reallly cool update..........loved it....continue soon

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wowowow tht was cool

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
hi!!
thx for the pm..
nd abt the part.. i think it was very nice!!
just 1 bad part tho.... some of the wrds are very hard to understand...  im not being mean but if yu could improve that.. then yur ff will b amazingg
=)
hope yu dun mind for the suggestion ;)
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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
hey awesome part
so samrat fainting
after hearing sameer...
wow, this is interesting
continue soon!
 

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Posted: 16 December 2009 at 1:23am | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 16 December 2009 at 5:06am | IP Logged
lovelyyyyyyyyy update
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                                                                       part=5
gunjan dia nupur benji uday brought samrat in the rest room...
n=benji....isse aramse letao..dia jake princise samrat ki half day ki chutti leeke aaa...
d=ha...uday mere sath chalo....
b=ma pani leke ata hu......
n=jaldi....then nupur sat beside on side of samrat while gunjan was sitting on the other side.gunjan was damn scared for samrat which nupur noticed.
n=gunjan....tum thik ho?????
g=ha...(she wiped her tears) woh samrat ko dekke.....thora....ghabraaa....
n=it's ok....samajhti hu...pehle tum apne asu pochlo..aur relax ho jao...
g=ma thik hu...lekin nupur samrat ko hua kya ha?????
n=ab....wo...h....acc...tu.allyy...gunjan...
corrider
d=sir please sir..bhai ki halat bohot kharap ha usse chakkar agaya ha aur woh faint bhi hogaya ha please aj half day ki chutti chahiye...
pr=dia..lekin perso test match ha tumhe yaad ha na?????
d=sir bhai ko iski tension hum sabse kahi zyadaa ha..
u=aur sir...samrat ek ese player ha jo practise na karke bhi sare baskets karke game jitega..
d=please sir..aur aj agar woh bimar raha to kaal bhi thikse practise nahi kar sakta
pr=okay..okay..thik ha..lekin samrat kaal tak bilkul thik hojaana chahiye...
d=ofcourse sir..thank you sir....
pr=all the best....
u=chalo...
mayank heard all this as he was standing behind..dia n uday turned n saw mayank standing...
d=oh..hi mayank....(dia likes mayank n whenever she sees him she starts blushing n sweetly smiling as always she does)
m=hi dia..tum log abhi samrat ke bareme kya bate karrahe the????? dia was just staring at him...then uday pinched her...
d=oooouyuuucccccchhh.....oh sorry..actually mayank woh bhai ko chakkar agaya aur woh behosh hogaya....
u=aur parso bb ka test match ha isiliye usse ghar lejaneke liye half day ki chutti lene aye the..
m=abhi woh kaisa ha???? kaha ha???
d=bhai rest room me ha...behosh ha...
m=mujhe usse milna ha...
d=chalo...
rest room....
g=bolo na nupur..samrat ko kya hua???
n=woh actually....just then dia came...
d=di......
n=ha?????
d=princi ne permission dedi ha...
n=accha..
then samrat was coming in sense...
s=ddiii..........iiii.......nupur turned to him.....
n=sam....samrat...tu thik..ha???
s=gguu....n..n.ja....n....
g=samrat ma tumhare pass hu...she holded his hand n samrat also holded them tightly..slowly he opened his eyes...
s=nupur...di......looked at nupur...
n=ma yehi hu..idiot....
s=gunjan........
g=samrat..me yehi hu.....tumhare pass....he looked at gunjan...
s=tum ro kyu rahi ho?? ma thik hu....
g=dekh rahi hu kya thik ho....
d=ab abte hoayi ho to ghar chale?? bhai ko rest ki sakht zarurat ha..
n=ha....chal samrat.,...aram se...then mayank came...
m=nupur tum rehne do ma madat karta hu..he pushed nupur back n helped samrat..
s=dude..tu yaha?? class nahi gaya....
m=class jane wala tha dia ko principalse bat karte hue suna...
s=candy bhi na...dude ma thik hu..tu ja..
m=dekh raha hu....khara bhi nahi ho paraha ha....
s=par...
b=samrat abhi chup beth aur ghar chal..benji n uday helped samrat n took him to the car...
n=dia...tu gunjan ke sath bahar ja ma  ati hu..
d=ok di.....
there was only mayur...nupur then turned n started to cry.,.....mayank saw her n came to her..
m=kya hua nupur?????
n=kuch nahi...please mujhse akele chod do mayank....
m=kabhi kabhi akele rehneke badle kisike sath problems shae karneese better feel hota ha...aur shayed tumhara case bhi kuch esa ha...
nupur looked at him...
m=kya baat ha samrat ko leke tensed ho????she nodded n quickly hugged him..her face was on his chest.mayank didnt no what to do...but looking at her condition he hugged her back to control her...
n=mayank..ma samrat ko ese nahi dekh sakti..ma apne bhaise bohot pyaar karti hu...usse is halat me dekke...mujhe....
m=nupur..tum ghabrao mat..sab thik hojayega..samrat abhi thik ha....
n=ye pehli baar nahi ha.usee bachpanse...ese kabhi kabh..lekin kabhi bhi woh behish nahi hota..aj....ma bohot daar gayi thi....
m=nupur..pehle tum shant hojao....aur relaz karo...after sometime nupur came in sense.she realized that she was still hugging mayank n so she let go off him....
m=it's ok..koi bata nahi...
n=thankss...
m=nupur..tum sabke smane kitni cool ho....is college ki diva ho...par undarse itne naramdil ki...kamzor..ye to tumhari image ko bilkul suit nahi karta...
n=ma baharse zarur strong hu par undrse nahi hu mayank..apni bhai behen ko musibaat me dekke ma khudko sambhal nahi sakti...
m=phir dikhaya kyu karti ho???? tum ese uprse dikhati ho isiliye to tumhe takleef zyada hoti ha...apni feelings ko dabao mat unhe bahar ane do..tab dekho..itni takleef nahi hoti ha...
nupur looked at him n smiled...
n=thanks mayank..tumse baat karke bohot accha laga....aur dard bhi thora kaam hogaya
m=koi baat nahi.ek dost hi to dusre dost ke kaam ata ha...
n=dost???
m=oh..koi baat nahi..mujhse dosti karogi????mayank raised his hand ...nupur looked at him...
m=ma itni asanise kisise dosti nahi karta..aur ladkiose to bilkul bhi nahi....
n=to tumhe kisne kaha ke ma ladkose asanise dosti karti hu???? lekin tumse karni paregi...n she gave him her hand....
m=frends forever.....
n=ok..they smiled.......
parking....
d=dhyanse udayy...
u=ha..sorry dia..sam dhyanse beth...
s=ek minute...
g=kya hua?????
s=mujhe tumse kuch kehna ha.......
g=samrat..tumhari tabbyat...
s=guys..mujhe aur gunjan ko akele chod do....5 minute...
d=ok..chalo..they left them alone....samrat came to gunjan n holded her hands..
s=gunjan...pata nahi kyu mujhe ese feel hota ha ke ma tumhe 2 dinse nahi bohot pehlese janta hu..koi ese rishta ha jo mujhe tumhari taraf khichti ha....jo mujhe tumhare pass lati ha...tumhe dekkar ma ek ese jahan me chala jata hu jiska koi pata nahi...
g=samrat.......
s=i'm sorry agar tumhe buara laaga...
g=nahi....
s=lekin mere dil me ye baat tabse ha jabse ma tumse mila hu..ek baat jo tumhe batana chahta tha...
then the rest of the gang came....
n=samrat chale????
s=ha di...lets go...
n=bye gunjan.....bye mayank...
m=take care...
d=bye guys....they went home....
gunjan was alltime thinking about samrat's words..


Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 19 December 2009 at 10:51pm

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Posted: 20 December 2009 at 12:20am | IP Logged
hi maisha,
awesome,awesome update.
loved nups concern 4 sammy.
like sajan also.
And specially loved my mayur part very much.
mayank is so sweet.
this an lovely update.
but u didnt pm me.
plz try 2 pm next time.
keep updating

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