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~~AVALON: Land Of Fairies~~ Part 14 (Page 7)

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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool.sindhya

loveeddd itt!!
heyyy bdw dinntt get the endd biitt
the jade, emerald,twilight
alll of it confused me
:(
bt cont soon
nd pm me
whts ur name bdw?

I''m Hala., and i guess yours Sindhya
and anyway the ending was basically like this, Twilight and Emerald are sort of girlish names, basically why John/Emerald renamed himself John, and their names are girlish because Avalon is a female-dominated world.
Jade is suppose to be John's evil sister, well not Evil, mischevious, something that John is really annoyed of,
Thanks for commenting, much appreicated Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Nishi*

wow ur story is realy really good.. Big smile im on part 6 roight now.. not a whole to say there cause im as confused as anya right now LOLLOLLOL but i like this guy with the green eyes.. maybe hes a fairy too?

Nishi good to have you finally commenting, where did you disappear for the last few months? Confused as Anya? Well Anya is not confused, she's bewildered, but then a lot of confusion coming this way, oh yeah the green-eyed guy is a fairy, that's why no one could see him..
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Girl_2007

LOL female-dominated... love it
well so... Twilight and John or Emerald.. LOL rofl, r... not really good friends?.. lolz.
Anyway i loved the introduction of Avalon, Clap well done.
But i hope that... Jade doesn't cause any problems... Confused i don't like her so far..
and wot else.. what happened wid the romantic scenario of the Niagara Falls? when did they get out from there... Ouch i was LOVING it... anyway, the encounter wid the prince will just make Anya and John closer, plus the further happenings. Tongue that's what i guess
well hope ur exams went good Big smile

Twilight and Emerald are not really good friends, true, and quite frankly i love the name Emerald, it reminds me of royalty.
oh yeah female-dominated, i was kind of tired from a male-dominated world so .. Abracadabra.. Jade won't cause problems, well except from the then and now pranks usually played on John, she's just cruel to her brother in some way, You're not going to get a romantic scenario any time soon Archana.. Sorry, don't kill me, it's just that, i want to make some arrangement before the romance, a little more of legends, some wars.. you knowWink Exams went great that's why i posted a new story, which is actually torture for you people. so there Tongue 
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:38am | IP Logged
hala thnxx forr  lettngg me knww lol
:D
caann i call u hal???
bdw love it
wud u b updtng netym sooonn??
:)
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilshangel

Hey dear sorry 4 rplying late was busy with coll stuffs.
Now coming to the part. Well its as usual amazing nd written lovely :)
now do continue soon
nd thx 4 pm

Yeah school/college can keep someone busy, practically why i didn't update for so long, and thank a lot for commenting.
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool.sindhya

hala thnxx forr  lettngg me knww lol
:D
caann i call u hal???
bdw love it
wud u b updtng netym sooonn??
:)

You can call me anything you like, it's kind of what i do when i forget someone's name.
Yeah i think after lunch i'll write down the part, and i'm thinking about updating Trespassers tonight or something see you don't have to wait long.

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Posted: 13 February 2010 at 11:18am | IP Logged
awesuuuuummmm onee hal1!!
awwwwww it wuuzzzz soooooooooooo shortt!!
luuvdd hww jade insults poor emerald in frntt of anya
:D
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Posted: 24 February 2010 at 4:48am | IP Logged
so sorry i couldnt commet earlier.. no net faciity
the sis is definately having a gala time.. washing jhon's dirty linen in front of anya and jhon is so cute getting angry like tht at hi sister and not being abe to do much about it..
really true with names like emrald and sapphire no guy wud wanna be born in avalon..heeheee
really like the new charecters in the story but i really wanna know more about who was attacking them earlier and why...
pls pl pls pls pls continue soon..its so long since when u last updated and pls do pm me when the update is posted

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