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oh thanks vinu...so happu made it again....u always make me so happy by giving such warm replies to my shots....thanks fro the sanu scene...u know i specially incorporated that one bcoz i personally just adore sanu....thanks so much jaan!!!
loads of love n hugs!!!
malika

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Originally posted by princessyashika

@mjht_admirer
oh thanks vinu...so happu made it again....u always make me so happy by giving such warm replies to my shots....thanks fro the sanu scene...u know i specially incorporated that one bcoz i personally just adore sanu....thanks so much jaan!!!
loads of love n hugs!!!
malika



Ur welcome Malika. Its my pleasure dear. Ab tum likhti hi itna acha ho ki mere muh se aur dil se khud ba khud aise thoughts aa jate hain.

bTW, i never knew tht ur name is malika. Hi Malika. !!! Nice meeting you.
& have u ever noticed or not but u & me always write in this same font colour. Wink So this time i have changed mine

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Originally posted by princessyashika



<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Hey guys I am back with another MJHT one shot of mine…hope
all of u will read it and take some time out to express your views on it.This
one shot is in three parts…I will be posting the first part as of now…hope all
of u will like it.</font>






<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><br>24/9 Princess street Canada….it was a dark n snowy morning
on the last day of the year….the 31st of december….the cold winds blew at
their worst self……as if a storm was abt to arrive……everything seemed melancholy
and quiet….but the tranquility was more haunting than pacifying…..<br><br>             <br></font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><br>n amidst the most mesmerizing snow mountains of Canada stood
the gr8 canadian mansion….n some fresh snow had just fallen on its roof……</font>



<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">the windows of the house were tightly shut but the winds
were too strong to resisit….suddenly the strong winds made the kitchen window break
open….making the person standing inside shiver and within a spur of</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">the moment the person turned around to lock it again….the
person….no the beautiful girl turned around……..her hands which were just now
busy in pouring in some hot coffee into mugs for her di who was still in her
bed into a deep slumber…..and her jiju who was almost ready to leave for his
hospital shivered a bit…..it was too cold to bear.As she moved near the window
to bolt it…the winds made a few strands of her still slightly wet hair blow on
her face……and making some of them even come into her eyes…..and god knew whom
he had created….he must be feeling proud as well as astonished upon his own
creation …..how many of gr8 kingdoms must have lost their young rulers if this
very site would have been visible to
them….but the almighty knew one prince…surely the most dynamic of them all and
this angels' destined one had already fallen and injured badly in her love….the
girl wasn't aware……she just bolted the window tightly and came back to her
coffee!!! Along with the coffee she hummed a melodious enchanting tune soothing
the entire lonely sorroundings…..when suddenly some heavy footsteps broke her
nostalgia….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">It was her jiju….Dr. mayank Sharma….the HOD of the cardiac
department of the National Canadian
Hospital……..no for her It was just her jiju…the so loving husband of her
darling di nupur…..as mayank enters inside the kitchen gunjan stops humming her
tune……</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:gud morning gunjan…kya hua gunjan tumne gana kyun band kar
diya…..kitni achchi dhun thi…….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">G:gud morning jiju….lekin..aaah….one minute…..jiju kal raat
ko to aap emergency surgery ke liye gaye the na….aur phir subah chaar baje sone
ke baad bhi aap itni jaldi uth gaye…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:gunjan ye sab tumhari pyaari di ki wajah se…..kyunki mujhe
pata hai ki us se bina kitchen mein aaye raha nahin jata….uske haath par itni
gahri chot lagi hai par mujhe pata tha ki phir bhi woh subah subah sabke liye
breakfast banane chali ayegi…isiliye maine socha ki is se pehle uski neend
khule main sara breakfast bana kar rakh doon……</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">G:jiju aap breakfast ki chinta mat keejiye…main hoon na….aap
jaakar di ke paas bethiye…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:abhi to woh so rahi hai gunjan…aur jab tak woh uthegi tab
tak mera breakfast ready bhi hojayega…aur phir gunjan tumhein bhi to college
jana hai na…so main tumhari help kar deta hoon…ek kaam karo tum parathe bana lo aur main kuch sandwiches
bana leta hoon…haan aur saath mein plum pudding bhi……</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">G:plum pudding!!!yani di ki favourite…but jiju aapko to plum
pudding bilkul pasand nahin na….</font>




<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:(having a sweet smile on his lips….)right gunjan…aur sach
mein mujhe samajh bhi nahin ata ki tumhari di use itna enjoy karke kaise kha
leti hai…par phir bhi she loves it so main uske liye wahi banunga aur phir jab woh mere liye har doosre week apni
most hated dish karele bana sakti hai…to itna to main bhi uske liye kar hi
sakta hoon na…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">G:u know jiju mujhe kabhi kabhi samajh nahin ata ki di
zyaada lucky hain ki unhein aap jaisa life partner mila ya phir aap ki aapko
meri di jaisi angel mili…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:gunjan….ismein kya confusion hai…ofcourse tumhari di
zyaada lucky hain…………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">G:jiju!!!aap bhi na!!!</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">And having this light conversation both gunjan and mayank
get busy into preparing there respective breakfast items…but both of them felt
really irritated….coz they never talked stupid things like these….gunjan and
mayank were an intellect lot….they never needed uneccesary talks like these….and
they were also comfortable in being silent around each other…but today was
different…………………….for mayank as well as for gunjan……………..the silence around
them was too blasting to endure…so both talked all this to reduce the levels of
turbulence……….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">With the passage of a few minutes….another voice broke the
silence…it was mayank again who started the conversation….coz in no way he cud
remain without asking gunjan….nupur had last morning told him everything thru
which gunjan had been going since many days now…..so he had to in anyway talk
to her…….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:aaaaaaa….gunjan woh kal…woh actually nupur ne mujhe kal
bataya…tumhare college mein…………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">But before mayank could proceed further gunjan interrupts in
between…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">G:woh jiju….lagta hai mera cell baj raha hai…I think jenny
ki call hogi…………..zaroor college chalne ke liye pooch rahi hogi…main abhi
aayi…………………..</font>



<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">n gunjan leaves from there…mayank knew why she did so……she
had forgotton that yesterday she herself gave her cell to him for some repair
and her cell was actually with him………mayank was now able to understand how much pained she was……the pain
of losing your first love is actually too difficult to bear…….her expressions showed as
if some pins were constantly pressing against her heart……and mayank tried to
pull out the most deep out of them…..</font>



<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Only then mayank hears some voice…it surely came from his
bedroom……nupur must have woken up………..so mayank covers the pudding which was almost
ready now with a lid….and go towards his room……………………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><br>Mayank enters the bedroom and sees nupur humming her morning
prayer with her eyes closed and still sitting on the bed itself……….and once
again as everyday he fell in love with
his princess once again………n as nupur opened her eyes…..she saw the same site
she had been seeing from almost an year now……………mayank was standing still just
looking at her so deeply n affectionately…just smiling and adoring her……but
today she knew the smile was a bit forced………the reason was today's date!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</font>




<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">finishing her prayer, nupur started her day by the most
predictable first word that always used to come out of her mouth in the same tone………….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:mayank!!!!!!!!!!!!by god….tum roz mujhe aise……….itna to
main khud apne aapko dekhkar bore ho jaaon!!! Par tum ho ki………………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:kya nupur tum bhi na….meri saari concentration tod
di………..achcha ab ye batao tumhare haath ka dard kaisa hai…………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:dard!!!!!!!!!kaun sa dard………</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:nupur!!!!</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:achcha woh kal wali chot ka dard….oho mayank zara si to
chot thi aur waise bhi mujhe kaun sa itna koi dard ho raha tha………..woh to tumne
hi zabardasti dawai khila di………….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:nupur tum bhi na aur thankgod tumhein zyaada chot nahin
lagi…..</font>




<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:agar aisi baat hai mayank to thank god ko nahin us ladke
ko karna chahiye jisne mujhe apni life ko
khatre mein dalkar bachaya…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tumhein kissi ladke ne bachaya…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:haan mayank…………main to phone par dia se baat kar rahi thi
aur mujhe to pata bhi nahin chala ki mere peeche se ek car aa rahi hai…</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:what!!kya tum us ladke ko jaanti ho???</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:jaanti to nahin par woh mujhe pehle bhi mil chukka tha…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:pehle bhi…par kahan……….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:kal raat hi mall mein…</font>




<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">While telling all this to mayank…the images of what all
happened last nite…flashed back n forth into nupur's mind………….<font color="#0000ff">when someone had accidently pushed
her…..and she fell down….all the things she shopped spending so much of time
for the small new year party at her place next nite fell down….nupur just wanted
to murder him but more than that her fallen things were more important….so she bent
down n started collecting them…………but along with her own two hands she saw two
more hands helping her out………</font></font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">As nupur looked up to see who was helping her out….she for a
moment was left awestruck……..</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">She had never seen anyone so innocent and captivating………though
he had a well built body of a grown up teenager but his eyes had the purity n
innocence of a child…….his mesmerizing smile made even nupur's lips to have
one….. he looked very happy go
lucky…very jovial….but at the same time very lonely as well…….well nupur had
this bad habit of interpreting so much by just reading faces…………and meeting ppl
once!!!!!!!!!!!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"I hope u r fine….u know some ppl r too busy to even say
sorry……………..but u don't worry….</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">all your things are
safe…I 'll just collect your tomatoes into this bag….."…said the boy spotting
the same cute smile on his lips…….. and he picked each one of them and put into
her bag….nupur couldn't believe he was behind the tomatoes like a lil toddler
running behind his ball !!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:(with an investigating look in her eyes)tumm kaun ho aur
tum meri help kyun kar rahe the???</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"oh u r an Indian!!!!
Waise mujhe dekhkar hi laga tha..u know
I die to talk in hindi….ek chashmish ke alawa mujhse koi hindi mein baat nahin
karta!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:chashmish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">S:yaa!!! meri chashmish….meri best frnd…woh girl jisne kuch
hi dino mein meri life ko completely change kar diya…jiske bare mein aoni
special feelings ko maine aaj hi jana hai….aur waise main to yahaan aapko
thanku karne aaya tha………….</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:thankx!!but why maine to tumhare liye kuch nahin kiya!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"aapne kiya hai….aapne meri sabse badi confusion door kar
di……….u know mujhe ek bahut hi special
person aur bahut hi special moment ke liye gift lena tha….par woh bahut hi alag hai
isliye samajh hi nahin aa raha tha ki kya loon but u helped me out…..jab aapne
us salesman se kaha ki aapko kuch aisa
gift chahiye jo dekhte hi kissi ke dil mein sama jaaye…..to maine woh sun liya
aur ek bar phir poore mall mein yehi sochkar gift ek baar dobara dhoondha aur
dekhiye aapki advice ki help se mujhe gift bhi mil gaya…..and the boy showed
him the musical dancing couple he had brought for his beloved………….seeing the
gift a shy smile reflected on nupur's lips….it was the same gift she had gifted
mayank on their first date………….now she knew the reason of his smile…he must was
going to confess his love….his first
love…indeed it was his first love only …nupur could say this very confidently…the
spark was visible in the boys' eyes…….that
girl must be very lucky………she hopes her young sis too was lucky enough……to get
her first love………….her best frnd..her sam….who within a few days became her
beloved…</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:bahut sunder hai…tumnein sabse perfect gift chuna
hai………aaaaaaaa……..</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"oh!!!my name…..my name is samra….no sam.…..!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">But before he could complete nupur's phone rang and it was
dia………………that broke her attention from that boy and she came walking down the
street that was still covered with heavy snow…when suddenly a speeding car from
behind was abt to hit nupur n the same
boy jumped in front of it to save her life!!! n thus here she was sitting completely
fine in front of her hubby dearest…………</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:u know mayank bhale hi main us se pehli baar mili thi but
he looked so like family……..</font>




<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:nupur tum bhi na….bahut jaldi sab par trust kar leti
ho…aur ye india nahin hai….isliye tum strangers se
zyaada interact na hi karo to achcha hai…………..aur pls mera wallet nikal do na…</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">And mayank moves towards his cupboard to take out his
handkerchief as he had to leave for hospital…</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:by god mayank tum bhi na….ek to us ladke ne meri jaan
bachai aur tum ho ki….achcha raat ko tumhari surgery kaisi rahi….everything
under control….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:exactly everything….</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:waise mujhe samajh nahin aata ki main tumse poochti hi
kyun hoon….kyunki kissi ki zindagi ka sawal ho aur dr. mayank Sharma se chook
ho jaaye…aisa to ho hi nahin sakta…..haina!!!</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">n Mayank who was till now browsing thru the cupboard for his
hanky stood still………he found something…..that was not to be found…..atleast
today…………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">The words inside mayanks mouth froze…the vocal chords disapproved to bear
the strain………n suddenly mayank's vision went blur……"tears don't suit men"….he
knew nupur always say this…but some pain are too hard to bear…just like
gunjan's pain was a constant knive making her heart bleed so was this for
mayank……………..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">N:kya hua mayank….tum chup kyun ho gaye…..</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">M:woh ….woh nupur….ye …and one of his tears fell on
the frame he had found!!!</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Nupur heard something…..it was mayank's weep…..she knew this
moment will come...specially today……………she knew he must have seen the photo
again…………….the photo that always make him cry…that breaks him completely…..the
photo that has all his childhood wrapped in it………..that has his heart in
it……….HIS….HIS ….YOUNGER BROTHER IN IT………..his long lost brother…for whom he
came to Canada….for his younger brother…for his SAMRAT!!!!!!!!!!</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">*************************************************************************</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">************************************************************************8</font>


<font color="#9900cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">That's for now guys…hope u liked the first part….pls don't forget
2 comment or hit the like button.</font>






AWEEEEEESOOMEE! THAT WAS GREAAAAAAAT!
BUT I AM CONFUSEDDD! SO HOW COME NUPUR DIDNT RECOGNIZE SAMRAT?!!!! ARE THEY OLD NOW AND WHY IS GUNJAN STILL GOING TO COLLEGE?!?!? :S

EVEN AFTER SAMRAT SAID CHASHMISH , SHE DIDNT RECOGNIZE HIM?!

.Rabia.

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Posted: 05 December 2009 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
do cont soon

Malika

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Posted: 05 December 2009 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
@ Priyanka K
thnx for replying my frnd...actually the things may become more clear in the next part...its like that mayank nupur dont recognise samrat
as he is a long lost brother(in the same way as sam doesn't recognise suhaani).....and nupur doesn't recognise sam bcoz though nupur knows there is a boy in gunjan's college whom she is in love...but she doesnt know that boy...she has never seen that boy!!! even the fact tha the boy calls her chashmish is not known 2 nupur!!!
.they have not become old....mayank n nupur have just married an year ago and do gunjan being youmger than nupur is still going 2 her college.but thnx for liking it dear!!!

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Posted: 05 December 2009 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
very nice plzz continue soon...plzz pm me...

Malika

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Posted: 05 December 2009 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
@mjhtnupurmayank thnx so much my frnd for taking out time to like it...i will PM it to u surely as soon as i will update............
 
@fanofmjht
its so sweet of u dear to reply back....yah i will continue soon...most probably by tonite.......

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Posted: 05 December 2009 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
yashika the short-story is always lengthy but it does not mean its boring

yours mayur +sajan short was awesome n u have protrayed the nature of winter season with brillancy.In short,the story is very good plz do continue.i want 2 see what will happen nextWinkStarThumbs Up


Edited by foxs - 05 December 2009 at 10:08pm

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