I lost her - MaYur one shot - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi 😊

Twas like, so damn touching!! I loved it. <3

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399703

Posted: 14 years ago

hey hun

soooooooooooo touching!

loved it!

x x

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Divya

@myownarea

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 years ago

Really nice Aish..u just broke my heart!! but very well written 😃

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

IF-Addictz

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Posted: 14 years ago

aww.....tht ws a sad endin waala Os....bt stil vry well written....plz write a happy happy mayur os next time dear....😳😳😳

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sorath

@rida_ranbir

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awwwww aish itzz so touching yaar,
veryy nice, lovedd it! =)

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338669

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Posted: 14 years ago

thnx lekha

thnx tanu

thnx seema

pari..thnx..lol..yeah i hope ;)..

nidhz..thnx..well i did'nt do that bcuz i sort of wrote 4m Mayank's POV and he did'nt bother to find out about them bcuz he was just shocked tat he lost Nupur!

thnx tehzeeb..yeah sure...

deepu..thnx a lot..

thnx fariaa..

thnx aranya..

thnx jiah

thnx zoah

lina..edit soon..

thnx divya di..aww..srry! :P

thnx nikki..yeah sure..i just wntd 2 convey tat not all story's are happy :)

thnx rida

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430059

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Posted: 14 years ago

Where did the gun-men come from?

But it is a wondeful os !! Good work :)

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338669

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Posted: 14 years ago

Lipsa - i know that part was weird..but Mayank just did'nt bother bcuz Nupur was shot..and that was all he cared about at the moment..thnx..

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stuti

@stuti123

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice one but soooooo sad always want mayur to be happy .....but anywayz loved it lots ......

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

Senior Member

Posted: 14 years ago

Hope nahi yaar.. I seriously liked it... But aise real life mein nahi hona chahiye..!!

Awesome yaar.. :))

Thanks for the PM :D
and Sorry for being late..!

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