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Posted: 02 December 2009 at 9:23am | IP Logged
hiiii kiran...
woooowwwww...
another one from u..
well.. i am not surprised to that extent but neverthless i havnt thought of u updating  this fast especially after the completion of the previous "amazing ff" a  few days ago...lolz..(dont mind..:))
 awesome start...
i guess this ff is wayy different 4m ur previous ones..
loved reading the part..
plzz continue soooon..
waiting 4 the nxt part..
plzz do pm me 4 the nxt update...
thnxxx in advance...

bdw.. the title is interesting...
i did a search on the google to know the meaning...lol


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Okaaayyyyyyyy this was nice...but honestly there wasnt anything in particular that attracted me towards it...Perhaps d way u portrayed Armaan n Riddhima was not ALL that appealing...dunt take it in a wrong way for I know that this is something u have REALLY be wanting to write...n if u say its intense, I'll take that n with that I hope to be looking forward to d next part to make it a tad bit clearer...

I guess Abhi Niks were the best...though I got a bit confused with Damini initially, I liked that whole scene...n even Ridz was pretty interesting, except that when u started off with her bit, I had absolutely no clue that this was gonna be Riddhima ure talking about ;-) so that took time to digest...

On the whole, I honestly cant say anything now...not till I read a few more parts to get a basic feel about the story...but coming from u I know its going to b some serious n passionate love tale...I feel it when I read the intro...anyways if am not appreciating it THAT much, then thats for a reason :D

@I like MIRAGE =)

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oh n ya, i forgot abt d VM...its better than d others maybe cuz its kash .... but d theme does reflect in it :-)

love!!




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hey,
that was a gr8 start......intense yes it does sound so......lets c what u have in store for us in d next part..
update soon
will b waiting for d next part...

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superbly written kiran... look forward to the next part.. please do continue!

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Hey Kiran. Intro is cool. So there's Armaan and Riddhima. Armaan's friends Abhi and Damini (assuming) and Riddhima's friends Nikki and Mike.
 
Though the initial bit was a bit confusing but then what are you for??? Surely u would unfold it.
 
Please add me to your PM list if u plan one.

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Hmmm nice concept dear. Though i havent read any of ur ff but after reading this i think i have to start reading it.

Neways pm me whenever u post the next part.

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