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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
hiii =)
i really liked the part.. but try to make it a bitt longerr.. its fun reading thiss =)
i really liked it wen samrat writes sameer as his name... i dun realli like that name.. (personal experience =P) but sammy makes the name kewll.. lol
well.. cant wait for the nxt update.. cont soon
<3
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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
tht was cool

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Posted: 11 December 2009 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
awesome part awwww
poor Mayank
he gets in trouble
funny thing
that same thing happened today
it was funny though
anyways continue soon!

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                                                                       part=4
at night
sharma house...
gunjan is reading a book in her room when mayank comes...
m=gunjie...
g=ji bhai????
m=tu yaha ha aur ma tujhe pure ghar me dhund raha hu....
g=ha woh...ma
m=ma se baat hui????
g=hui..woh abhi thaki hui ha isiliye zyada baat nahi ki..kaal phone karneko kaha ha....
he goes n sits beside her...
m=ek baat bata..tujhe aaj college me kaisa laga????
g=college me?? accha laga..bohot accha laga..sab bohot acche ha...dia..uday..benji..nupur aur
m=aur????
g=aur sabse accha ha samrat..pata ha bhai woh ek bohot accha dost aur insaan ha..kabhi kisiko thes nahi pochata....woh humesha sabka khayal rakhta ha..uska dil bilkul paniki tarah saaf ha....aur usse dekkar mujhe samee....her smile vanished n she didn't say anuthing further.....mayank got that n he changed the topic...
m=kya???? tujhe nupur acchi lagi?? woh ghamandi..baddimag..battamiz ladki..gunji tu usse baat nahi karegi....
g=bhai aap usse itna kyu chirte ha????
m=chirta hu?? tu uski side lerahiha????
g=bhai nupur acchi ladki ha.....dilki saaf ha...
m=tu uski tarafdari mat kar samjhi???? uski wajase aj college ke pehle din mujhe daat pari ha....
gunjan launghs...
m=tu hass rahiha???
g=hasi arahiha bhai..apko aur college me daat?? school me to kabhi daat nahi pari...college me????
m=gunjan......
g=agar pehle din ye halat ha to abhi to saal baki ha..tab kya karoge????
m=dekhte ha....
shergill mansion..
nupur's room..she is putting nailpolish...samrat n dia comes...
s=di ap kya karrahiho????
n=dekh nahi raheho kya???? nailpolish laga rahihu.....
s=par apne to kaal hi new nailcolour lagaya tha phir aj phirse????
n=uffo samrat..kaal cheering ki practise ha aur ma captain hokar agar fresh n hot nahi lagungi to kya reputation reh jayegi meri????
s=ap image ke liye ye saab karaahiho ya phir college me hot new dude aya ha uske liye???
n=WHAT????? u mean 2 say ke ma uss akru boring mayank ko impress karnekeliye ye saab karrahihu????
s=lag to yahi raha ha....
n=so just forget it..us padakuke pass books aur padai ke ilawa koi aur cheez dekhneka time nahi ha woh ladkioko tak nahi dekta nailpolish kya khak dekhega??? idiot kahika...
d=di woh itna bhi bura nahi ha.he is so cuteeeeeeeeeee......................woh bohot handsome ha...stylish ha...kaamaal ka dikta ha...intelligent ha...
n=bass bass...doll tujhe woh itna pasand aya ha ke tu uske tarif ke phool barasrahi ha?????
d=yes di.....i really like him.....kash woh boyfrend ho.....
n=KYAAAA?????????? tu pagal ha kya??? samrat doctor ko phone karke bolo dia bimar ha usse jhatka laga ha....
s=didz..candy galat kya kehrahiha?? mayank bohot accha ha...ye ma bhi bata raha hu....
d=dekha????
n=tum dono pagal hogayeho...dia tu itne ladkomese isss sariyaal ko choose kia ha???? kya baat hui???
d=di dekhna ek din mayank tumhe bhi impress karega...for suree....
n=huh!!!! sapneme....kyuki nupur shergill ko koi bhi era gera esehi impress nahi kar sakta....lekin nupur usse karsakti ha....
d=really?????
n=koi shak?????
d=uumm....ha ha...lekin shak galat sabit kar sakti ho.....
n=kaise???
d=sochlo di....
n=sochlia....tu bata....
d=tumhe mayank ko apna boyfrend banana ha....
n=KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA??????????????????????????????????????
d=itna chokho mat di...mayank ko jaise ma dia shergill pasand karti ha usspe to aur bhi ladkiya fidaa ha...lekin ma ye dekhna chahti hu ke kya tum usse fida bana saktti hu apne upar???? woh ghamandi ha na??? to kya tum uska ghaamand utar sakti ho???? woh padaku hana to kya tum apne jaduse usse cool dude bana sakti ho????
n=dia ye kya baat hui hum kya baat karrahe the aur tu....
d=di..tum mujhse yehi bol rahi thi na ke mayank kisika boyfrend nahi ban sakta agar tum mera shart pura kar do to ma tumhari baat samajh jaungi aur agar tum nahi kar payi to tumhe har manna parega...
n=NUPUR SHERGILL NE AJ TAK KABHI KISISE HAR NAHI MANA....AUR NAHI MANEGI....JAHATAK HA SHART KI BAAT ..TO THIK HA AJSE THIK EK MAHINE BAAD....MAYANK KO MA APNA BOYFREND BANAYUNGI....
s=candy...di ye saab galat ha....kisika fayda.,..
n=nahi sam....ab to ye hokar hi rahega...maza ayega...
d=yessss.....
n=DEAL...
d=DEAL.....they gave each other high five........n it shows mayank in between n nupur n dia two sidess....
next day
excelll college
nupur n dia r teaching the girls..cheering...
n=ok..EAST OR WEST EXCELL IS THE BEST....
other girls=EAST OR WEST EXCELL IS THE BEST.....
samrat n other boys were practising bb on the other side.....majan were passing from the corrider....samrat was doing baskets....one by one but as soon as he sees gunjan his baskets r not going properly...
u=sam kya karraha ha tu????
b=ha samrat basket idhar ha udhar to corrider...they see he is staring at gunjan....
b=ohohoho...to ye baat ha......SAMRAT!!!!!
s=ha kya hua??? chilla kyu raha ha benji????
u=tu basket jo thik se nahi karraha ha na isiliye....agar dia aur nupur ne dekha..to hum donoki kher nahi....
s=rukh me ata hu....he goes to gunjan...
s=hi gunjan....
g=oh hi...a smiles appears on her face.,...mayank sees that...
m=hey samrat...
s=hi dude....
g=umm..practise karrahethe?????
s=ha..woh parso test match ha isiliye....
m=best of luck....ab gunjan mujhe class se pehle library jana ha entry card ke liye to ma badme milta hu...
g=thik ha bhai.....bye...
m=see u sam....
they started to go towards the court...
s=so kaisi ho???
g=thik hu..tum???? lagat ha kaal ratse soye nahi...
s=tumhe kaise pata????
g=tumhari akhe laal jo ha..kabhi itni tension nahi karni chahiye ke neend hi chali jay....
s=nahi..meri purani adat ha adhi raatko neend tut jati ha aur phir roz subhah nupur diki daat sunke uthna parta ha...
gunjan stops
flashback...
g=sameer...tum sari raat soye kyu nahi?? aunty ne bataya....
s=ma soya tha par meri bachpan se adat ha meri neend adhi raatko tut jati ha aur phir savery ati ha...
flashback ends...
s=kya hua gunjan?????
g=huh...kuch nahi....tumhari baatse mujhe mere ek bohot special frend ki yaad agayi....
s=accha kaun????
g=ha ek..mera sabse khass dost....
s=ab kaha ha?? america????
g=nahi...20 saal pehle ek accident me uski puri family ki mot hogayi aur uski bhi....
s=oh.i'm sorry....uska naam kya tha????
g=sameer....
SAMEER name atracts samrat's mind very much....his head starts to pain very much....some words of his chilhood keeps remaining in his mind...n the name sameer...gunjan notices it...
g=samrat...kya hua samrat??? tum thik ho???
s=dddii...iii...iiii...nupu....rr......d.i..i.....ii...
g=nupurrr.....she shouts out...nupur n dia turns n sees samrat almost fainting...
n=SAMRAT,............she immediately runs to him.....
d=bhaii...............
they run to him....
n=samm....kya hua tujhe???????
g=samrat.....
n=gunjan isse hua kya???
g=pata nahi.....
d=bhaiii..........................di isse bithao....they made him sit...
n=samrat..pani peele.....he drank water..n now he was feeling better...
n=gunjan...ye saab...achanak????
g=pata nahi..ma aur samrat to baat karrahethe....phir pata nahi achanak uske saar me dard hone laga....aur .....
d=di...isse rest room me le chalte ha....
n=ha le jao..benji dhyanse....
g=ma uske sath jati hu....
then nupur was very tensed dia came....
d=di.....
n=kuch samajh me nahi araha ha....ye pehli baar nahi ha dia...sam k pehle bhi..
d=mujhe pata ha....isiliye to ma iitna ghabra gayi thi....par humne doctor ko consult to kia tha na????
n=doctor ne kaha tha ke sam ki koi bimari ha jisse usse koi chot nahi pouchegi lekin iska koi ilaaj nahi ha...
d=i'm really scared di.....
n=ghabra mat..sab thik hoga.....


Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 14 December 2009 at 10:04pm

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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
heyyy maisha
Good going
This was a really awsome update
But feeling sad abt that bet thing
Plzzzzz continue soon

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Posted: 14 December 2009 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
hi maisha,
very niceeeeeeeeee part.
loved it.
keep it up.
thanx 4 pm

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Posted: 15 December 2009 at 6:42am | IP Logged
hi,nisha here...
that was really gud... actually d ff is very gud.... pls update as soon as possible..

Edited by 358674 - 15 December 2009 at 6:44am

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