Lina lina lina! (haha just the way you start it)
this was amazing
awesome
loved it!
and since the last review was short,
this one will be longer
because you always write long review
especially on mine
so here it goes:
"afterall, I found my chasmish"
that line was brilliant
a work of art
my favorite line
out of all
it was really good
sabse acha thi acha
no kidding
I loved the scraf scene
and loved how Gunjan was shy
one thing did confuse me though
how was Samrat at Gunjan's house?
didn't understand that part
but I think I got it
but I'm stupid sometimes
so I won't understand things
many times 😆
awesome os
hats off to you
The title was so good
"Lost, but not completely"
you make up titles so well
there really good
of course,
I can go on and on
blabbering about your os
and I'll never shut up
you know that I'm like that
of course,
we should party,
I'm the first one!
Like how we party when your first
We should party when I'm first
I feel so proud
hope someone doesn't reply
when I'm typing this review,
if anyone does,
mutse zaida koi bura nahi ho sakta 😆
anyways,
continue making more
of these fabulous stories
you talented writer!
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