Gallery of One-Shots : True friendship [mayur] 136 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
awwwwwwww so sweet mahak,  do write moreeeeeeeeee.
 
God bless.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
wow! that was a romantic read...i loved it!
Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
 
 
It was beautiful!
I had tears in my eyes yaar!
It was sooooooooooo touching anf felt very close to me!
I loved it soooooooooooooooooooo much!
 
After Zoya, u r my favourite os writer now!
U r simply amazing yaar!
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
🥳First of all Mahak darlin... congratz sweety... on ur fourth gallery... im so happy for you

What can i say, I always seem to be repeating myself to you.... 😊

I always tell you how awesomeee of a writer you are....😳

you blow me away with ur os and wonderful storiesss.....😳

your seriously an amazin writer and an amazin person! 😊

love lotz

ur di

xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
lovely shot!!!
can i ask for more??!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
wow
a really gud one shot
i really loved it
thx for the pm
looking foward to read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
mahak i want to say their is more depth in your writing
today i know that you start writing since 9th class ......
mahak you are such a awesome writer
written with heart
i love it mahak
plz write more one shot like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
one of the best os I have ever read
it was so touching
I loved it to bits and pieces
what can I say?
It was so sweet
I really liked it
no not liked,
I LOVED IT!
It was totally amazing!
I can't believe this is your first one-shot
kamal hai!
are you sure this is your first?
Ahhh, it was amazing
I'm speechless
I have no clue what else to say
cause it was so good
I mean the storyline,
the dialouges,
the Nupur that nobody knew,
The whole story was perfect
So my inspirational/talented writer,
continue writing
and never stop!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
mahi.........🤗..............by god tht ws such a super fabulous os re......too too too gooooooood...................perfect...........👏👏👏............do write more amazin awesome oneshots lik this...u r truly one among d best mayur ff writers.........🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Amazing OS mahak!! 🤗

Truly emotional and touching!!
I loved it that her problems did not get solved (cos such probs of expectations never do get solved in real life)..but surely, that he is there for her is such a big thing!!
I just loved that bit 😊

Then abt him noticing every small thing she does 😃 , that she forgot to cap her pen..thats the like the sweetest thing ever :)

And the kiss of not passion but love!! awesome 🤗 🤗 🤗