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Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya (Mayur ff)part-8 pg-53 (Page 4)

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wow it really good cont soon plz
and dnt 4get to pm me
 
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Nice start... pls update soon and pls add me in ur pm list...

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Posted: 03 December 2009 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rkmnkp

Hey Tapoor

mein Lina

nice FF dear

and you know it is very different.

Ok

ok

am I blind or you said

that

The first part is long???????????Confused

No ways
It is very short
You should make it longer
and
gefeliciteerd.gif congratulations glitter ster image by ilona-mariska
For your first FF
It is fablouse
and the part that I love the most is when
you said that
Nupur Mayank ko Monkey keh ke bullati hai
aur Mayank Nupur ko Gurriya.
LOL
Wow they getting married?
But Mayu likes Gunjan.
and Nupur likes Samrat.
Awsome awsome awsome
Abb maza aa ye ga
jab Mayu Nupur ki help karega
Sammy ko pata ne ke liye
Aur Nupzs Mayank ki help karege
Gunji ko pata ne ke liye.
Awsome concept
plez do continue soon,
And mein mein mein
me me me
want want want
to to to
be be be
in in in
your your your
pm list,
So don't forget to add me,
-Lina-
 
 
Thanks a lot honey 4 ur sweet comment. yaar tum logone to meri confident hi badadi. thanks again. sure i will pm u

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Posted: 03 December 2009 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zohul

wow it really good cont soon plz
and dnt 4get to pm me
 
 
Thanks dear. i will pm u
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Posted: 03 December 2009 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ansh_Arti

hey Tappor
 
didnt knw u r ff writer too?
well congrats on ur FF!
 
It really nice start!
cont soon!
plz pm me!
 
x x
 
Thanks a lot honey. actually main ff nehi likhta. socha ke try karlo. tumhari jaise acche to nehi hai meri writing  pr i m glad ke tumne isse like kiya.

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Posted: 03 December 2009 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sowmyap03

Nice start... pls update soon and pls add me in ur pm list...

 
Thanks. and sure honey i will pm u
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Posted: 04 December 2009 at 10:53am | IP Logged

                                                                Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya

Ye meri ff ka 2nd part hai. Ye possible huya hai srif Fariaa ki wajaise. Aker who mujhe encourage nehi karti to shayad main kabhi ye ff likh nehi pati. so it's 4 u Fariaa. Thanks a lot  4 supporting me. And I love u so much from my core. 

 

Part --- 2

 

 

 

At college

 

Mayank go to the library.   At the same time samrat was reading book in the library. He wear a blue jeans and a white shirt. As Usual he looks so sweet and januable. Mayank sat bsite him.

 

M : Hi sam.

 

S : Hi Mayank.

 

M : so dude. Keya karrahe ho?

 

S : Football khelraha hu? Dekhayi nehi deraha hai? Padhraha hu.

 

M : (Himself) khadoos kahika. Jab bhi bolta hai, kuch bura hi bolta hai.

 

S : kuch kehna hai dude?

 

M : nehi. Ha . who ye hai ke. Tumhe 1 baat pata hai?

 

S : jab tak tum bologe nehi mujhe pata keise chalega.

 

M : ha. Who keya haina gudia. Mera matlab hai nupur tumhari bohot tareef karrahi thi.

 

S : Oh . ( not at interested tone)

 

M : pocchoge nehi ? who keya kehrahi thi?

 

S : agar main nehi poochunga to tum nehi bataoge?

 

M : Nehi aisi koi baat nehi hai. Phir bhi tumhe janne ka interest nehi hai ke ussne tumhare bare me keya kaha?

 

S : Thik hai batao. ( abhi bhi itna interested nehi hai)

 

M : (himself) khadoos. Itna vhao kiyu kharaha hai. Isse to apne apko Khush naseeb samajh na  chahiye ke gudia ne isse pasand kiya hai. Warna gudiya ki piche to pure college ke ladke pagal hai.

 

S : Tum kuch kehne wale the dude. Jaldi kaho. Mujhe padhna hai.

 

M : who keya hai ke. Nupur kehrahi thi ke tum bohot responsible ho or bohot hi sensible or mature bhi ho.

 

S : O.K

 

M : ye sada se o.k ka keya matlab huya?

 

S : To keya main khushi se dance karna start kar du?

 

M : Maine aisa kab kaha? Per tum thode se reaction to dekha sakte ho na?

 

S : ( pls leave me act) o.k. fine. Main bohot khush hu ke nupur ne mere bare me ye sab kaha. Ab thik hai? ( himself) kash main bhi uske bare me ye sab kehsakta.

 

M : keya? Keya kaha tumne?

 

S : kuch bhi to nehi (suddenly).

 

M : dekho! Baat ko badlo maat. Maine suna hai tumne keya kaha.

 

S : O.k ha maine kaha hai ke kash main bhi nupur ke bare me ye sab kehsakti. Kiyu ki mujhe ussme koi maturity dekhai nehi deta.

 

M : Tum aise keise kehsakte ho dude? Nupur ne to tumhari bare me kitni acche baate ki.

 

S : to keya huya? Mujhe mature kehdene se who immature se mature nehi banjayegi. Or who hi kiyu, mujhe to tumhari group me se kisi ko bhi mature nehi lagta. Except Gunjaan.

 

M : dekho apna ye sada sa POV tum apne pass hi rakho.

 

Mayank gusse se waha se chala ata hai.

 

 

 

At corridor

 

Mayank is walking and thinking himself : Mujhe samrat se iss tarah se baat nehi karna chahiye tha. Gudiya sunegi to gussa ho jayegi. Per ussne gudiya ke bareme aisa kiyu bola? Per ussne gunjaan ke bareme to accha bola hai na? or gunjaan se to tu pyaar karta hai. Tujhe to khush hona chahiye? Ha thik hai. Gunjaan ke bare me accha bola hai (soft tone). Per phir bhi gudiya ke bare me to bura bola haina (angry tone). Or gudiya to tera buchpan ki dost hai. Yaar girlfrnd ayi to keya best frnd ko bhool jayega. Nehi maine thik hi kiya. Koi mere samne gudiya se kuch kahe ye main seh nehi sakta.

 

 

At music room

 

Gunjaan was listing music. Suddenly nupur has come.

 

N : Hi gunzi. Keisi hai?

 

G : thik hu. Tum keise ho?

 

N : I m rocking.

 

Gunjaan ke pass baithe baithe

 

N : accha gunzi tujhe Monkey I mean mayank keisa lagta hai?

 

G : kiyu? Aise kiyu poochrahi ho?

 

N : nehi! Bus aise hi pooch rahi thi. Bolna?

 

G : accha hai.

 

N : srif accha ? or kuch nehi? (disappointed tone)

 

G : kiyu ? or kuch bhi  kehna chahiye tha keya?

 

N : nehi per who to tere bareme bohot kuch bol raha tha.

 

G : accha? Keya? (who bhi itni interested nehi hai)

 

N :(herself)( behenji kahi ki. Itni vhao kiyu kharahi hai. Isse to shukur gujar hona chahiye ke monkey ne isse like kiya).  kehraha tha ke gunjaan bohot sweet, sophisticated hai or bohot intelligent bhi hai. Balke who to darraha hai ke usski badle me tu na iss bar top karle.( loud tone)

 

G : (smile) accha? Phir to usse mujhse nehi samrat se darna chahiye. Kiyui ki samrat Delhi me usski college ka topper rehchuka hai. Usse harana namumkin hai.

 

N : (Angry tone) keya ? keya kaha tune? Dekh Mayank ke liey kisi bhi cheej namumkin nehi hai? Or mayank ko kisise bhi darne ki koi jaroorat nehi hai. excel college ka topper Mayank tha or Mayank hi rahega.

 

Nupur bhi gusse me waha chli ati hai.

 

Nupur walking and thinking himself: Mujhe gunjaan se iss tarah se gussa nehi hona chahiye tha. Monkey sunega to naraz ho jayega. Per ussne aisa kiyu bola? Lekin ussne samrat ke bareme to accha bola haina. Mujhe to khush hona chaiye. Sam to mera boyfrnd haina? Monkey bhi to meri bestfrnd hai. Pyaar mila to keya dosti bhool jayegi? Nehi maine thi hi kiya.

 

At corridor

 

Mayank and Nupur banged on  each other.

 

M: uffffffffffffffff.

 

N : uffffffff. akhe hai ya button. Dekhkar nehi chalsakta?

 

M : tu kiyu apne akho ko asmaan me rakhkar chalrahi thi?

 

N : dekh?( Phir usse gunjaan ke baat yaad ati hai). Tujhe or koi nehi mila pyaar karne ke liy? Chashmish, behenji kahiki. Samajhti keya hai apne aap ko? (angry tone)

 

M : tujhe bhi or koi nehi mili pyaar karne ke liye? Khaoods kahi ka.

 

N : dekh tu samrat ke bareme aise maat bol. main usse pyaar karti hu.

 

M : Tu bhi gunjaan ke bareme aise maat bol. Mai bhi to usse pyaar karta hu.

 

N : wah . keya chun chun ke namune dhoond he pyaar karne ke liye.

 

M : accha! To tu konsa asmaan ka tara dhoondliya hai pyaar karne ke liye?

 

N : dekh tu mujhse iss tarah baat mat kar.

 

M : tub hi maat kar.

 

( dono hi gusse me chup ho jata hai)

 

Than mayank put his hand on her shoulder

 

M : Gudiya? (soft tone)

 

N : maine kaha na mujhse baat maat kar (angry tone)

 

M : Gudiya! Agar hum dono hi ladne lage to plan ka keya hoga?

 

N : (thinking) ha ye to sahi baat hai. Agar hum hi ladenge to plan ka to raam naam sath ho hi jayega.

 

M : To phir frnds?

 

N : Forever.

 

Than they hug each other. After a while Mayank broke the hug and said.

 

M : mere pass ek plan hai.

 

N : keya?

 

M : batata hu. Batata hu. Have patience yaar. Tu to bus jaisa main kehta hu waisa hi kar.

 

Phir Mayank kano me nupur ko apna plane batata hai.

 

N : uff monkey tu bhi na (happily) .

 

M : janta hu. I m the best. (Apna shirt ki collar ko raise karte huye) ab dekhta hu. Ye samrat bachkar jata kaha hai.(smiling)

 

Hey guys. Pls do read nd comment on it. Tumlogoki comment ki bohot importance hai meri liye.

 

With love

 

Tapoor

 

 



Edited by Tapoor - 04 December 2009 at 10:55am

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