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dmgmjht4ever IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
lovely parts
sorry, I didn't comment on the last one
I forgot
both parts were good
continue soon!
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Posted: 07 January 2010 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
i really love the part 8
Faria. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Hi Maisha
nice update.
loved both mayur and sajan.
hmmmm so nups wants to win the bet and thats why she try to impress mayank
not a bad idea.
keep updating.
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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
lovelyyyyy update fabulas work dear
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Posted: 09 January 2010 at 4:47am | IP Logged
heyyyy maisha
read ur last two updates
they were really good
sajan were amazing but i really hate this that nupur is doing all this just for a bet
plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 09 January 2010 at 8:50am | IP Logged
hey hun, great work, fab update, continue soon my dear and PM me when you do!

:)

Ravie.xx
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Posted: 10 January 2010 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
                                                                                part=9
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                                                                              part=9
nupur n cj
n=please cj..please..tu mere li itna nahi kar sakti???? please yaar..ma teri best frend hu aur tu mere lie itna nahi kar sakti please yaar....sirf notes hi to ha.....
cj=baat sirf notes ki nahi ha nups..baat ha dhoke ki..is tarah se tu khud bhi mayank ko dhoka degi aur mujhe bhi isme shamil hona parega..jo ma karna nahi chahti..
n=cj...
cj=nups...mayank ek bohot accha ladka ha..aur woh tujhpar bohot bharosa karta ha aur tu ha ke.... n=isiliye to..ma uska bharosa todna nahi chahti....tabhito tujhse keh rahi hu
cj=what???? matlab????
n=matlab..mane mayank ko convince ar liya ha play me mera partner banne keliye agar abhi ma kahungi ke ma esa nahi kar sakti to woh mera partner abhi nahi banega aur excell ki history me pehli baar esa hoga ke koi nupur shergilll ko mana kia ha..aur ma usse dhoka nahi dena chahti
cj=to tune usse pehle kyu nahi bataya ke tujhse ye saab nahi hoga????
n=kyuki...kyuki tab mujhe pata nahi tha ke agar ma maayank ko apna partner banaungi to mujhe notes banane parenge..please cj....ab ye kbc band kar aur man ja na..dekh ma tujhe badme double treat bhi dungi....please....
cj=ok fine yaar......ab ye blackmail karna band kar....tere lie to thik ha....
n=thanks cj......
cj=lekin.....nupur mujhe esa kyu lagraha ha ke tu mujhse abhi bhi kuch chupa rahi ha.....
nupur looked at her...
n=mmm..mm..matlab????
cj=matlab ke ye mujhe esa lagraha ha ke tune mujhe abhi tak puri baat nahi batayi ha...
n(in mind)=oh no..kahi cj ko shak hogaya ke ma ye notes bet jitne keliye aur mayank ko impress karne keliye usse bana rahihu..to woh kabhi nahi banayegi..)
cj=nupss....
n=ha????
cj=kya soch rahi ha??? tu sach bol rahi ha na????
n=ha..ha bilkul cj...tu bhi na..zyada sochti ha...chal class chalte ha
sajan's class...
it was deodhars class...so there was pin drop silence...sajan sat together n benia behind them....
b(whispering)=yaar...jabhi bhi deodhar ka class hota ha na....to mujhe maan karta ha ke kahi jakar chup jau.taki iski nazar me na asaku...
de=3rd row...4th bench....keep quiet aur leave the class....(without turning around)
b=sorry sir...
s=ab ja..chup ja.....
b=teri to....
d=just shut up guys...bhai calm down..n benji bilkul chup!!!!
b=sorry dia...bilkul chup!!!
de=ab aap sab log apni apni sheets submitt kar dijiye...n samrat..mujhe ye staff room me dikhne chahiye..
s=ok sir..then all of them left the class except sajan n benia
samrat was arranging the sheets to give them to deodhar....
d=benji..ho sake to apna mu band rakha karo..
b=got it dia...follow me..bhai...hum canteen jarahe ha..tum aur gunjan bhi ajana...
s=ok....benia left from there n only sajan were left
s=chale chashmish..papers sab arrange hogaye ha..he looked up at her n found her trying to pull her dupatta which was stuck with the chair....her books was on oe hand n with another hand she was trying hard to let go off her dupatta...
g=ha..samrat chalo..bass ye dupatta nikallu..pata nahi kab ye atak gaya....she told him but samrat was already lost in her...he was looking at her....how she was smiling n changing her expressions..her eyes..which were the most beautiful eyes in the world..he thought..
s(to himself)=hay!!! koi itna khubsuraat...itna haseen...ini simple aur innocent...kaise ho sakta ha??? gunjan ke ilawa aur koi nahi ho sakta.....sirf gunjan...
g=thank god ye nikal gaya...chale samrat???? she asked him but he was still staring at her n smiling
g=kya hua?? ese kyu dekh rahe ho???
s=kuch nahi...chalo....
g=chalo.....
corrider...
npur was walking n mayank was at the opposite side of the corrider...
m=nupur kaha ha?? usse ek aur chiz samjha deta....he turned n saw nupur coming....(mayur tune started to play)....she was coming with a sweet smile n dancing...n waving "hi" to others...mayank forgot other things n was staring her top to bottom...
nupur saw mayank n smiled at him...mayank also smiled back..nupur went upto him...
n=hi.....ma tumhe hi dhund rahi thi,.....no response..
n=kya hua mr akru???? ese akhe phar phar ke kya dekh rahe ho???
mayank was still not in sense...
n=mayank....shouts
m=ha..ha kya hua?????
n=wahi to kya hua??????
m=kuch nahi....
n=kuch nahi?? to kya soch rahe the??? mere bareme???
m=ha..tumhe kaise pata????
n=kya/???? tum sachme mere bareme soch rahe the??? woh..thats cool...
m(in mind)=ye ya bol raha ha mayankk????
m=ha..tumhre bareme hi to soch raha tha...tumse kuch kehna tha..
n=accha?? kya???
m=kya kehna tha?? bhul gaya...
n=uffo..koi baat nahi..chalo canteen chalte ha...sab wahi par ha.....
m=par...
n=are par war kuch nahi....
scene shifts to a class room were dia n uday were waiting for benji....then benji comes rushing shouting DIA!!!
he enters the room....n they close the door...dia beats him on his shoulder...
d=benji..thora ahista nahi bol sakte?? tumhare galeme problem ha kya????
b=sorry...
d=chodo..kaam hua?????
u=kaunsa kaam????
d=shut up uday.....bhai aur gunjan pe nazar rakhneka kaam...remember????
b=are..dia tumhara plan kaam kar gaya...
d=woh!!!!! detail me  bolo.....
b=plan ke mutabik mane clas ke time gunjan ka dupatta uske chair se laga dia..
flashback
in the class dia pointed benji to do it...
b=mera baar chale na to jab is deodhar ka class ho ma kahi jake chup jau..he said this in samrat's ears...n gunjans dupatta was ther..he took it n stucked it with the chair so that she couldnt take it off...
after that he sat on his seat n winked at dia..
d=gud!!!!!
flashback ends..
u=woh..phir???
d=ha..phir kya hua????
b=phir..sabke janeke baad gunjan apna dupata nikal rahi thi aur humare samrat....apni gunjan ko dekhehi ja rahe the dkhehi ja rahe the..aur ek killer dude wali hasi bhi ayi thi.,....
d=woh!!!!!! bhai is in love!!!! now i am damn sure..
u=ha yaar...jabhi bhi sam gunjan ke sath hota ha to woh hummese kisike sath bhi nahi hota....
d=exactly...
b=to ab ye to confirm hogaya ha.....ke sam ko usse pyaar ha....par gunjan???
d=benji..jaha tak dia ka dimag bol raha ha...gunjan ke dil me bhi mere bhai yanike samrat ke liye kuch na kuch ha...kyuki jisdin bhai bmar hue the...gunjan jitna pareshan thi usaka chehra dekhne layak tha...
aur woh kaunsi ladki ha jispar mere bhai ka jadoo na chale????
u=rite...par next plan????
d=uday....ek ladki aur ladka apne diloke feelings tabtak nahi samajhte jabtak woh ek sath akele time spend nahi karte....aur time spend karneliye unhe date pe jana hota ha....
u=lekin kaise???? wooh dono kaise???
b=ha dia....sam samajh jayega...
d=nahi..hum sath honge to kaise samjhega?????
b=ha???? hum to phir date kaise????
d=dekhte jao..kya hota ha......
 


Edited by maisha.hossain7 - 10 January 2010 at 11:51pm

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