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hi mahak!
recently caught wid ur ff.....awesome start yaarThumbs Up.....u portrayed the emotions of both M & N beautifully!u knw wat, urs is one of the rarest ff wer i've come across Gunjan's character being flirty & Nupur being shy......nice 4 a change.....Big smile....plz continue soon....& cud u add me 2 ur PM list?

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Posted: 19 December 2009 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavana2692

hi mahak! hi bhavana

<br>recently caught wid ur ff.....i am glad for that

awesome start yaarThumbs Upthanks

.....u portrayed the emotions of both M & N beautifully!thanks

u knw wat, urs is one of the rarest ff wer i've come across Gunjan's character being flirty & Nupur being shy......i know....thanks....i wanted it to be something different...

nice 4 a change.....Big smile thank u so much

....plz continue soon.... i will do so soon...

& cud u add me 2 ur PM list?it will be my pleasure


<br><br>Bhavana<br>




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Posted: 19 December 2009 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ansh_Arti

oye Mahi hi zoah

kidhar hai yaar tu?
tu to jaanti hi hai na?
update this FF
yes sure jaaanu
i am waiting!
oh i am so sorry to make u waiting....i will do so soon....try to update before tuesday

x x




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hey guys.........

i am back with a bang.......

papers ki vajah se main update nahi kar paayi thi...........

but now i am back with an update.........

this is dedicated to my friend faria (the birthday girl)........so wish her a good future ahead.....

sweety this is for u.........

and thank u all for the amount of love you showered upon me!

i am really blessed to have u as readers wo always make me stong by giving ur comments.......

thank u for being there to support me......







At Nupur's house-

Nupur's POV-

"aaj? Ma aap yeh kya keh rahi hain?" I ran behind her mom.....trying to confirm the news I heard right now......

"haan beta....nupur woh log kal hi tumhe dekhne aa rahe hain." She told him keeping a hand on my shoulder....she was cleaning my room....

"p....par... ma itni jaldi?" I asked my mom.....I was really very shocked.........

"haan beta.....aur tune hi kaha tha ki tujhe koi problem nahi hai mayank se milne mein? Woh bahut hi acha ladka hai aur meri sabse achi saheli ka beta hai.....bas ab tu jaldi se tyaar ho jaa." She told me.....



As soon as I heard that he was coming tomorrow....i was shocked beyond words....i mean I don't even know that what I will say to him....i don't know anything......i just agreed few hours back that I was ready for seeing him.......but I never knew that it will happen so soon....ma bhi na.......



"par ma....kal? yeh kuch zyada jaldi nahi hai? I mean I just agreed few hours back." I said to her.....hoping that she will understand....which is one thing that can be least expected from her....

it looked as though she had a full proof plan of making me a bride by tomorrow....she was so impatient for my marriage.

"kabir das kehte hain ki-" my mom said....

"I know I know.....kabir das kehte hain ki kaal kare se aaj kar....aaj kare so ab, pal mein parlay hoyegi, bahuri karega kab?" I told her....



I didn't wanted to hear that thing once more...for her mouth....agar koi kaam na karo to woh har baar yahi kehti hai....hamesha se hi....i mean agar iron nahi kiya to yahi doha....music sun rahi hoon aur kaam na karo to yahi doha....bachpan mein jab main padhai nahi karti thi tv dekhne ke liye to bhi yahi doha.....i am just sick of it......

Mujhe lagta hai yeh life to pal do pal ki hai....so let's enjoy it.....and do the work later....but I always do the work at time...i always somehow manage to do extra work at the last minute....well what's the problem when u can do the work later? And what difference does it make until you are able to cope up at the last minute?



"bahut achi baat hai......beta jab tujhe yeh yaad hai to phir tu kyun nahi ise apni zindagi mein use karti hai?" she asked me....her voice sounded more like a command than a suggestion.....

"ma woh to theek hai....par kal? Ma main abhi tyaar nahi hoon....i mean ma...main abhi aap logon ko chodkar nahi jaana chahti hoon....please ma." I told her the reason....

"par beta. Aisa thode hi hota hai....acha ek baat bata......iske alawa......tujhe koi problem to nahi hai use dekhne ke liye?" she asked me.




I didn't had any other problem regarding him....it was just that I didn't wanted to leave my house so soon...just that....i was afraid that he will take me away from my loved ones...and I knew well about my mom's choice....i knew that she has chosen a perfect boy for me which I will not be able to refuse....and I feared that as soon as I will meet him.....i will have to agree to marry him (if I do)....and hence leave my house soon.....




"nahi ma...aur koi baat nahi hai." I said and I don't know why....but I blushed....

"are waah! Yeh to bahut achi baat hai beta...thanks....ab main Shilpa ko phone karke bata deti hoon ki woh aur mayank kal hi aa sakte hain." She told me.....she looked and sounded happy...and I was happy that she was happy....

to....his name is "mayank".....hmm.....now let's sleep.....kal to ma mujhe sone bhi nahi dengi..





At mayank's house-

mayank's pov-

"ma....kya hua?" I asked my mother as I saw her jump with happiness on the phone.....

she came rushing to me as if she had missed a train....i wanted her to calm down as she was not well....

"ma....aakhir baat kya hai? Aap itni khush kyun hain?" I asked her when I saw her brimming with happiness......

"beta.....mayu....baat hi aisi hai." Mom was brimming with happiness....



Did I tell you that she looks extremely gorgeous when she smiles?? I have owned my dimples from her...her happiness was shining through her eyes....and it gave my heart extreme pleasure to see her happy....i can do anything for her!



"ma...ab bataogi ki nahi ki aap kyun itni khush hain?" I asked....although I didn't cared for the reason...as my heart was contented seeing her happy.....

"beta...abhi abhi meri saheli ka phone aaya tha....hum log kal hi Nupur ko dekhne jaa sakte hain." She told me the news as if it was a shock to her.....

but on hearing this news.....the smile on my face faded away.....i mean how can I meet someone whom I don't know? How will I be able to ask her anything? How will I start a conversation? Oh god! There is so less time but I am going through such a never-experienced-before excitement....i am puzzled......how come everything is taking place so fast? I mean I just agreed few hours back!




"ma....yeh kuch zyada jaldi nahi hai? I mean I am not prepared!" I asked my mom....knowing her answer.....

"beta...tu hi to kehta hai na ki-" she tried to say.... but I didn't let her continue.....i knew what followed next!

"haan ma....main jaanta hoon ki main hi aapse kehta hoon ki ma....kabir das ji kehte hain ki kaal kare so aaj kar, aaj kare so ab, pal mein parlay hoyegi, bahuri karega kab..." I completed...




I always used that phrase when my mom made faces....and showed reluctance in taking the medicines...or whenever she asked me to leave my work and enjoy...and then complete it later....or whenever she was not doing her exercise....i always used it..

I totally believed that time has its own importance...and things should be done on time...as god knows when time fleets by! And then we won't be able to do the work....its better to do the work on time than to wait...and waste our time....and then sit up with work at the last minute and panic! I always do my work first and then enjoy as much as I can!




Today I got myself trapped by the thing I say! Oh no! my mom is very clever!

"beta tu to jaanta hi hai....phir kyun? Tu kya khud apni is baat ko nahi manega?" she said making a puppy face...

I knew that if i didn't agree to her then she will not take her medicines from next time on time.....and say that I myself didn't did that thing....but I didn't wanted to do loose the battle so soon......without even fighting......that isn't like Mayank Sharma......

"par ma..." I tried to explain.....but I was cut short by her in between.....




"par var kuch nahi.....hum log kal hi Nupur ko dekhne jaa rahe hain.....aur yahi mera aakhiri faisla hai...tujhe usse milna hi padega." She said....giving the last verdict....

I knew that! But I am not prepared for this thing.....i mean how can I go and see a girl so soon and then marry her?????? I knew that if I went to see her......my mom will make me marry her....but I think that's my destiny.....i wont ever disobey her......




"theek hai ma......main tyaar hoon usse milne ke liye..." as soon as I told her.....she was so happy that she started dancing.........and I was contended to see her happy.......

and I went to my room..... "Nupur" nice name.....





both wanted to sleep......

but their paths were now crossed...........

their destinies were now crossed.........

their paths interlinked..........

and a soft song was playing in their heads..........




mayank-
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baithi Hai Dil Mein Chupke
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

nupur-
Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baitha Hai Dil Mein Chupke
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

mayank-
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Mere Khayalon Mein Na Jaane Kitni Tasveeren Banne Lagi
Bas Aasmaanon Pe Do Dilo Ki Takdeere Banne Lagi
Bin Dekhe Hai Aisi Bechaini Tauba Oye Rabba Dekha To Jaane Kya Hoga
Sapno Mein Aane Wali Neende Churane Wali
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

nupur-
Oh Palko Ke Upar Niche Dil Ke Dhadkan Ke Peeche
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

mayank-
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re
Na Jaane Kya Hoga Na Kya Hoga
Pehli Mulakaat Mein
Kaise Chupaoongi Chand Ko Main Us Chaandni Raat Mein
Bas Ab To Main Uska Ghoonghat Kholoonga
Chupke Se Dekhonga Kuch Na Boloonga

nupur-
Oye Oye Yeh Bechaini Oye Oye Yeh Betaabi
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

mayank-
Jis Ko Dekha Na Barso Usko Dekhoonga KalParso
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

nupur-
Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

mayank-
Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si
Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

nupur-
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re
Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re



and then day's weariness made both of them sleep....... they both slept soundly without knowing that there was someone who was writing their destinies......how two different people were going to be bonded forever.......





hope u all liked it.......

that's it for now........

now i will update sooner.........

as soon as i get comments.........

i will keep on updating.........

plzzzzzzzzz i beg u to comment.........

plz silent listeners don't be silent........

i beg u so..........


love,
Mahak

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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 12:13pm | IP Logged

nice update

loved povs of both mayank and nupur
do cont soon


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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 12:18pm | IP Logged

Oye Mahak.. meri toh lottery lag gayi aaj... tere donon FF jo aaj hi padh liye maine aur soch rahi thi ke kal comment karoon, thak gayi hoon bahut par

kal kare so aaj kar, aaj karen so ab, pal mein parlay aajayegi toh bohari karega kab??? AWESOME Dear...Exact feelings......Hug


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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
wow awesum update
keep it up
love
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