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Winter Antidotes - RPFC fic contest pg 132 (Page 151)

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 1:37pm | IP Logged

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Edited by Shaina_b - 21 January 2010 at 12:37pm

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Posted: 18 January 2010 at 12:49am | IP Logged

Originally posted by esha143

hey guys,
every entry was wonderful.very nice fics indeedClapClapClapamong them to choose is a little bit difficult but nonethless these were best to me. congrats dear writers.

1.entry no.12

2.entry no.10

3.entry no.09

                               congrats for the 86th RPFC


Now can we have the names of these story writers?

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Posted: 18 January 2010 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arpita25

Now can we have the names of these story writers?

Not yet!!!!
And post at the new FC now!!!!!!!

Edited by Shaina_b - 18 January 2010 at 12:57am
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Posted: 20 January 2010 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shiropa




"Ye hum kahan aaye hain Raj?" she asked.

"Jahan tum humesha se aana chahti thi Naina." He said.

"Par tum ne to humesha??????."she became silent when he placed a finger on her lips.

"Ab kuch nahi kehna hai Naina, bus mai tum aur ye tanhaai. Aaj mai sab kuch bhool k bus kho jaana chahta hoon in waadiyon me in hawaon me tumhare saath."

"Raj??tum aaj ye kaise baatein kar rahe ho?" she was blushing without knowing.

"Kyoun, mai aisa kuch keh nahi sakta kya?" he asked looking straight into her eyes.

"Haan keh sakte ho par aaj tak kabhi tum ne kuch kaha nahi kabhi?"

"Kaise kehta Naina, kab kehta? Kabhi waqt ne to kabhi kismet ne mauka nahi diya tumahre saath aur tumhare pass aane ka. Pata hai mai humesha se sochta tha ki tum se kuch khass baatein kuch khaas anadaz me kahoonga, par kabhi mauka nahi mil paaya. Aaj saari pareshaniyaan kahatm ho chuki hain ab bus mai aur tum humesha k liye ek saath rahenge aur mai vaada karta hoon Naina ki ab koi bhi dukh aur pareshaani nahi aane doonga tumhare zindagi me." He promised her and may be to himself too that he will never let Naina cry because of him or because of any other reason.

"But y Raj?" she asked.

"Because I care for u and I can never see u crying." he said.

"That's what I am asking Raj why?" she asked again.

Before Raj could reply anything it started raining heavily. "Naina, chalo yahan se."

"No I want to enjoy the rain." She said.

"Naina, u will caught cold." He tried to reason.


"Please Naina listen me, ye bin mausam ki barsaat hai chalo yahan se." he tried to pull her hand but she denied.

"No Captain I want to wash away all my bad feelings in this, I want to start a fresh life now onwards."

Raj smiled at her childish behavior and said, "Ok mam as u wish."

"Not like that Captain, u must enjoy rain with me." She pulled him.

"No way."

"Why?" she asked.

"Naina if I will be ill so who is going to take care of u."

"No ways, aap jaante hain mai aise nahi mane waali hoon." She winked.

"I know Lft. Ahluwalia, but I know ki kaise manate hain aap ko." And with in a fraction of second he picked her up in his arms and rushed inside.

"Not fair Raj, mujhe neeche utaro." She was behaving like a school kid.

"No way Naina, it's an order." He retorted.

Naina went silent. They were in a small cottage; no one was there at that time. Raj noticed Naina's silence for some moment when he tried to make a fire for both of them.

"Naina?." He called her name but got no response from her.

"Naina??.." he called again when Naina jerked from her chain of thoughts.

She gave a look to Raj meaning what and he understood, "Tumhare kapde bahut geele hain jaao change kar lo."

"But how?" she asked curtly.

Raj noticed the roughness in her voice but being sweet he replied," ye lo," giving a bed sheet to her because in that small room there was not much useable things. He found only sheets to cover themselves and a pair of towel for them.

She went inside the another room which seems like a store room, she was thinking about her and Raj's relationship which has changed a lot in theses years when she joined KMA to now. She never thought that she can get a man like him in her life who will be always ready to stand by her side in her life, whenever she needs him. Thinking and smiling at her destiny she was about to change when she saw something n cried like hell, she rushed outside crying badly.

"Kya hua Naina sab theek to hai na?" Raj asked when she ran to him and hugged him hard.

"Vo???.vo vah?.vahan??.",

"Kya hai vahan Naina?"

"Vo???.vahan???." she was unable to speak more so Raj tried to check the store room and tried to know the reason y was she frightened so much.

"Relax Naina, mai dekhta hoon." He tried.

"No, don't go, mujhe dar lag raha hai." She clutched him hard.

"Let me check mam, phir mai dekhoon ki kya hai jo meri cadet, ah?ha Lft. Ko dara raha hai." He teased and went inside in search of Naina's fear but the thing he saw made him laugh like hell and he couldn't control himself and started laughing. "Naina????ye???..ye tum?.." us ki hassi band hi nahi hone ka naam le rahi thi.

Naina got irritated, "Haan haan uda lo mera mazak."

"Naina I can't believe that ur afraid of a cat." Raj abhi bhi hass raha tha Naina k upper. "Naina u r a soldier, agar tum is tarah se ek cat se darti rahogi to socha hai ki log kya kahenge tumhare liye."

"Kehne do jis ko jo kehna hai mujhe aap se baat nahi karni hai jaaiye, humesha mera mazak banate rehte hain." She said making a face.

"Ok baba sorry, extremely sorry ab nahi hoga ok. " he tried to calm Naina.

"I don't care, leave me." She said irritated but agle hi pal jab Naina ki najar Raj pe padi to she was stunned. He was standing bare body and a towel was wrapped around his waist only. She couldn't take her eyes off from his well built muscular body and continuously gazing him. He was looking extremely hot and desirable in that sultry look and Naina was feeling her heart loosing once again on it. Her gaze was so much intense so anyone can understand about her feelings for him.

Raj pehle samajh nahi paaya ki why all of a sudden Naina became quite and she was gazing him like this but soon he realized that in which state he was standing. Actually when Naina cried he had just took out his clothes and wore that towel. He felt embarrassed by her intense gaze and became uncomfortable. He quickly took his wet clothes and was about to enter inside the same store room to wear them when Naina came close to him and said in his ear, "U look hot Captain like this."

Pata nahi kyoun par Raj ko accha laga Naina ka aise kehna, jab Naina ne ehsaas kiya ki us ne kya keh diya to sharmaa k bhaagne hi waali thi vo jab Raj ne us ka haath pakad k jaane se rok liya, "Accha itna hot lagta hoon mai?"

Naina blushed n lowered her gaze, Raj smiled, "Naina, aaj pehli baar tum ne kuch aisa kaha hai mere liye jis ko sun ne ka intezaar kab se tha mujhe. Mai bhi kuch kehna chahta hoon tum se."

Naina looked at his face which showed her pure sincerity," kya?"

"Ek vaada aur ek sach batana chahta hoon tumhe aaj."

Naina still was lost in magic of his eyes which were making her go week.

"Mai ek vaada karta hoon tum se humesha saath nibhane ka. Jab tak is seene me dhadkan hai aur is sharer me jaan hai mai har pal tum se pyaar karoonga aur tumhe itna pyaar doonga ki shayad ye zindagi bhi kam pad jaayegi. Mai itne khushiyaan aur chain bhar doonga tumhari zindagi me ki tum ek bhi pal mujh se door ho k nahi jee sakogi. Itne aadat daal doonga tumhe apni ki kabhi door jaane ki soch bhi nahi paaogi aur itna saath nibhaoonga tumhara ki maut bhi kabhi hume juda nahi kar paayegi."

Naina was looking at his face without blinking her eyes, us ko Raj ki feelings ki deepness pata thi par itna jyada deep ye nahi pata tha.

"Sach ye hai, ki mai tum se bepanah mohhabat karta hoon. Itne mohhabbat jitney shayad kabhi kisi ne nahi ki hogi kisi se. "Raj concluded finally which made Naina's eyes teary and she hugged him instantly.

"Mai bhi aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon Raj." She said closing her eyes on his chest.

"Jaanta hoon Naina. Par aaj tum ne keh k mujhe duniya ki sab se badi khushi de di hai." He said hugging her with all his love in him. After ten minutes Naina tried to came out of his hug but he denied to let her go, "Tum ne abhi kaha tha ki I look hot so I think I should get something for this." He winked her.

"No Raj kuch nahi." She tried to make again herself free but failed.

"Bus ek." He pleaded.

She looked at his mischievous eyes and said," ok," and placed a kiss on his right cheek but he said, "bus?"

"Now what?"

"One more."

She again gave a kiss to his left cheek and one after another his whole face got the shower of kisses. "Bus ab ek hi jagah baaki hai."

She looked at his with questioning look and he indicated towards his lips, "yahan."

"No Raj hatiye aap bahut naughty ho rahe hain." She pushed him but he again pulled her to him n this time without waiting for her approval he placed his lips on hers for a passionate encounter. Soon the heat dwelted b/w their bodies, her hands started craving his body n his hers. They didn't know when this sweet kiss ended with a passionate love making.

Vaada Tumse Hai Vaada, Hooo Vaada Tumse Hai Vaada
Janmon Ka Pyar Ka Dard Ka?..Saathiya Hooo?
Vaada Tumse Hai Vaada, Hooo Vaada Tumse Hai Vaada
Janmon Ka Pyar Ka Dard Ka?..Saathiya Hooo?

After an hour:-

"I promise Naina kabhi bhi tum ko ek pal k liye bhi chod k nahi jaaonga." He said.

"Mai jaane bhi nahi doongi samjhe." She hide her face in his embrace smiling.


This is my vote 2 Vaada.Big smile
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Posted: 20 January 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shiropa



This towel scene takes place right after the VP contest and Abhi becomes the Academy's Vice Principal and just a day after the "Nahin" scene.


The sun shone brightly on the grounds of Kanchanjunga Military Academy (KMA). The huge structure of the military academy on the high hills of Ambala could be seen from miles away. Inside the strong walls of the academy held a totally different world, A world where a common man turned into an solider who would lay down his life for their country. A world for the brave and courageous men and women, who would lay down their lives for their country.

"Yeh hai KMA, Jahaan ek bhi din boring nahi tha in cadets ke liye? Yahan kuch na kuch hota hi raheta ta? Yahan sirf acche Soliders hi nahi milte hai?. baliki acche dosts aur pyar bhi milte hai? Dosti aur Pyar, Woh doh cheeze the jo KMA ke har ek students ko ek nah ek bar yahan train karte waqt hua hoga.? "

The sound of gunshots resonated from one corner of training ground followed by the shout of a strong masculine voice. Young men and women in dark green training uniforms jogged across the grounds with long rifle guns resting on their shoulders. "10 minutes left Cadets!!" Shouted Major Nair, standing on the other side of the training ground. He glared at them angrily screaming at them to hurry up.

A slightly tall young man in the batch glanced from the corner of his eye towards the tall and daunting figure of Major nair who was busy scolding yet another unfortunate student. The young man shifted the gun on his shoulder a little before his light grey eyes quickly moved towards the pretty young women jogging beside him, the sunlight bouncing off her black hair revealing the dark brown highlights in her hair.

Leaning in slightly towards her, He whispered something lightly in her ear with a small flirtatious wink. He grinned softly as her lips curled up into a grin before she started to flirt right back with him. Hearing them, Some of the girls and boys in front of them gave a glance towards their scarily stern teacher and sighed of relief to see him distracted before quickly yet silently chatting away with each other.

"Dosti? Mere choti behne ne iss KMA ke andar ayi thi sirf ek hi maksakt leke, Ki yeh prove karke dikha degi ki main, uska bhaiya ek desh drohi nahi hai.. Aur mujhe pe lagi hui har ilzaam ka badla lekar rahe gi? Par yehi raaste main jaate jaate usse bahut acche dosts bana liye jinke liye yeh jaan de sakti hai aur jo iss ke liye jaan de bhi sakte hai?. Par?. Meri pyari choti behne ko?. Pata hi nahi chala ki kab ussne apna dil ko bet diya?.. "

A certain young cadet stalked across the pavement towards the open doors of Academy. Her shoes clacking lightly against the floor as she stepped inside the building, She swiftly passed by the Amarjyot and turned towards the left entering the empty corridor. It was obvious that this cadet was busy at the moment from the speed she was moving at. Her long jet-black hair was pulled back into a simple french braid, swishing behind her as she strode impassively towards her destination avoiding anyone in her way

The sunlight that poured through the open windows brightened up the whole corridor, the bright light shining over her cream skin. She earned a few glances from a few male cadets when she entered the corridor, The light slowly fell across her long face revealing her high cheekbones, delicate almond shaped eyes with thin dark eyebrows above, a sharp nose and cupid's bow pink lips. She swiftly passed by the large windows and took another right turn but instantly halted in front of a light brown wooden door. Dark hazel eyes glimpsed up through her long black lashes at the wooden name plate hanging on the side of the door, 'CAPT. RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT' was written in huge capital, bold letters on the wooden name plate.

Naina Singh Alluwalia never hesitated in doing anything once she set her mind towards it. Not that the task at hand was something that needed her full concentration. But as she raised her hand up towards the door, The unfamiliar feeling of hesitation grew in the corner of her heart a little before she could touch her fingers on the smooth surface of the door. Her lips pursed into a thin line, Why was she feeling nervous? She only had to tell him that the Brigader needed to talk to him. A few seconds passed by, shaking her head she told herself to stop acting like this.

Pushing the door open with her hands, she barged inside the room without a second thought letting the door slam shut behind her loudly while she walked into the middle of the room. "Sir, Brigadier Chandok aap se milna cha-?." The words died on her pink lips when her eyes looked up at the sight in front of her. Her whole body froze like ice, locked every bone tight in shock.

"R-R-Rajveer S-Sir?" She managed to stutter out as her wide hazel eyes stared at the man, Whom she respected more than anyone and who also was her mentor, standing beside the table in nothing but a towel around his waist.

For the first time since she had met him.

She regretted barging into his room.


The papers scattered across the glass table, easily slipping from file when it was thrown on the table. The pen holder rolled off the side of the table, falling against the white marble floor making a loud clattering noise while the pens fell out of the holder. An irritated sigh left the handsome young captain sitting on the comfortable red chair, Uncrossing his long legs he placed his elbows on his knees, dropping his head into his hands.

Rajveer Singh Shekhawat was man who could control his emotions very well. He knew that irritation or anger never helped one to think properly but right now he was getting more and more irritated by the second. He read the file 10 times but still couldn't find a single clue! There was nothing in it that he hadn't already known, How was he going to find the Red Box if he kept going into dead ends?! His long fingers found themselves clutching his jet-black hair tightly.

How was he going to prove his best friend's innocence?

How was he going to get back the honor of her brother?

His eyes snapped open realizing where his thoughts were going to head towards now. He hadn't been able to get her out of his head since the time she had came barging into his room ?like always- before Abhimanyu's Oath Appraisal. There was just a strange emotion in her eyes when she stared into his eyes, an emotion which he hadn't seen before?. It seemed so familiar. Bolting up the chair, He shook himself out of his thoughts, This was dangerous. He shouldn't he giving himself false hope. He reached for the mess of papers on his table, quickly rearranging the file and placed it back on the glass table forgetting about the pen holder lying on the ground, He stepped back staring at the file for a while.

Getting irritated so easily wouldn't help him at all, He had to calm down then think correctly about what he would do next. He just needed to go through everything from the start, connect the pieces together and find the answer.

Right now, What he wanted was to take a hot shower to clear up his jumbled up mind.

Clenching his jaw shut tightly, He turned around and wandered straight in the direction of his bedroom. His fingers grasped the handle of the door rigidly, Trying to erase the image of the young beautiful cadet whose eyes glowed with determination and stubbornness in his mind.

Maybe a cold shower would be much better.


Rajveer stood beside the table in his living room yet again staring at the file on his table. Droplets of water fell from his messy wet hair onto his bare chest as he tried to dry his hair up quickly. He had just taken the cold shower and it did help him calm down but it didn't help him get her out of his head though. It seemed that his mind connected every thought of his to her so he planned on not thinking about anything that reminded him of her.

Running a hand through his coal black hair in a tired manner, That was a very hard thing to do since the issue he was thinking about right now connected to her as well. "This is useless?" Rajveer muttered to himself as he busied himself in drying his hair faster. Then suddenly snapping his head up he realized, This wasn't the time to think about his inability to get the image of the woman he loved out of his head. He needed to think of what to do next? How to connect all the clues he had right now and get the answer he needed.

First and foremost, He needed to call the headquarters and get Navin's case files again then look through all the clues he had at hand right now. He also should tell them to hurry up with the status report on Col. Chandra case. His mind started to work furiously trying to think up anything he might have forgotten.

But his mind jarred to halt when the doors of his living room was pushed open loudly. A familiar blank voice of certain female cadet who had been occupying his thoughts a lot recently reached his ears sending him into a world of panic as he whirled around to face her. There she stood, In her usual dark green uniform (Author Note: Not the training uniform) and with her silky jet-black hair pulled back into a simple french braid different from the usual french braid she used to wear, Still oblivious to the fact that she just came into the room of a man who was wearing nothing but a towel.

His hands automatically moved over his chest as if to cover himself but once he understood that was of no use, His flight mechanism started to kick in. His eyes swiftly glanced towards the dark red shirt and light blue jeans hanging on the back of a chair beside the table. "R-R-Rajveer S-Sir?" He immediately looked up from the chair towards the shell-shocked cadet standing half way through his living room. "N-Naina t-tum yahan? W-Wh..K-Kyun?" He tried to a form a correct sentence but only stuttering came out. His dark eyes filled with panic and embarrassment jumped from her to the bedroom door then to his bare chest then back again towards her, He wasn't sure what he should do? Run or Stay?

Staying was definitely not an option but why was she here? Maybe it was something important. But at the moment, He seriously needed to put something on! He couldn't stand here in front of his female student in nothing but a towel, What would happen if someone found out? His eyes widened, He couldn't let anyone find out! People in the academy already doubted the relationship between him and Naina "R-Ruko?D-Darwaza bhand k-karo? Why are yo-" What in the world was he saying?!! "N-N-Nahi? E-Ek mi-minute?." Hastily turning towards the way to his bedroom but then again whirling around in Naina's direction, the only thing he noticed was the chair with his clothes right behind her.

Rapidly striding to the chair, His right hand reaching out to grab the clothes. In the moment of panic, He didn't notice the circular pen holder and pens right in front of him on the ground. When he finally noticed, It was too late. His right foot had already stepped on the pen holder and slipped.

The balance of his whole body turned horizontal as his right leg kicked up in the air and he felt himself fall.

But that wasn't what shocked him the most.

It was who he fell on top of that shocked him out of his senses.


Panicked hazel eyes stared up when the world around her turned upside down. Her heart thumped loudly in her chest waiting for the impact of her skull hitting the marble floor but there was no impact whatsoever.

Naina's eyes widened when she felt the strong arm around her waist tighten while the warm hand resting on the back of her head pulled her closer. Her body was pushed against something warm; the slightly strong scent of familiar sweet cologne filled her senses. Her long, thin legs were tangled with his. She felt her hand pressed against something hard, there was something beating loudly against it 'THUMP?THUMP? THUMP'. When a drop of water fell on her cheek did she at last realize where and in whose arms she was in.

Naina shifted left and right trying to get even a glance of his face "Sir-" Her voice was muffled as her face pressed even deeper into his neck. Her lips parted letting out a shaky breath, What was going on? Why did she end up like this? She only needed to tell him that the BC wanted to speak to him but when did the situation turn into her encircled in his arms with her whole body pressed against his.

But all thoughts flew out of the window when sudden warmth spread through her body. Her palm flatten against his bare chest feeling his fast heartbeat under her soft hand. She let herself relax into his embrace. She closed her eyes for a moment memorizing the touch, the feel, the warmth, the sound of his heart beat under her hand and just everything about this moment.

She knew for a while now, Since the VP contest, That her feelings for him a little more than just a feeling for someone whom she respected and trusted a lot. In a corner of her heart she felt something, But she never saw too deep into the matter. It could be only be a crush of sorts. Slowly opening her eyes she felt him shifting a little, His right arm was still around her waist but his left slowly held go of her head. Moving up slightly, he placed his left hand on the ground beside her head and pushed himself off her a little.

As she glanced up at him, her slightly dark hazel eyes found his dark eyes. Her eyes widened while her heart thudded quite loudly against her rib cage at the intense look he was giving her. A small part of her suddenly felt the need to shy away from him but she kept gazing into his eyes deeply losing herself in his eyes trying to figure out the strange emotion in the depths of his dark orbs.

She wondered.

Would just a crush make her feel this way?


Rajveer didn't understand where his self-control went at that moment, maybe it's because of the fact that she was trapped in his arms, Being embraced by him, Being held by him like this. Before he could even list off the reasons, He found himself loosening his iron grip around her and pushing himself off her slightly. His dark eyes found her slightly dazed yet confused beautiful hazel eyes; they both kept gazing at each other for a long time.

Words were never needed between them. Their eyes spoke volumes; Just a glance was enough for him to understand what she felt, what she thought and what she wanted to say. Yet he never understood the single emotion that was always there deep inside those dark hazel orbs.

His left hand cupped her cheek softly, stroking her cheek with his thumb. She leaned into his hand and stared back into his eyes, her hazel eyes glazed. Gazing lovingly at her, he slowly tilted his head downwards and neared her face.


"ir...Sir?Si..Sir! Sir!"

Rajveer jolted up blinking a few times trying focus his vision and when it did he found concerned hazel eyes staring up at him. Pushing himself off her instantly, He turned away shocked at his actions.

"Sir? Are you alright Sir? Aap tik toh hai na?." Worry laced her voice even though she felt so very confused. She didn't understand what had happened? He was alright at first but after a few minutes, Naina had gotten worried due to the lack of response. She tried to call him but he still didn't answer, In the end she had gotten a tad bit irritated and shouted at him.

Rajveer snapped his eyes open and turned around immediately finally remembering what was happening. But before he could even apologize for what he had done, She had spoken "I'm sorry Sir, Main aapke room knock kare ke hi enter karna chaiye tha" He glanced towards her puzzled, She was worried about that?

He had just fallen on top of his female cadet and held his female cadet tightly in his arms, That too inside the academy! Did she even understand how wrong that was?! He should get court marshaled for that probably!! He stared at her without an emotion in his eyes even though on the inside, He was raging with emotions.

He inhaled deeply and stopped himself from shouting at this stupid girl, Did she even realize the fact that she was his cadet? His female cadet! Female cadet's don't get embraced like that by their male teachers! His eyes drilled holes into her head? Wait head? He then realized that she wasn't looking towards him instead it seemed she found the floor very interesting at the moment.

He raised an eyebrow in confusion and slight amusement at the abrupt change in her behavior since she would normally look at him, No, she would gaze at him with that soul penetrating gaze of hers whenever she spoke to him.

However his thoughts were cut short when he finally registered what she had said that if she in fact hadn't came in without knocking than all of this wouldn't have really happened. He wouldn't have been standing here with a towel around his waist?. He glanced down at himself, His eyes widening. Damn, What is wrong with his brain? Why was he being so slow? He quickly grasped his clothes from the chair and rushed out of the living room and into his bedroom to change.


Naina peered up through her long lashes when she heard the slam of the bedroom doors closing, Oh he had left. Her soft pink lips curled downwards into a small frown, She now understood why she hesitated before entering. The atmosphere between them now was normal as ever but still a little tense even though they were back to the way they usually were but still it wasn't the same as before, Same as before she had learnt of her brother's death. Her eyes hardened as flashes of her past heartless actions towards him ran through her mind, Sadness and pain rushed through her body pulling her deeper down to the depths of despair.

However before she could think more about it, The light brown doors of the bedroom opened and her eyes snapped up in the direction of the bedroom to find her mentor looking dashing as ever in a maroon shirt and light blue jeans. "Your right cadet??" He tried to make his voice sound angry and strong but it ended up being very weak and clearly showing how embarrassed he was feeling at that moment. Quickly he struggled on buttoning the cuffs of his shirt, He was even having such a hard time in doing such a very easy task! He glanced up at her out of the corners of his eyes to find her staring at him unreadable face but he knew her too well to understand that she was trying to hide something from him.

With a small sigh, He knew that it was none of his business to ask her about it. "I hope ke aap agaye aise nahi karne gi? Warna-aah? I mean?Tum aisa karogi to? Ah-" He coughed a little loudly trying to stop himself from saying anything more and making an idiot out of himself, fiddling with collar of his shirt while a crimson flush spread up from under his collar. Turning his eyes back to his cuffs, He looked at his right hand and lifted it up to button it.

As he finally buttoned the cuff of his shirt, He regained composure over himself and shifted to the right to be in front of her to ask her the question that just entered his mind. "um?Anyway Cadet Singh, Aap yahan kyun ayi? Aap Brigadier ke bhare main kuch bol rahi thi?" He trailed off tilting his head up to look at her for an answer. She nodded her eyes looking anywhere but at him yet again for some reason.

"Haan Sir, Brigadier Chandok ne aapko urgently milna chathe hai"

Rajveer nodded "Thank you Cadet, Aap jaa sakte hai?" Staring at her uniform "I'm pretty sure, Aap ki classes suru ho chuke hai"

With a nod, She swiftly turned around on the sole of her heels and marched towards the door not noticing his serious stare on her retreating back. Pulling the door open she stepped outside the room and closed the door behind her softly, Naina stood with her back to the door for a second then shot off into the corridor.

She placed her forehead against the cold brick wall finally letting the crimson flush spread across her face, She couldn't believe she had just seen him with like that! Were things going to be very awkward between them from now on! She bit her lower lip lightly but let go as the ends of her lips started to twitch upwards, She moved her forehead from the wall and rested against her back against the wall. Covering the grin on her lips with her right hand, She couldn't help but laugh at the weird yet embarrassing situation before.

The flash of a flustered Rajveer Sir flashed in her mind making her chuckle. She smiled gently letting her hand fall off from her face and beside her body, She had to admit that Rajveer sir did have a very well-muscled body. She blushed slightly moving her eyes to the ground in a unnoticeable shy manner. "Naina!" She jumped slightly whirling around to find a cute petite young woman running towards her.

"Tu kaha apna mobile out of reach karke baithi thi?..maine academy mein har jagah tera signal dhundha?" The cute girl complained waving her phone around in circles indicating how many times she had ran around the academy.

Naina raised an elegant eyebrow at her perky friend, Pooja. "Kyun?" She asked ignoring Pooja's question to which she got a tired sigh from her perky friend. "saare cadets milke huda ka signal katne waale hai?.. chal chalke dekhte hai" Pooja replied with a mischievous grin. Naina rolled her eyes with her a slight smirk on her lips as she let her friend lead the way.

When she and Pooja passed by Captain Rajveer's room, A ghost of smile made its way to Naina's lips. Shaking her head as flashes of her reaction before ran around her mind in circles.

She had tried to keep her eyes on his face but they strained to move away. Her eyes swiftly looked down at the ground when he had turned to look at her. She could feel his eyes boring holes on her head as she stared at the floor.
Her lips quirked upwards when he again reminded me of the fact that she had seen him half naked. She slowly looked up to find him fixing the collar of his shirt and trying to change the subject.

She unconsciously crossed her arms over her chest when the image of him on top of her appeared in her mind. "Naina!" Pooja called again as Naina snapped out of her thoughts and followed Pooja while her friend complained about ignoring her. Naina rolled her eyes and strode straight towards the Caf leaving Pooja a few steps behind her.

Why was she acting so silly all of the sudden?


Rajveer sighed for the umpteenth time when he opened the doors of his room and walked out to hear a familiar perky voice of one his female cadets, he glanced at the other end of the corridor to find Pooja and Naina walking side by side towards the cafeteria. His eyes lingered on Naina for a while before he swiftly locked his door and turned towards the other direction and walked off.

'Please, Mujhe kya hua woh yaad nahi aani chaiye jab mai uske saath akela hu' He thought quietly, sighing deeply yet again.




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Posted: 20 January 2010 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shiropa




Finally the mission had completed and all had one week left before returning back to the academy. Everybody checked themselves in a hotel as that looked the best resort.


Everyone retired to their desiccated rooms and decided to sleep off all their hard work of so many days. But amongst them were three devilish minds who were not ready to sleep off anything.


Pooja handed Naina her room keys and left.  She picked up her bag and made her way towards room 1052. All the time three constant eyes watched her every move.


As she reached the 10th floor she was surprised to see there were all the executive suites. There had to be a mistake but Pooja hadn't even given her the time to ask anything and she was feeling tired. She simply walked towards the room and at last when found it she fiddled with the key. She heard the lock unclick but the door didn't open so she tried again. The same thing happened so she tried again. The third time she pushed the door hard and it barged open.


As she nearly fell inside she stood in her tracks. Her mouth remained half open and her eyes became wide with horror. She was not alone in the room and the person who was with her was also in the same state of mind.


It was none other than Captain Rajveer who was standing in front of her in nothing but a towel.


Rajveer: (shocked and embarrassed) Cadet Singh what are you doing here?


Naina: (turns her eyes away with embarrassment) I'm?I'm sorry sir, per mujhe kaha gaya tha ke yeh mera karma hai


Rajveer: What! (struggled to cover himself)


Naina: Ha sir lagta hai koi mistake hogayee hogi (looks towards him)


Rajveer: Cadet Singh about turn!


She quickly turned away from him closing her eyes. It was the first time she saw him like this and boy was she enjoying it. She knew it was wrong but she couldn't help it.


Rajveer: (began searching around nervously) Ek to wo Yudi naajaane meri bag leke kaha chala gaya (tripped over the sofa in excitement)


Naina: (turned around) Are sir sambhaalke, me aapki madad kardu?


Rajveer: (struggled to get up and keeping his towel on at the same time) No thanks Cadet Singh I'm fine.


Naina: Sir mujhe lagta hai ke mujhe jaake Yudi ko dhundle na chaheeye


She opened the door half way when a frantic Rajveer ran towards it and closed it immediately


Rajveer: Tum jaake Yudi ko kahogee ke me oska intezaar karaha hu or wo sab kya sochenge? Cadet Singh tum kahi nahi jaarahee.


Absent mindedly their proximity had increased which made Naina's heart skip a beat.


Naina: If you insist sir.


Rajveer realized what he was doing and he quickly moved away from her. Just then another piece of horror was waiting for them. The door bell rang.


Rajveer: Oh no! ab kya hoga?


Naina: Sir shayad Yudi hoga. Me darwaaza kholti hu


Rajveer: Cadet Singh halt! Agar hame ek saath is kamre me is haalat me kisee ne dekh liya to naajaane kya hoga


Naina: isme itnee bari problem kya hai sir?


He is about to answer the ignorant woman when the door bell rang again.


Rajveer: kya kare? Kya kare? (moved around with agitation) me jaake kamre me chup jaata hu?NAHIN! Tum jaake kamre me chup jao?per mere kapre? Mujhe apne kapre dedo (absent mindedly goes to remove her clothes and she is awestruck) My God kya karaha hu me (slaps his forehead) Tum bus jao yahase!


Naina: calm down. Me jaarahee hu.


She went to the adjoining room and once she was behind closed doors he went to answer the door. He was clearly annoyed when he saw who it was.


Alekh: (saw him in the towel) Sorry apun ghalat waqt pe aagaya lekin sir, ek problem hai.


Rajveer: kesee problem Cadet Alekh?


Alekh: sir wo (looks around) kya apun andar aake baat karsakta hai


Rajveer hesitates for a while wondering whether to allow him or not but then he would get suspicious so reluctantly he let him in.


Alekh began discussing his problem and Rajveer was constantly on the edge as he wanted Alekh to leave quickly. It looked like his problems weren't going to be solved easily as there was another ring on the door. Rajveer wanted to ignore it but Alekh went and opened the door anyways.


Rajveer: Cadet Huda, tum yaha kya karahe ho?


Huda: sorry sir per kya huwa ke mere room ka T.V kharaab hogaya hai or ek bohat hee interesting programme aaraha tha


Rajveer: to phir customer services me complain karo. Yaha kyu aaye ho?


Huda: (notices Rajveer in a towel) sir aap aise kyu ghoom rahe hai?


Rajveer: (looks down towards himself and then looks towards Huda sternly) sawaal pehle maine poocha hai.


Huda: sir maine complain ki hai per jab tak wo theek hoga tab tak wo programme khatam hojaaehga. Please sir mujhe yaha dekhne dijye.


Rajveer had no choice. Huda went towards the bedroom and Rajveer panicked as Naina was in there. He told him to watch the T.V in the hall. It wouldn't disturb them. Then Rajveer resumed back with Alekh making sure he left soon.


After five minutes there was another ring and Rajveer got really agitated. He decided that whoever it was he would definitely kill them.


Yudi: sorry sir I got lost in this big hotel and?


Rajveer: just forget it Yudi.


Yudi: I'll put your bag in the bedroom


Rajveer: NO! (all three looked at him in amazement) I mean yeh bag mujhe dedo me khud rakh dunga


Yudi: sir me rakh deta hu


Rajveer: Yudi maine kaha na ke me rakh dunga


Yudi: per sir (attention moved to the T.V) Oh wow yeh programme (threw the bag in excitement and it hit Rajveer's foot)


He groaned in pain and Yudi just went and sat down joining Huda. Rajveer just stared at the three boys in amazement that most conveniently they invited themselves in the room. Great just great. He picked up his bag and limped towards the bedroom and dropped the bag on the floor once inside.


Naina: (emerging from the bathroom) Sir koun tha wo?


Rajveer: (startled) mujhe darra na band karogee please


Naina: kya sir aap ko bhi darr lagta hai (bursts out laughing)


Rajveer: will you stop laughing


She continued laughing annoying Rajveer more


Rajveer: Alright that's it. Get out!


Naina: Are you sure sir ke me baahar chali jao?


Rajveer: yes jao yahase


Naina: as you wish


She was about to open the door when Rajveer remembered about the three boys sitting outside and quickly came to prevent her from opening.


Rajveer: tum yahase kahi nahi jaarahee


Naina: Sir make up your mind. Pal me aap mujhe jaane ko kehte hai or pal me?


Rajveer: offo ek to tum sab milke mujhe paagal kardoge. (held his head with frustration)


Naina: Come on sir relax. Aap jaante hai aap ki is haalat pe ek shair yaad aata hai. (she cleared her throat)

Aapko dekha to aisa laga

Aapko dekha to aisa laga

Ke sharmao bhi to kese

Kahi towel jagese khisak na jaaye

Haiiiii dil sambhle ga bhi to kese


Rajveer: (awestruck by her audacity) Cadet Naina Singh (clenched teeth) is waqt tumhe mazaak sujraha hai. Tum jaantee nahi hum kis musibat me phase huwe hai


Naina: musibat? (confused face) kesee musibat sir?


Rajveer: Uggh! Just shut up or mujhe soch ne do ke hum kya kare


Naina: me suggest karu? (Rajveer gave her the look) Chalye T.V dekhte hai. Time pass hojaaehga


Rajveer: Tumhe T.V?Oh God kaha phas gaya me (goes forward to pick up his bag)


Naina: Are?


Rajveer: (irritated) What?


Naina: Sir wo bag?


Rajveer: kya huwa meri bag ko?


Naina: sir yeh bag meri hai


Rajveer: Cadet Singh yeh bag me baahar se lekar aaya hu


Naina: Sir yeh bag meree hai


Rajveer: Naina mera dimaag bohat kharaab hai is waqt to don't drive my patience


Naina: sir please meree baat maanye


Rajveer: khole ke dekh lete hai


Naina panicked as she couldn't let him see the stuff she had in her bag. She rushed towards it and prevented him from opening it.


Naina: Sir yeh meree bag hai or me jaantee hu


Rajveer: Cadet Singh bag ko choro


Naina: nahi chorungi


Rajveer: nahi chorogi?


Naina: nahi chorungi


He went to snatch the bag from her. She ran around the room


Naina: Are sir sambhaalke aapka towel giraha hai


He stopped to adjust his towel which gave Naina a chance to escape out of the room. He didn't even get a chance to warn her about the guys outside.


Three guys: Hi Naina! (then reality struck and they all stood up with shock) NAINA?


She didn't know what to do or how to react


Rajveer: Guys wo mera bag lekar bhaag rahee hai


Naina: Sir yeh bag mera hai, aap sunne ko tayaar kyu nahi


Yudi: Sir aapka bag to mere paas yaha hai (showed him a bag in his hand)


Rajveer: kya! Per tum ne to yeh bag mujhe?


Yudi: wahi to sir aap yeh bag leye bina hee andar chalegaye


Rajveer retraced his steps and he was definitely sure that he did take his bag with him but here Yudi told him something else. Perhaps he was too stressed to think straight. He grabbed the bag and went back inside.


All three boys burst out laughing giving each other high fives.


Naina: aise paagalo ki tarha hass kyu rahe ho?


Huda: Are baat hee kuch aisee hai, per tujhe bataenge to tu bharak jaaehgee phullen


Naina: just tell me. Wese bhi aaj kaafi parde ut chuke hai to or sahi


Alekh: Wese Naina tu yaha kya karahee hai


All three of them cocked their eyebrows at her, teasing her.


Naina: wo me?uh?me jo bhi karahee hu tum logo ko osse kya?


Yudi: I think plan kuch ziada hee aage bargaya guys (he bit his tongue whilst Huda and Alekh flipped the back of his head)


Naina asked what plan and Huda tried to cover up but she gave them the sharp look and he revealed everything. He told her of how they on purpose made her come to Rajveer's room and they took so long to return with his bag.


Naina: you guys are the limit. Khamakha pareshaan kiya bechare sir ko


Huda: beechaaree to tu hame lagrahee hai. Onhe towel me dekh ke teree kya haalat huwi hogi


Naina: (she went crimson red but then anger took over) Oh just shut up! Isse pehle ke onhe is prank ke baare me pata chaljaaye, its best that we leave.


They all left together and then Yudi asked Naina to check whether everything was secure in her bag. She checked whilst the three boys stood at a distance looking upon her cheekily as if they were waiting for something. She opened it and was stunned.


Naina: YUDI!


She yelled at him and saw him run. She chased after him. Then he told her that instead of running after him it was best she returned the bag back to Captain Rajveer.


She ran back with desperate need and barged inside his bedroom.


Rajveer: (nearly dropped his towel) Cadet Singh! What the hell are you doing here again?


Naina: (found it hard to speak due to seeing him in the towel again) Sir wo bag....actually wo bag?


Rajveer: Oh for God's sake yeh bag mera hai


Naina: nahi wo bag mera hai


Rajveer: Naina tum paagal hogayee ho


She wasoutraged and grabbed hold of the bag.


Rajveer: (grabbed the strap) Naina leave the bag


Naina: nahi chorungi


Rajveer: Nahi chorogi?


Naina: nahi chorungi


He tried to snatch the bag forcefully. Yet once again she managed to run away from him and he chased her out of the room.


Huda: (returned back) Sir aap phirse?


Rajveer: yeh larki ek dum paagal hogayi hai


Huda: paagal to ho hee gayee hai. Aakhir kaun larki aapko aise towel me dekh ke nahi hogi


Naina halted and wanted to bury herself in the ground. Rajveer also felt conscious.


Huda: I mean you can't blame the girl for constantly coming?


Naina: Huda I'm going to kill you! (she threw the bag with annoyance and to Rajveer's misfortune it hit his foot again making him groan in pain)


She kept chasing Huda through the lobby until finally she made him apologize forcefully.


Few minutes later?


Naina: Oh no! me apna bag phirse sir ke kamre me bhool gayi


She just stood there ruminating on the fact of how she'll be able to face him and his self again clad only in a towel.


The End.

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