Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil


Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil
Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

..::Twilight::.. [My Win Pg.51 Aug.14] (Page 6)

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Posted: 04 December 2009 at 1:22am | IP Logged

First Part


The rain poured down her window as she stood in her room, watching the droplets of water fall slowly. She sighted and fell on her bed laying down. The thoughts of her mothers words went threw her mind as she held her spongebob pillow against her chest letting tears roll down.

She remembered how her mom wanted her to stay with her, but what could she do, she didn't like her new dad. She didn't like Rahul Sharma and she wasn't going to call him dad any time soon, so she decided to move here with her dad and stay in this hell that was filled with rain and cold.

The tress were are green, it was hard to tell which part was the leaves and which part was the wood, since everything was covered in moss.

The door crept open and her dad stepped inside.

Thane – "Hey sweetheart." He said coming in with a tray of food. She got up smiling and sat up throwing the pillow behind her.

Heer – "Hey dad." She said wiping her tears.

He sat in front of her putting the food down. He also noticed the dried tears on her cheek.

Thane – "I know you didn't want to come here …." Before he would feel worst then he already did she cut in.

Heer – "No worries dad … I am totally fine …. And I don't expect you too feel like you have me on top of your head making me feel at home … I just need sometime and I promise everything will be better and great soon … and you know I haven't been here for 14 years so I need time to get use to rain, wet, and … cold." Thane smiled kissing her forehead.

Thane – "Well now I know my daughter is all grown up … and if you need anything your old man is here." Heer smiled kissing his cheek.

He handed her the food and left the room.

She ate without crying for the first time since yesterday.


Next morning

The night was like yesterday, cold and restless, she couldn't sleep because of the cold and the drunk man she heard outside of her house all night long.

She knew in front of her house were some weird creeps who liked to get drunk and "PARTY".  She rolled over her bed landing on the ground, as her back hit the side table.

Heer – "Seriously." She said getting up and rubbing her arm which was all red now. She pushed her hair behind her ear yawing.

Heer forced her self to the bathroom and changed into Bongo jeans and a pink full sleeve shirt which hugged her body nicely upto her hips.

Heer took out he TNA jacket and out it on going down stairs.

The house was small, but good enough for 2 people to stay in … though she wasn't a fan of such a small house, but she was glad to have her own room and bathroom.

When she got downstairs her dad had made eggs and toast, which made her happy, since it was the first day of she needed a full stomach to absorb all the comments on the NEW girl.

Thane – "Okay Heer your breakfast is ready, and I have to leave honey … late for work."

Heer – "Don't worry dad I'll be fine, remember I am not a 3 year old anymore."

Thane – "I know … give me some time to get use to having a teen in my house." Heer rolled her eyes eating her eggs.

Thane was a lawyer, he was the ONLY lawyer in forks since not many were needed …. He got a lot of clients which confused Heer, well in such a small town how many people could get into big problems.

Thane left and Heer chewed her breakfast slowly as her stomach did flip flops. She always moved around and switched school but the first day of school always scared her.

Heer gathered all of her things and headed outside, where as usual was rain. She sat in her new car. It was a small car, with five seats. The color was silver, it wasn't the best car but it was hers and its rocked. The car was 1999 model but since Thane got it spray paint and the air care  done again it felt as if it was brand new.

It smelled like strawberry from the inside which Heer didn't mind.

She drove more carefully then she ever had, since the roads were filled with black ice she wanted to be as care full as ever. The last thing she wanted was a accident on the first day of school.

As she arrived into the school parking lot, a lot of people's eyes turned towards her which made her want to hide into a hole, but she had to face them now or later.

Heer didn't know where to park since most of the spots were taken and the other were reserved. She parked in front of the school and went inside to the office. A nice lady gave her student parking pass and told her to park on the other side of the lot beside a shiny silver Volvo.

The Volvo made her car look like a dump, but since the other cars in the lot weren't new and wrecked she didn't feel all bad.

As soon she parked the car the bell rang and Heer rushed out of the parking lot going inside and taking out her classes order.

She had English first with Mr. Ender.

When she turned around she bumped into someone and dropped all of his books.

Heer – "I am so sorry I didn't see you coming … Sorry."

Nick – "Hey don't worry, these things happen." He said totally checking her out.

Heer – "Umm I guess … but I am sorry I didn't mean to .."

Nick – "Hey no worries … wait aren't you … Heer Maan."

Heer – "Yes … I guess not hard to notice the new girl."

Nick – "That's true … first day." Heer nodded.

Nick – "Do you need help finding your next class."

Heer – "That would be really nice."

Nick – "What do you have?" he said looking at her paper.

Nick – "Hey we have the same class … lets go." He said seeming excited which kind of crept Heer out.

Heer smiled in a frightened way and followed him without saying anything.

He talked way to much for Heer, she was kind of annoyed and wanted to be left alone. The way she walked to her classroom the whole school was staring at her, which made her feel like she had something on her face.

Nick and her went to English.




Everything they were leaning was already stuff Heer knew, which surprised her because she thought school might be tuff.

Something about the people here made her feel like she was in London, but then the way they talked and how outgoing they were made her feel left out, but everyone was really nice. She also met some girl who's names she already forgotten.

At lunch Nick invited her to sit with them but Heer wanted to meet her teachers and know what she had missed since the semester had started so she didn't eat lunch with them.

AS she walked threw the empty hallways she saw posters of Prom, grads, and sales which reminded her of London.

She was walking down when she stepped on something and looked down to see it was a text book.

Heer – "Oh Crap." She said moving her feet, as soon she did a pair of pale male hands picked the book up. Heer looked up.

Heer – "I am sorry …" before she could finish he cut in…

Prem – "next time use your eyes." He said in a annoyed voice while holding his breath.

Heer looked at him carefully, his eyes a light brown and skin pale white.

He had light facial hair, also light purple spots under his eyes, like he never got enough sleep. His lips a dark color and he hands showing his veins which.

He walked past her trying to hold his breath as much as possible.

Heer watched him walk away in shock.

This was another type of person she had met today, a different person.




After lunch Heer went to gym, which she hated more then anything. The sports always drove her crazy not because they were hard but because she sucked at them.

When she came in changed into her gym strip she knew she was probably the first one in there since all of the girls were still in the changing room.

When she came into the gym she saw a group of people standing in the corner talking, her eyes met the guy with the black and brown hair. She rememberd it was the same guy as the book incident and look away.....

As gym started they ran laps which HIM and HIS friends seem to do perfectly while everyone else stopped evy 3mins to breath. Her gaze kept metting his which made her nervous for some reason.
Ms.Kim - "Get into pairs guys." she said as Heer and girl from her english class stood together.
Heer - "I know that was reall....." as soon as she turned she thought she bumped into a wall but it was HIM again.
Heer - "Crap ... owww." she said holding her shoulder trying not to cry.
Ms.Kim - "Everything okai Heer?"
Heer - "I think i need ice."
Ms.Kim - "My.Juneja why dont you escort Ms.Maan to the office." she said seeming annoyed.
Prem - "Least i can do .... Seesh for once watch your steps ... lets go like i dont have anything better to do." he said in a angry tone.
Heer followed him holding her shoulder.
Okay Thats all for now Guys
Will update soon.
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Edited by xoHarshaxo - 04 December 2009 at 1:30am

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amu142 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 December 2009 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Prem Juneja, the vampire!!
ooh god!!
Heerbeauty IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 December 2009 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Prem to aisa nehi ho sakta
Update soon
What will happen next?

heer.maan786 Goldie

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Posted: 04 December 2009 at 3:14am | IP Logged
plz prem ko aisa mat banao...anyways heer was as usual an  innocent one..i love it ..plz updt nxt one
resham12345 Goldie

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Nice new ff
It is exactly like twilight. More like the book than the movie.
COntinue soon and thanks for the PM
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please update next one sonn...keep up the good work
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